[SFM] Roadside Mayhem [Saxxy Awards 2015 Extended]

[@errornoname23]

I swear, the scene where Heavy was frozen was surprisingly sad for me. He was just like ‘Sasha...’ and accepted his fate! That is SAD!

[@timur5241]

Indeed

[@Ttegegg]

@@timur5241 luckily Saxton hatle didn’t came in

[@_Catgirl_Connoisseur_]

​@@Ttegeggyeah no kind of protection could hold his

[@The_Officer_DWm]

I demand this be a gameode. Payload race on crack.

[@ramab9188]

+VinylEnergy fuck yes

[@harleymitchelly5542]

+VinylEnergy Team Fortress Grand Prix needs to happen now! I nominate a trio of medics in a van where two of them get high off of each other's medi guns the whole time, a demoman in a totaled beater that's somehow still drivable getting drunk off his ass while driving, and a heavy in full biker attire on a badass chopper.

[@Nightdreamr]

TF2 is a FPS game, not a race game

[@The_Officer_DWm]

Death Lock A man can dream.

[@allgoodnamestaken6002]

Death Lock Guess you haven't been playing TF2 for long then.

[@numairsiddiqui3311]

Those are the most quiet cars ever

[@toastycrab5175]

I love how things will always go wrong when engineer says I got the might'est touch!

[@myspot8579]

1:55 what pyro sees when someone is beheaded

[@deagle.2]

What happened to Red Scout and his bike?

[@thedovis6288]

He probably got sqiushed between the tanks or something like that

[@The-Lion-Of-Feronia]

Flicking became a pancake 🥞

[@teddyleigh1975]

My favorite part of this was actually the spy-cycle death. I don't think anyone else has done such a thing, I found that to be cool. EHHH?

[@ImmortalizationTF2]

4:26 Spy: you are disqualified for break rules about airborne therefore winner is Demoman

[@IDontNeedAHandleIfIDontCreateC]

In the end the demo got banned for team killing

[@AML665]

Lol

[@AML665]

Everyone must fight for the position of 1st.there is no teaming

[@AML665]

@hazardcausedeath well ya bro,u can either team or go solo as long u win first place either alone or with a team

[@AML665]

@hazardcausedeath demo is very greedy another hand..he just takes something that's his at times

[@timur5241]

It's FFA, so he didn't

[@Spooneru]

(When you think you have a good time and your wining/ Having a good time in life) *Spy:* I THINK NOT

[@ScareyoHexir]

I dont know why pepole are being so harsh this animation was really good i enjoyed every second of it

[@UseTheScience]

i mean the animation is good its just that the camera work kinda sucks

[@cadendicky1855]

Yeah, and sometimes the sound cuts out.

[@iming817]

Chnjn

[@iming817]

Good

[@Victor-056]

The ending was breaking point. The statement that "The BLU Team vehicle was Airborne when it crossed the line so BLU is disqualified" being a way to pass the Trophy to the RED team, was out of nowhere and made it feel like it was done as an excuse to deny BLU team the Win... What doesn't help was how none of the other racers were disqualified for using cloaking devices or harpoons installed within them to attack other racers, yet BLU's truck is disqualified for... Being thrown flying by an opposing racer's Explosives that the Racer planted on their vehicle, and the Judges _Very Clearly Saw the Whole thing!_ It's the same reason why a Payday 2 Saxxy entry didn't get a win either, since the video basically had the ending reveal that the Payday Gangs' masks were fitted with rebreathers... At the last minute of the Heist... By Bain literally telling them that when they needed an extraction point. An easy fix for the Payday saxxy video was to have had Bain tell the crew that from the start. Here, I cannot see a way to make the Biased ending work. The only way to have made this even somewhat qualifiable, would have been to have made the judge unbiased, as an unbiased Judge would have disqualified half of the Racers for having modifications meant to directly attack other vehicles, and the DemoTanker for blowing up a chunk of the race course... Which would have meant only the _Judge_ gets to walk away with the trophy, since the _Other_ half of the racing roster are kinda Dead... But if you still want a Biased ending, then the only other way, would have been for the Audience in the stands to get enraged by this Bollocks and chase the RED Team and the Judge... Which would allow for BLU to get a Win of sorts, as while _they_ didn't get the Trophy, RED won't get to enjoy the theft of their Win either, as the Crowd now wants to lynch them for their nonsense.

