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Do you remember when we first met under the stars?
A gentle breeze, the scent of flowers in the air
Whispered words of love, exchanged in the quiet night
Like a dream, you and I, forever in each other's sight.
Your eyes, your smile, they capture my heart
Every beat, every breath, you're a work of art
Even as time fades all things away
Our love will remain, come what may.
Promises for tomorrow, no matter the distance
Our love will conquer, through all existence
Though the world may change, our hearts will stay true
We'll meet again, when the morning sun breaks through.

[@RazielApollyon]

I respect the sentiment, and there's potential here- but it's still slightly off-putting due to the "uncanny valley" effect. It needs... not a lot, but at least a little bit of wistfulness or grit. Music is an evolved art, and human musicians, whether playing positive *or* negative music, undergo a lot of struggles in learning their trade- not just the physical pain and tedium of learning to play an instrument, and endless hours alone in intense focus, but also overcoming self-doubt, rejection and jealousy... there is a reason so many die young. All of that is the texture in the undertone of any great song.