Billy Wilder THE APARTMENT (1960): Screenwriting Masterclass

This video essay uncovers screenwriting tips and techniques in Billy Wilder's screenwriting masterclass THE APARTMENT (1960), Academy Award winner for Best Picture and one of the highest rated screenplays by the WGA.
Screenwriting tips in Billy Wilder's THE APARTMENT:
00:00 Introduction
00:24 Dialogue
03:44 Show, Don't Tell
04:52 The Worst That Could Happen
06:36 Setups
07:51 The Midpoint
09:35 Reversals
11:00 Reveal Character
13:46 Dramatic Irony
15:29 Subtext
17:26 A Rollercoaster of Emotions
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THE APARTMENT (1960)
Screenplay by Billy Wilder & I.A.L. Diamond.
Directed by Billy Wilder.
#15 on the Writers Guild of America's list of the 101 Greatest Screenplays
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[@BluesImprov]

Absolutely brilliant "Masterclass". I, like thousands of others, am working on writing a mystery novel. I believe many of these techniques will be very helpful in that process as well. So glad I watched this and will be "attending" the rest of your classes very soon!

[@ScriptSleuth]

That's so cool to hear! Thanks for the comment!

[@frannieo1707]

Script-wise, acting-wise, directing-wise, there has never been a better movie, cinema-wise.

[@ScriptSleuth]

That's the way it crumbles, I guess. 😉

[@HistorywithHannibal]

You're beginning to sound like Mr. Kirkeby already

[@UTuberz04]

I’m gonna offer you a film you can’t refuse. The Godfather is the greatest so far!

[@leonoranicolaysen2784]

Very wise. 😂

[@danielgregg2530]

But it still ain't no CASABLANCA.

[@pablosonic892]

Did you hear me, The Apartment? I absolutely ADORE you.

[@022171]

Shut up and deal!

[@ScriptSleuth]

The master of subtext!

[@elainelosee7974]

@@022171 I love the scene, together, shut up and deal. 😊 🙏 😊 🙏 😊 🙏 Thanks friend, you're wonderful 👏 ❤ 💖

[@ryanmcgrath4967]

Shut up and post.

[@dneiss89]

"Show, don't tell and respect the audience. They'll love you for it." And that's the reason why I love Billy Wilder and so many of his movies, especially The Apartment.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Most definitely. He was truly one of the masters.

[@lurchileb]

He learned that from Lubitsch

[@persiandrum9871]

I saw this masterful film in the mid 1990s, at a Billy Wilder retrospective held at the National Film Theatre in London. As well as the laughter, I recall the audience (mainly young adults) audibly gasping at some of the diamond-sharp dialogue, being unaccustomed to hearing such witty, economical exchanges between the characters. I'll never forget that film.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Sounds like an incredible experience! Thanks for sharing.

[@BlueSaphire70]

Thank you for this analysis. I absolutely love The Apartment. I can't imagine a more romantic movie and yet the lovers do not even share a kiss. Billy Wilder was a genius. He uses the English language to amazing effect. Though he was not a native speaker, his powers of observation were exceptional.

[@elijordan6048]

This is a breath of fresh air for screenwriter's

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Eli! And thanks for watching.

[@ML-yw4hv]

One of the most beautiful films I've ever seen. Thanks for this Masterclass.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for tuning in, Mateo!

[@BrendaGarcia-ty2ml]

LOVE THIS, especially the emotional rollercoaster ending.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Awesome! Thank you for watching.

[@ScriptSleuth]

And welcome to the Script Sleuth gang!

[@nealhurwitz6340]

Great great flick... trouble is she never had the hots for him... But the ending is OK: she looks at him fondly... Anyway, Lemmon and Shirley were fab and so were all the others!!!

[@Adrak-Hiano]

this is criminally underviewed! awesome job!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Adrak!

[@Ovidius1979]

The Apartment just keep climbing on my "Top 100-movies of all time list" every time I see or think about the movie.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Definitely!