[@linthantheinzaw9975]

YES A NEW TF2 SFM WITH BLUES WITH SHIRTS AND HATS I LOVE IT!

[@kylevitch4958]

The part with heavy being backstabbed was so sad.

[@mukerremhan3231]

yea

[@maxmadness9927]

I can just see a sequel where the BLU team finds out the RED team had lied about rule number seven and wanted revenge.

[@gentlemangamerec7025]

I will say Utratomic that i wont admit this the best extended saxxy i've seen and it was a couple of months ago for the awards, but this has a nice touch to it and good idea. Plus ur animation is REALLY GOOD compared to the other ones of sfm you did. So keep it up and dont loose that creativity spark! Sincerely, GENT,EC

[@arcanelore3791]

The bit with Heavy's death was so well staged.

[@esteebangus]

The road is soft as plastic and the tires are so soft that they don't even make any noise!

[@Turgineer]

It was an animation that I had fun watching.

[@toastycrab5175]

So glad I found this channel and a lot more people should too

[@technicaldifficulties2206]

I genuinely liked this! Good work

[@casualmemer7789]

This is what payload race should be More like payload DEATHMATCH

[@rickywatch3430]

very good, very VERY GOOD

[@cy5963]

heavy's life flashed before his eyes as he was slowly frozen in his tracks.

[@Reragi]

It was obviously rushed because of the lack of sound effects, shading, and smoothing, but it was a great video overall, hope you continue your work!

[@valorlee2596]

There was a rule against airborne vehicles, but killing was perfectly fine. Seems legit.

[@MenderSlen579]

id love to see a remaster

[@maenethal6559]

This needs to be a spinoff/mini game.

[@lordofdarkdudes]

I did not think it was that good mostly due to technical stuff, BUT i still want you to keep making SFM's you can only get better :) SUBSCRIBED!

[@scrombat]

Nice job on this.

[@prettychillduck7038]

Finally we get to see pyros perspective in a saxxy

[@a.m.arteaga8369]

I think the animation is really good for your first entry. A little more practice and you will definitely have a chance at the Saxxies--just keep on practicing!

[@matts2581]

You are one of the few whos work I have made a comment on. It appears as you have taken the time to focus on facial animation sequencing WAY more than others (major kudos) and more importantly you have the perception to have quality applied to that work for presentation. I will be checking out your other work. By the way, the sound bite at the end for the film canister and the revolver - very good. :)

[@MrWalker8800]

This kinda like a longer version of Vet's Mann Co. Cup 2014 Nominee O_o

[@inakiorozco881]

Very good! keep going whit the good stuff c:

[@JerseyMapping]

3:57, Soldier is like fine but scout is amazed I died of laughter

[@myspot8579]

beheaded medic in pyroland got me

[@SawBlade289]

Awww no... And it had such a promising start in the beginning too.

[@bcn1gh7h4wk]

oh, man... that cartoon! what was that cartoon!! with the cars and the whacky racers!! OMG!! I feel so old right now lol!

[@ArceusAmaranthine]

+onehandyguy It was aptly called Wacky Races.

[@masterofthecoop]

nice! A stealth car :)

[@oxtron3005]

very good idea and put it in good way just not the smoothest animation but like you said it was rushed

[@jakubborowski1363]

One thing i need to know is how the hell is that tank so fast

[@butlerwork7202]

wait a minute. killing other contestants is allowed. But flying gets you disqualified?

[@Dragonlovermaniak]

this was really good, just was missing some car sounds at some needed points but i like it.

[@thonnietornberg2997]

I can't decide whether this is excellent or pure crap, im gonna go with excellent. Good job:D

[@noisemarine561]

Demoman was sober, never mess with a sober demoman

[@Dat-Mudkip]

