Shattered Sanity Sonata

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Not bad... the vocals and melody seem a bit mismatched though. Feel like this would work much better with more focus as it seems lost between two ends. Like if youre gonna go screamo, go screamo on both. Feels like this would hit the ear and lift off much better as a heavy metal track rather than screamo. Dial back the vocals to bring them in line with the instrumental feel and youve really got something. Just my two cents.