[@harshamuddu4987]

This is a really beautiful analysis of the greatest screenplay ever written!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Harsha. Really, Billy Wilder and I.A.L. Diamond did all the work. They made it very easy to point out!

[@LudwigWan]

+1

[@thesagar2068]

this movie is just brilliant brilliant brilliant... I so love the last scene.. where they finally sit down to complete the card game.. just so much of a satisfying ending.. warms my heart everytime I see ...

[@ScriptSleuth]

Yes! And I love the subtext of when Fran says, "Shut up and deal."

[@jlasf]

I know "The Apartment" well, but thanks to TCM, I recently watched it twice. It just occurred to me that Jeff Sheldrake (Fred MacMurray) is actually the pivotal character in the script. He is the object that determines the actions of the two principal characters - he rekindles his affair with Kubelik and promotes Baxter. Both are defined by their relationship to him and both are motivated by the chance of advancement - to being an executive or being a wife. They are both willing to compromise their principles to achieve their goals. In both cases, Sheldrake is the key - so to speak. We know Baxter and Kublik are both good people because of the perfect casting. Jack Lemmon - Wilder's favorite actor - is an everyman. He is good, but corrupted by the chance of advancement - as is she. Shirley MacLaine brings an aura of sweetness - she wears a flower - but is also driven to her goal. It's vital we buy into their inner goodness because the denouement is when they both find their "better angels." They both turn their backs on Sheldrake. Lemmon walks - MacLaine runs. Billy Wilder gave Fred MacMurray his two best roles - here and in "Double Indemnity." Usually cast as the nice guy, both times he is cast against type. I wonder if Wilder's cynicism is at work here; beneath every "nice" guy is a stinker. The end is very satisfying because Lemmon and Kubelik become the people we know they can be. They don't just find each other - they find themselves. Thanks for your insight about the script. I hadn't noticed the echoing of words back and forth. Certainly, Wilder does that in "Some Like it Hot" as well.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Excellent insight. It might be time to watch the movie again!

[@leonoranicolaysen2784]

We expected Fred McMurray to be a good guy. The shock value of his duplicity was a big part of the movie.

[@PatrolOfficer161]

Billy Wilder's dialogue in 'Sunset Boulevard', "Where you been keeping yourself?" "I haven't been". Classic.

[@shashpicious20]

This analysis deserves an Oscar just like the original screenplay of the film

[@ScriptSleuth]

Ha! If only...

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[@12martin12rojas]

I probably watch it once a year so will watch it this weekend if I have time. I hate knowing there are other great films I have never heard of so I will mention How green was my valley, on the waterfront, the bicycle thief, these are probably my favorite non color films so far.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Those are all great films that you mention! 😎

[@elliottroses]

You deserve many more subscribers than you have. Quality all around

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Elliott!

[@adespade119]

I've always thought that good directors like to play with our emotions.This is an excellent film I saw many years ago, I plan on watching again.

[@ScriptSleuth]

It's a good point you make. Their #1 job is to make us feel. That's it.

[@rosaenriquez4921]

I have watched this film MULTIPLE times; I don't remember how many and I love it each time! I've even watched some of the scenes in Spanish and some with the Spanish sub-titles...they don't necessarily say the same things!

[@ScriptSleuth]

@@rosaenriquez4921 I bet a lot of the humor gets lost in translation. How would you translate when Mildred says, "Mack the Knife"?

[@embossed64]

Best movie ever.

[@Zollaho]

I discovered the film ten years ago. Though I was already a fan of Billy Wilder, it was revelation. I Watched the film about 12 times in a row, spotting each time other parts of the plot. There is something else to his story writing, brought to a top in this film. The banalities of everyday life at work or home, and hardships of social status make the showcase playground for the true existential route of the 2 main characters. Their private struggles become meaningful beyond the happenings around them, regardless of public morality. This makes the audience complicit to their behaviors, taking side for true moral values of respect and sincerity, indifferent to mere reputation.

