Session1 : Essay | Master UPSC Essay & Ethics to Ace the Mains 2022|Free Workshop| by Vinay Sir

[@amarsaikia4901]

Breathing is the fundamental activity responsible for our existence at the same time most unnoticed activity. When we focus on our breathing it rejuvenates our conciousness and make us realise of our conscious existence. Thus help us in enhancing our concentration, focus and in other ways.

[@pratibhasingh08]

11. Artificial / illogical linkages between paragraphs. 12. Using too many figures of speech or similies. (Avoid Flowery languages) 13. Avoid contradictions and ironies 14. Use short sentences. 2 3 paragraphs in a page. Intro amd conclusion can be more lengthy as compared to body paragraphs. 15. Don't write irrelevant schemes or policies ..write your innovative solutions not GoI solutions.

[@falgunkatara2646]

Found it very useful & enlightened and tips were flattering like not to write obvious things, reiterating things and GS Preventive and it is more than that, with perishing originality and generality. Thank You Insight and Please upload all sessions if possible.

[@pavithrakanya7406]

The session was most useful one.plz come up with many more it will be useful

[@Insights_IAS]

Hello, this was session 1 of the free workshop. Please read the details here: www.insightsonindia.com/2022/07/28/master-upsc-essay-ethics-to-ace-the-mains-2022free-workshop-insights-ias/. Thank you!

[@Akashvka91]

Sir looks like Prabhu Deva ❤️❤️❤️ huge respect . 🙏 It was my first vedio

[@prajwalspouthamash]

Sir pls upload all the sessions

[@loveandlight5986]

5:09

[@ravindarsingh4880]

Sir so much important session and you provided us for free, so kind of you. Thank you so much sir 🙏🙏🙏

[@Insights_IAS]

You’re welcome! 😊

[@ryalisatyaabhiram4892]

Sir can you please share few books to develop a perspective for different essay themes.

[@pratibhasingh08]

Summary 1. Avoid I and You in the essay..replace it by one 2. Avoid spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in intro and thoughout the essay. Read and revise the essay 3. Good brainstorming for GS topics . Philosophical essays require less time in brainstorming. 4. Engaging flow and content is main focus 5. Give an overall perspective and original ideas in your essay 6. Avoid positive and negative + way forward approach in essay with sub headings. (Bipolar attitude :P ) 7. avoid cliché examples and come up with new and current affairs examples. 8. Use your optional examples only if relevant 9. Look beyond the topic and analyse. Do separate brainstorming for both the topics. 10. Over using of Indian contexts as examples or situations. Use global examples.

[@utkarshshukla6238]

Enlightening session

[@Insights_IAS]

Thank you! 😊