Hi, generally it is good presentation, but you confused the slide presentation and the explanation you are giving. Your audience, are they to follow what you are talking or to read the scripts you are showing on the screen. It would be convenient, if you would read the scripts directly as is on the screen.
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Hi Tesfamicael Yohannes. Many thanks for the feedback. The upcoming presentation will have more descriptions. In the current presentation, the intent was to elaborate slides through more talking as too much detail in the slide could be too wordy.