[@SOXLUVER777]

One of Wilder’s themes- disparaging of shallowness and greed in society

[@tttddd5110]

So many underwhelming videos on this from much larger channels. Brilliant underrated video

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Tom!

[@judeshill9317]

How in the Lord's name did this old- movie loving 68 YO 🦇 miss this one? Beautiful.

[@shankerr9163]

It takes a decade to understand writing this clip is one of the good video essay I watched I really do know how difficult to understand a film studying wiese.... good job all the best

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thank you, Shanker!

[@hauntedbytheliving1175]

Wonderful work… Wilder blows me away, I see something new every time I watch his pictures.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Agreed, and thanks for watching!

[@jamesdrynan]

Let's not forget leaving the best for the last line..." Shut up and deal, " and from Some Like it Hot, " Well, nobody's perfect! "

[@ScriptSleuth]

Masterclass in final lines of dialogue!

[@patriciafinn5717]

Genius..i have watched it 10 times with glee

[@nickahlborn367]

This is a great insight. Thanks. The craziest thing: MacLaine had said that Wilder only had maybe half of the script done when shooting started. He was literally writing to finish the script as they were already shooting it! She said he would take bits of what he heard around the set and put it into the script. Example. MacLaine was at lunch with one of the other actresses. They were commiserating about relationships. MacLaine said to this other actress, "Why do people have to fall in love with people, anyway? Why can't they fall in love with kangaroos?". Wilder overheard that and an iteration of that went into the script (which you showed in this video). It's a lesson in leaving yourself open to the gifts others can give you when you're writing. So often we're told the writer needs to write EVERYTHING, and have the story airtight before anything else can be done. A great film like this shows that it's a process of collaboration by many, and that every story evolves. Leave yourself open to those bits of gold.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Exactly! The best collaboration is just pure magic.

[@keithyork8226]

The perfect movie. ❤️

[@user-gd8ej6ni2k]

ワイルダー監督作品で最も好きな映画。レモンとマクレーンというキャスティング。年末には必ず見たくなる。

[@ChantalA489]

The Apartment still holds up well almost 70 years after it was released. It is a great and funny film!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Yes!

[@billyjosephandthearmyoflove]

An insightful and worthy analysis of one of my favorite, if not absolute favorite, movies of all time! Thank you! I find it interesting that the subtext when Miss Olsen reveals Sheldrake's faithless ways, perhaps comes as much from her blithe (and clearly drunk) delivery (that is, from the actor's and director's choices) as from the words themselves---which, to my mind, highlights the deeply collaborative form of the film medium (even as, in this case, one of the collaborators is collaborating with himself!).

[@tinasan3870]

Eddie Adams was really quite good in the role. Her acting is on par with the rest of this outstanding cast of actors. I never knew that the "Murial Cigar Girl" had so much actor training and experience. As a kid, I mostly remember her in those commercials in the 50s and 60s.

[@lindajohnson4204]

@@tinasan3870 She is great. She's not just a "mean, vengeful woman"; she is a deeply hurt girl, thrown away, like Fran is being thrown away. Her love has been for nothing. Her hurt reflects Fran's hurt, like a Greek chorus of all the people hurt that way. She is "going down" in the world, but not without a parting blow of disabusing Fran of his lies, like a friend, and bringing down this predator.

[@gregsalcedo4857]

Can't believe it has been 62 years. I saw this movie at the year it was first released and I can still remember how I reacted. I was shocked that the doctor slapped her several times and dragged her to walk around the apartment. All this to wake her up from her sleep induced state. And I felt good at the end when Shirley said to Jack, 'shut up and deal'. I was 15

[@ScriptSleuth]

What a great story! Thanks for sharing.

[@sanzo21]

Amazing analysis. If you think about, all these points are not really complicated and could be argued as things every filmmaker should know. However, the difference is that Wilder does it MASTERFULLY

[@ScriptSleuth]

Yes, he does! Thanks for the comment.