I liked the concept and the general direction. However, several problems are easy to notice (at least for me). - *Some of the maps are glitching or not exactly loaded* Examples: Tarmac in first part of race was a little texture-glitchy, Camera angle when exiting second tunnel reveals "hole" in the maps -*Vehicles are not very convincing.* Almost no noise from them, wheels are not turning, and some of the movement is awkward and ill-layed out. - *Multiple vehicles were of lower quality* - *Race Manager's voice changing was not exactly pleasant.* He didn't have a voice anywhere close to Spy's voice, so using a voice clip from Spy was a bit of a mistake. - *Race Length seemed off.* It was clear that this took place over the course of just a few minutes. Consider either reducing the mileage, not mentioning the mileage, or allowing for a day-night transfer. Spacing out the time they leave the start/finish versus the time they made it back to the said start/finish line might help. - *Better Rule Terming Needed* Spy says they are DQ'd due to their car leaving the ground. That said, a more reasonable ruling would have been the 'car was hovering'; cars don't often stay planted, especially on rougher courses. Consider watching any rally car race to get an idea of this. - *Hovering Seemed Pointless* I didn't see any purpose to the hovering. It didn't really benefit them in anyway, and it didn't even stall the detonation (if anything, it made Demoman blow them up quicker). Having Scout activate it BEFORE the Sticky-Bombs are planted would have made more sense. Consider having Demoman have a few rounds nearly miss, Scout activate the suspension in response, and then have the bombs reach the destination - *Entry List says "Maintenance Report" at the top.* Seeing that a custom texture would be needed to add the drawing on the clipboard, this shouldn't be that hard to fix. - *Vehicle paths are of low quality* Most notable 1:35; they dart noticeably that makes them look like they are on a set track. No real weight transfer apparent. Most noticeable with the Scout on the Motorcycle and the Blu Pickup - *Scout's Tunnel Entry Makes No Sense* Scout looks surprised when he cranks the hard right-hander to the first tunnel, as large boulders are directly ahead. However, the way Sniper and Spy reacted would suggest that they had taken an alternative route. - *Demoman's Reaction to the Hover-Truck is Off* It is hard to tell that Demoman notices the start/finish line is approaching, as only a tiny little flag/pole can be seen in the background. It isn't made obvious that is his reaction to seeing the finish line, and it looks more like he is surprised by the Hover-Truck. - *The Intro at 2Fort Seemed Unneeded* No notable event happens here that effects the race outcome. The only thing it shows is that it is Engi modified it, but this is made plain obvious when the truck stalls and Soldier refires it. -*What the Hell happened to the Motorcycle Scout?* After the truck is refired, the Motorcycle isn't seen for the rest of the video. -*Tanks Shouldn't be Capable of That Speed* At least the ones in the TF2 Era are incapable of such speed. Overall, it has potential, but it has several qualities that make it a "medium" quality video. Certainly not the worst video out there, but many improvements are needed. I see plenty of potential here, so if you can improve the areas mentioned, it can easily become a top-of-the-line video.

[@xboxoneoldmansregret1977]

bump

[@thehandgrenade3491]

Jeez dude just watch the video.

[@Bailey54321100]

He did that's why he commented with all that information.

[@dylenm2716]

I mean, it was pretty rushed and could've been better, but it wasn't too bad. Not Saxxy quality, but it wasn't awful quality either. Good job on the work.

[@dentro_can1923]

Normal racing cars: BE A NUMBER 1! TF2 Racing: Don't just sit there when you are passenger. Do a *DRIVE-BY*

[@reileykearns6165]

why would anyone post a negative comment, this is great

[@peepeestorm2178]

this is a great animation , and i can see alot of effort went into it but thier just sliding along on the road and the cars arent making any sound i get that with the engines humming in the background the whole time , some voices would be hard to understand but i would like to hear the engine sounds

[@DagosynoOnly]

Holy crap. That voice is mine!

[@maysonhorn6539]

+Mayson Horn Whiskey bib, World travelers hat (I supported Turbine) and his weps

[@dehspaaps1290]

Good video I love it

[@gustavoa6668]

I liked this.. It's so intense

[@robloxian101uhhh9]

you call this bad? its great!

[@nightshadow9937]

if this race was cordnated by saxton hale he wouldent care

[@ElMamaHuevo15]

Love the pyro

[@potatocommenter]

I mean in-game scout is indeed fast and has double jump (or even more with items) but you know demoknight can be as fast as scout and trimp

[@JillofTrades]

I fear no man but that thing? 2:58 It scares me...

[@lilal8848]

If I was Scout I'd say to Spy(the announcer) I'll see you back on the battlefield.

[@TexHaw]

“And now here they are, the most daredevil group of mercenaries to ever whirl thier wheels in the TF2 Races! Competing for the title of worlds wackiest mercenary!”

[@okcoolyep]

If only i could animate like this... rip

[@zacks360gaming9]

This needs to be a map where there is like 20 vechils and u jump from one to one

[@kanonlore]

As the engineer once said.... “not bad”

[@thebeepman6059]

Nice dude

[@timur5241]

2:34 top 10 saddest anime deaths

[@wateroak6105]

2:06 their wheels dont move?

