[SFM] CHOKE

[@foolishfool8683]

Everything was great in this video but my critique is that the audience doesn't know who is the good guy and who should we be rooting for. If your intent for this video is to show why violence is bad then you accomplished it because it showed that no one felt like they accomplished something good, like justice. All you had to do is show sniper getting punched or whoever you want to show as the protagonist. The reason I got confused is that we get a pov shot of Soldier so I got confused who is the good guy again. Finally, We need a protagonist so when their at their most vulnerable in the fight we are worried about them and we wonder how is he/she is going to get out of this one. Sorry if this comment was negative or bad I just feel that this video could been improved a bit by having some better visual storytelling. To end this comment with something positive I really liked the music you choose for the video. ( Sorry if my English is a bit bad It is not my first language)

[@HocTapSFM]

Thank you very much for this comment, but my intention wasn't to craft any story at all. I just wanted to craft a fightscene without a good or bad guy. You could say that both of them are protagonists or that neither of them are. I get now why the first person shot from the soldier's perspective might be a little confusing, but like I said, my intention, even though it isn't that clear, was to simply make these two have a fight. Thanks a lot for watching

[@trivonol3583]

It's just a random animation, why do you care and feel the need to write a whole fucking poem about it? Isn't that silly?

[@HocTapSFM]

@@trivonol3583 I believe he has the right to say that. I'm not offended by his comment at all, in fact i cherish people who take their time to not only watch but comment on my videos

[@JxCD21]

The viewer can interpet the story for themselves, makes it more interesting in my opinion.

[@mrtoxictoast2907]

Soldier:*headbutts sniper* Sniper:I see you have chosen.....death

[@simplisticminimalistic868]

AMAZING CONTENT

[@HocTapSFM]

Thank you

[@MedicFromTF2_REAL]

Cool, you're an underrated SFM artist :)

[@generalkenobi1972]

POV you are a minority and a certain someone spots you

[@thatredspy7809]

SO THIS IS WHAT KILLED SOLDIER GUYS ITS NOT THE PANDEMIC ITS THE SNIPER GETEMM BOIS!

[@minhcreeper]

Hay đấy,sfm chất lượng.

[@MajorNoob]

stop choking me gujgjruguut

[@ЕгорТелепнев-р5ж]

Good battle

[@KertPerteson]

Nice

[@anyarr]

Good movements. Was this an animation test?

[@HocTapSFM]

Nah this is a simple fightscene

[@malevolentmax7171]

Video was epic but I wish it had more fight scenes

[@HocTapSFM]

I'll try to produce more but fight scenes, especially once they're grappling, are very hard to make. I still hope that you enjoyed it!

[@Saucey_J]

Apple sauce

[@XRAY81]

You seem to be imoroved

[@HocTapSFM]

thank you very much!

[@rileyhill8003]

Wait a minute this isn't YouKink.com

[@Tosfoy]

add explosion now

[@zoidbuster17]

Harder daddy uwu

[@atropa6894]

*Son?!*

[@malevolentmax7171]

Video was epic but I wish it had more fight scenes