[@francismeletzky6635]

So great that you chose Appartement! Keeps it immortal. And your advice is great, too

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for the comment!

[@tollertyp7230]

Cinema history is full of masterclass films. I watched many, but nobody could watch them all. So thank you for this little demonstration.😊

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching and leaving a comment! ❤️

[@10Vernonplace]

Your analysis is so clear and clean and easy for me to understand! Thank you!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching!

[@rezanasseri2587]

I love this film

[@ScriptSleuth]

Me, too!

[@gpg9516]

On New Year’s Eve, watching Fran’s face change as she realizes she HAS finally fallen in love with someone nice is a repeatedly pause-and-replay moment. MacLaine’s performance should have earned the Oscar.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Most definitely!

[@gpg9516]

@@ScriptSleuth After her almost imperceptible smile when she says ‘the nerve’ the whole mood changes and the dialogue becomes more playful. Wilder’s writing is always sharp as a tack. He was one of a kind.

[@Woodman-Spare-that-tree]

@@gpg9516. And the subtle change in Fran’s face when Sheldrake offers her the 100 dollar bill. She doesn’t scream and shout. Fran stays quiet but you can see what Fran is thinking. Wonderful actress.

[@gpg9516]

@@Woodman-Spare-that-tree spot on. Some actors can move through a scene with minimal dialogue but speak volumes with their facial expressions. MacLaine’s almost imperceptible smile when Sheldrake says that Baxter quit tells the audience her true feeling before Fran herself realizes it just a minute or two later. Wilder can pack more meaning and visual impact into a scene than most other directors. When Baxter defends Fran’s honor and takes a punch for his effort he ends up on the floor near the fireplace. The shot includes an out-of-it Baxter next to his little Christmas tree and then Fran leans in to kiss him on the forehead for being a stand up guy. Wilder plays a painful love triangle against the Christmas theme. Another pivotal moment in a film that fires on all eight cylinders with subtlety and intelligence.

[@skabrui1555]

My favourite film, apparently simple but masterpiece technically

[@Skanda1111]

The ringa ding ding dialogue is also used in the movie one two three by Mr.Wilder. it is a masterpiece!!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for the nugget!

[@danielgregg2530]

Good analysis. True that he is explaining what should be Writing 101 using a masterpiece, but still -- good take on the subject.

[@ojacobsen3727]

For screenwriting, I have found no other channel as useful. great stuff for script doctoring, and injecting life into a weak draft.

[@ScriptSleuth]

That's so great to hear! 🙂

[@kevinkoch6900]

Can't wait to buy it on 4K March 8th.

[@ScriptSleuth]

😮

[@94460706]

I love this movie, it is perhaps my favorite of all time

[@ScriptSleuth]

It's up there for me, too!

[@tinasan3870]

I think The Apartment is one of the top ten American films of all time. It's that good.

[@ScriptSleuth]

I really can't argue with that!

[@Storyograph]

I just watched this movie for the first time because of this video. Thanks! It was really good!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Wow, that was fast. Thanks for watching!

[@Storyograph]

@@ScriptSleuth Haha! I should clarify. I watched this movie yesterday so that I could watch your premiere without any spoilers. It was fun watching you pick out all the great dialogue in this one.

[@ScriptSleuth]

@@Storyograph Very cool. Thanks again!

[@godzillamanstreb524]

Excellent….in my top 5 films♥️♥️

[@Alexandra-hw7uo]

Thank you!! So much information!

[@ScriptSleuth]

You're welcome! Thank you for watching!

[@geoffh2560]

What a great masterclass - thoroughly enjoyed it. This movie is right up there as one of my all-time favourites - I would add Casting as another key ingredient in the mix alongside screenwriting.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Casting is definitely an underestimated but key ingredient! Glad you enjoyed the video.

[@joeanimalskull4243]

"Some Like it Hot" still keeps Billy Wilder's best picture - hands down.