[@RasEli03]

good thing they will just respawn

[@alexzanatta4984]

The animations and some cameras are not the best.. you know this won't win but nice try! I'm sure that in some months you'll make some really good videos. Keep it up, dude, you're in the right way!

[@Sn01701]

Yay i love demoman

[@zoidenvoid]

The worlds fastest tank

[@FabioZpt]

the vid is great, you can notice your effort even if io only watched 5 secs

[@arip7417]

A sniper and spy partnership? IMPOSSIBRU!!!!!!

[@diegodevars4618]

I love it!! Just some lack of motor/car sound.. Rest it's awesome

[@rosanasanchez4706]

Hold up. Sniper and Spy. Thats a bad ship.

[@wasu1532]

There was a mistake u know how snipers hand was cut off? t the end it magically reappears

[@shane_toon]

I think all you needed was lighting and effects.

[@Southhs]

Only thing that sucked was the ending. It made no sense as to why the demo man won, considering it was his fault Scout and Soldier's vehicle was airborne in the first place.

[@AltraNade]

Southhs5115 in all honesty, the whole animation sucks. It was imo an important first attempt, as I have made more than a few friends following it and I have gone to do greater things with other fellow animators.

[@AltraNade]

I’ve learned a lot from this project, not just the positives but the negatives too, and I believe that when I post something on this scale again, I’ll be able to make something truly great.

[@Southhs]

Ultratomic frankly, I can see the flaws, but I don't mind a bit. The only flaw I didn't like was the ending.

[@marcoswolffenbuttelmoreira4404]

Poor Heavy :(

[@H4mmerfall]

This race thing should be a TF2 map.

[@bartmanfantanfart36]

well at least scout went to first place

[@MelancholyPanda13]

their movmet was a little of and there was no motor sound other vise i loved it

[@EpicGamer-ug4iv]

rest in sasha hooveh

[@alicewong5865]

Yeah, the shading could use a bit of work. for a few of the characters it reminded me of how one looks when they stand in front of a green screen and are lighted from everywhere, then is put into a slightly darker place than the lighting on the person has, if that makes any sense.

[@taxisnsour5681]

Wow man what a cool and funny video

[@therevolutions56]

3:00 that's creepy lol

[@Dizerel]

some constructive critical: the animation was great, smooth movements and good facial expressions. I feel the background music could be a little better, as with all the sound in general. I think this is needless to say but the story doesn't make a lot of sense, but don't worry about it, something you can fix in the future. The last thing I have to say is I think you should identify characters with more than 1 hat, I know you did that with a few of them but if you could do that with all of them that would be great.

[@AltraNade]

+Dizerel Reeves Thanks for your feedback. The animation isn't my best, I could a lot better now. I know how bad the sound and music is, so maybe if I do a remake then I'll try a lot harder in that area. I can sort of see what u mean by characters only being distinguished by 1 hat. But I didn't really want all of the characters to feel like they had all these cosmetics and everything (I obviously forgot about this with the Demoman).

[@joshfernandez7640]

Did anyone notice that the voice said mission begin in 30 second

[@sticklyboi]

did u win

[@thisisabucket1262]

What kind of van that run so fast

[@AkivaElbereth]

For being rushed, it was okay. Though even if you're going to rush a project, I would still like to have seen you use the same voice for the same character (the Spy acting as the race announcer) throughout instead of mixing in stock voices with original dialogue.

[@cameronknapp7315]

I would like to see another one ☝️ of these race.

[@codycontois4879]

hoovys death was so sad

[@UltramanMebiusBrave]

Mann Co. 200 becomes more chaotic?

[@philfritsch6150]

Dammoman has broke the rooles

[@juliokulit]

what happened to scout with bike

[@AltraNade]

+Julius Reyes I didn't have time to work on his demise, as well as the pyro's. It also wouldn't have fitted within the time limit.

[@-Rens01]

The last thing that heavy says is sasha

[@InspireFrost]

I think people keep comparing every new sfm animation that comes out to some of the best animators out there and they always complain when its not as good if not better. Go watch a few FNAF sfm fan animations and come back and you will see that the animation quality in this video was pretty damn good compared to most. You can really tell when someone puts a lot of effort into something and that really shows here.

[@ianspooner6835]

Nice voice acting