[@ScriptSleuth]

That one will also be analyzed at some point!

[@LudwigWan]

Great video sire 🤝❤️

[@felipelima8261]

Very good the analisy

[@siddhika2221]

I must say I really enjoyed watching this video. There is so much observation and insight, very engaging. Thank you for this !

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thank you for watching!

[@eduardodifarnecio2336]

Excellent and inspiring analysis. Never thought of studying a movie by exclusively following the characters actions and dialogue. Wonder what you’d have to say about Wilders other masterpieces: Sunset Boulevard, Double Indemnity! Subscribed, naturally.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Sunset Boulevard is on the way!

[@elainelosee7974]

Great Wilder, all his Films are, exciting, excellent. Thank you for the Information about the script.

[@peterhoughton3770]

He can underwrite subtext because he's also the director. So he knows exactly where and what the beats are. And casting, my god. He nailed it with casting. Everyone in this film is brilliant. The suits, Fred Macmurray... Maclaine is completely gorgeous and Jack Lemmon is pure genius. He manages to do quite a lot physically, with his face, his comedy... but is always truthful. I first saw this in the 70s around the age of 12. I think it was the dialogue that got me... and I was in love with Maclaine.

[@ScriptSleuth]

I would have loved to see this in the theater!

[@reeldigital]

This is fantastic work!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Cheers!

[@IoriYagamiOroche]

Great work!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Cheers!

[@aysoodaagh3167]

Your channel is wonderful. I subscribed!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thank you, Aysooda!

[@iododendron3416]

Just discovered your channel, really looking forward to watching all your other analyses on great movies.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for tuning in!

[@TheAmandeepMehmi]

Great video. The Apartment is amongst the all time great films. Also, do have a link to the music you used?

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Amandeep! All the music tracks are from KZbin Audio Library. 🙂

[@reelramon1014]

I'm currently taking a feature film screenwriting course, trying to learn the basics, and I've gotten a lot of valuable information from this excellent Masterclass. Oh, to write like Billy Wilder! It helps that The Apartment is one of my all-time favourite movies.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Glad to hear it was useful!

[@tedpert8786]

Very nice analysis!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks, Ted! Hope you're doing well.

[@paulbattenbough1002]

my favourite movie ever.

[@luiz_ed76]

Awesome video! I will rewatch it to take notes. Thanks a lot, continue doing this amazing work.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching!

[@mireillelebeau2513]

The values, if Sheldrake hadn't remembered his values the whole film wouldn't have made sense. Values are at the center core of building good movies.

[@kirkengstrom917]

I think you mean Baxter. Sheldrake has no values.

[@krishna201107]

Excellent Analysis and very Informative. Thanks so much

[@ScriptSleuth]

Cheers, Vasanth!

[@XX-gy7ue]

GENIUS

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching!

[@SanQuake]

You earned a sub and you definitely deserve more fame! Hats off to you.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for the sub, it really means a lot! I definitely don't want fame. Just want to make the screenwriting community stronger. But thank you for your nice comment.

[@ernestconcepcion531]

Happy 2023, everyone! Watched this masterpiece a few days after New Year with subtitles so I can read through the dialogue as well - it's pitch-perfect

[@ScriptSleuth]

Happy New Year!

[@tomasitoumali4634]

SS truly a master with best lessons! Bravo1

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thank you, Tomasito!

[@alexutzu24ianuarie]

Very well made

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching!

[@poetcomic1]

I was just thinking about all your points and the single one I most miss in modern film is 'the emotional roller coaster'. This would SEEM to be 'plot-driven' but in reality it is even more so CHARACTER driven.

[@ScriptSleuth]

What other films would you like to see me cover? Let me know in a comment below!

[@MrResearcher122]

Rashomon, Kurosawa. And any of the classics of Yasujirō Ozu.

[@ScriptSleuth]

@@MrResearcher122 Certainly in the queue!

[@robertmoraga1501]

1979's Breaking Away! Steve Tesich's screenplay deserved its Oscar that year. With storytelling similar to Wilder, finding both its humor and pathos in the poignancy of everyday life. "I didn't want him to be this miserable; just a little was all I asked for?"

[@ScriptSleuth]

@@robertmoraga1501 Great suggestion! I definitely need to watch that film again.

[@lemorab1]

Chinatown 1974

[@laetitiapohl138]

this is so good

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching, Laetitia!

[@laetitiapohl138]

@@ScriptSleuth you're welcome! hope this channel will soon get the recognition it deserves

[@hoseinbagheri7219]

Very useful tnx a lot❤❤🔥👌

[@ScriptSleuth]

You're welcome, Hosein. Thank you for watching!

[@romeadnan6735]

Am don't know why cherly maclien not get the Oscar in this film she was so much wonderful

[@janinifarris4414]

I absolutely love your break out however I would have added then at the end when she was running to the apartment that her heart was excited with realizing she was in love and that actually happened to me anyway that's with my take away from running down the street anyway that's my type of way and I would love to maybe one day join plus I think that you're very in tune with the elements of what makes a exciting cohesive storyline work and so I thank you again

[@Brisco1]

@13:51 When the audience knows something that a character doesn't, that's not dramatic irony. That's called "superior position".

[@Statuskuo75]

have a universal theme and add little pointers to it. Something everyone understands. In "The Apartment" it's "be a mensch" In the end Baxter regains the importance of being a human when he refuses to trade his morals for status.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Excellent!

[@Paul_Wetor]

I've seen this movie many times and am amazed how it all fits together. (The fruitcake from an old girlfriend becomes the hint that Fran is planning a long-term relationship with Baxter.) But there seems to be a missing scene near the end, on New Year's Eve. Fran is at the bar with Sheldrake but she's got this blank look on her face. Why? She's gotten her man and is out in public with him. Does she realize that now that she's caught him, it feels empty? They're at the same bar in the same booth. But there's no explanation for the blank stare. Something should trigger it, but we don't see what it is.

[@giovannaiamele8782]

Very funny syory and Jack Lemmom is great!

[@PRR5406]

There's another piece in this film Edie Adams played Miss Olsen, Sheldrake's former mistress. At the time this film was made, Edie was married to comic genius Ernie Kovacs. If you don't know Ernie Kovacs, you should make the time to study his television work. Ernie and Jack Lemmon were best friends and spent hours and hours in each other's company. Billy Wilder loved working with Lemmon, Mr. and Mrs. Kovacs, MacLaine, and a few others. All of these actors and other film people (Lucille Ball and husband Gary Morton, Yves Montand, others) were together at Wilder's home for a party to celebrate the Milton Berle's adoption of a baby son. Edie and Ernie arrived in separate cars and left in separate cars, with Ernie taking her Chevy Corvair station wagon home. As he approached Santa Monica Blvd, the Corvair spun out and Ernie was killed instantly. It was Jack Lemmon who was called to positively identify the body.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Wow, what a story. Thanks for sharing!

[@SOXLUVER777]

Wow. Never knew…

[@busggs1200]

I love your videos (🇧🇷)

[@ScriptSleuth]

Obrigado!

[@bhutnath]

You skipped to mention the excellent scene where Bud shows Fran that he has a "big date tonight" to make Fran believe his intentions in a negative way in order to support her decision to stay on with the other relationship; and then he walks out crossing the "big date" to the shop to pick a book for the night. Excellent !

[@tedpert8786]

Very nicely explained!it’s always much better not to reveal the plot!

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for watching, Ted!

[@elessartelcontar6578]

Don’t forget IAL Diamond was co-writer!

[@lauriechen2762]

masterpeace

[@tedpert8786]

The ending was good! But not even a hug?

[@ScriptSleuth]

Subtext! 🙂

[@Dani_London]

This is an absolutely incredible video. Are you a professional screenwriter? Jesus, you are good. Thank you for your analysis and for sharing this excellent video with us :)) p.s. what a movie, am I right

[@ScriptSleuth]

Wow, what a kind comment! I am not a professional yet. The whole reason for starting this channel was to force myself to break down and analyze every scene of all these films. And, sure enough, I've noticed that my own writing has become so much better. Best education I could have ever asked for.

[@Dani_London]

@@ScriptSleuth Amazing stuff. Your analysis is seriously top notch. Kudos. You are going to achieve whatever it is you're out to achieve. Lastly, I just wanna say thanks again for sharing your work. This video was a joy to watch and I've been mulling it over since watching it and it's made me love this movie so much more so thank you :) I apppreciate you taking the time to reply too. Peace

[@ScriptSleuth]

Your great comment is exactly the reason I created this channel: to make the screenwriting community better.

[@Dani_London]

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[@HistorywithHannibal]

Any chance you can cover Billy Wilder's other great films? Double Indemnity and Some Like it Hot

[@ScriptSleuth]

Those are definitely on the list!

[@briancox9357]

Ace in the Hole.

[@briancox9357]

Ace in the Hole.

[@thundertower]

I forgot the movie loser from the 90s was heavily inspired by this movie, even the director admits it. That most of the important scenes in the movie was copied from this movie like fran getting overdose with pills and dora from loser getting roofied and staying over jason bigga house.

[@tonyblando8241]

Billy was so far ahead of the curve.

[@ScriptSleuth]

Yup. 😎

[@acidthunder1]

the odd couple, catch 22

[@mariusmeyer2852]

I just discovored your Channel and im in awe. Great

[@ScriptSleuth]

Thanks for joining, Marius!

[@StratsRUs]

It's a killer killer movie

[@ScriptSleuth]

What do you think is the best Billy Wilder film?

[@denniszenanywhere]

Thanks for doing this. I saw this for the nth time last night. Never get tired of it. The question is, how did Hollywood fall so hard from being the gold standard of good screenwriting to atrocious mediocre writing in the mid2000s? What happened to the quality of writing so common back then? I have watched classic Hollywood films 3 times a week for the past 3 months and I find many of them better written than the ones today? What happened? Btw, European movies have also not been particularly good of late and the Japanese have been out of it for many decades. Thanks to the Koreans for saving filmmaking and good storytelling. I have watched their films and dramas and I am impressed. The Koreans seem to have lorded it over filmmaking for the past 20 years.

[@ScriptSleuth]

@@denniszenanywhere Thanks for the comment. It's a great point you bring up. I think movies were better back then because they depended mainly on a good story to wow the audience. They didn't have special effects and CGI and Adobe After Effects to distract their focus. But who knows.

[@denniszenanywhere]

@@ScriptSleuth Yes, I agree. I guess I merely wanted to hear it from someone. I remember when James Cameron made a big deal of 3D filmmaking in Avatar. But that was a snoozefest for me. I was never into 3d filmmaking. I would say with confidence that technology has become a crutch to good storytelling.

[@rosaenriquez4921]

@@ScriptSleuth Do you not think, that along with having to depend on good writing because of no special effects etc, there were boundaries that had to be respected like language, sexual innuendo and so writers had to be pretty smart to insert certain issues without crossing said boundaries? In this film, no kiss at the end, but it doesn't take away in any form...just my opinion...

[@ScriptSleuth]

@@rosaenriquez4921 Great point, most definitely. Look at the heavy, sexual subtext in films like The Big Sleep, It Happened One Night, and North by Northwest. They got around censorship through clever writing. We can learn a lot from classic films.

[@iuliandoru5731]

Just Unic

[@robertplattner1636]

Can you do another Billy Wilder film Some Like It Hot?

[@ScriptSleuth]

Hells to the yes.

[@Woodman-Spare-that-tree]

If only they had spent a little more money and filmed this in colour. It’s a classic film, and Shirley should have won an Oscar.

[@leonoranicolaysen2784]

No. Why film it in color?