SHOULD SHE HAVE STAYED?

[@laurentialsway9113]

Those that want her to start with once upon a time should write and tell their own stories the way they want to

[@ndivhuwonemambwea-ii9dy]

🤔 🤣

[@giftyreina2705]

😂 savage 😂

[@ThandiweMorakabi-mp9hp]

This story reminds me of my college days. I would often see girls being chased or attacked by dangerous boys. That's when I told myself that I will never ever go to pubs, taverns or clubs. But then, we got involved with a wrong crowd and they invited us to the forbidden place. Things became complicated when a group of boys wouldn't keep their hands to themselves. My friend and I were uncomfortable and left the party early. We grateful that we followed our instincts because other people never lived to tell a tale. I learnt that with freedom, comes great responsibility. Thank you for this story and let it be a lesson to young girls.

[@ZamaTimes2]

Great story structure. Best short story of its catagory thag I've seen🎉🎉🎉🎉❤❤❤ GREAT STORY OVERALL

[@enrichempresas9630]

I ❤ your stories.

[@AishaAwumee]

Thank you Nne i love your stories i have been following you since the first time thank you for your amazing stories

[@MonicaNamfukwe-dv3ql]

Wow this was educative the problem is our children are very stubborn 😢❤❤❤❤

[@deborahjoor]

Hmmm nothing dey out side 😢kudos 👏

[@bettinakatze1]

A wise advice 🎉❤👍

[@SalamatuSumah]

Nne this story teaches us about disobedience sometimes a child's disobedient will lead to the down fall of his or her parents always put your parents first nice lesson thank you nne ❤❤❤❤❤

[@Presh_jumz]

What a pleasant surprise this is🤭, thanks for the early drop, I’m sure it’s gonna be an amazing and enlightening story as always😌

[@Obapaachiaa]

Love from Ghana ❤❤

[@love-teekanu4468]

A religious follower. Love from Liberia 🇱🇷

[@yugelo1]

A moment of uncomfortable self control can save you a life time of pain. No matter what the situation is, one must follow the principles of life! 🙏🏿🤲🏿... great story 👏🏿

[@MeenaDubois-oh9oy]

❤❤❤❤❤❤lovely 🇬🇲 🇬🇲

[@Denise-ly3bk]

Wow❤❤❤❤

[@zucchiqueen1456]

Another captivating banger 💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻✨️☺️🔥🔥

[@ndivhuwonemambwea-ii9dy]

NNE , some of us don't appreciate what we have until it's gone , now she is living her life to regret everything ,thus life

[@rhondanash-taylor9203]

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤AS ALWAYS, LIFE LESSONS 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

[@chinemeremezeagu3535]

Thanks for your great enticing story❤❤😊.

[@kennyosarobo210]

I’m the first to comment today ❤❤💃💃💃💃💃💃❤❤❤❤

[@terethacray7057]

P.S. I'm Glad Someone Seem That And Help Her She Share Thank God For Her Savior God Be The Glory

[@Ummh25]

So called freedom with no proper limitation/ boundaries and self-conscious of once action can put one in big trouble

[@AmicableGoldTv]

Nice story ❤❤

[@OkolieStella-z2h]

My lovely story teller, nice one thanks. Keep it up ❤❤❤❤❤

[@SahadaJamal-k2n]

Love from South Africa 🇿🇦❤

[@FlorenceEssien-v3w]

Thanks Nne, for using my name as a pseudonym for bearing true withness for an innocent soul. So proud of my name. Love from Ghana 🇬🇭 ❤️.

[@thearthurs1431]

Am Esther from Ghana I love your stories and always waiting for the next story

[@mercyachiengolandoolandome5975]

The story was so amazing ❤

[@MERCYOLANDO]

Lovely story, we shouldn't take people for granted ❤

[@ngozionye1798]

Nice story

[@winniemorgan5063]

I really enjoy your stories ❤❤❤ 🎉🎉❤❤

[@RechealUche-qx2di]

Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️😍 story ❤️😍😍

[@JackieQuiah-gm5nn]

❤❤

[@MariamaKamara-w2x]

Amazing folktale story much appreciated to you ❤❤❤❤

[@luluphaomei1936]

Love your story From India ❄️❄️

[@ALICIAAllert]

God bless you always Nne sending greetings and love from Trinidad i just love your stories❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

[@ChiaWinifred]

Nice story ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

[@nimochapmann6660]

25 minutes late but am here!!! Hello Nne ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️******

[@mosespeters7267]

❤❤❤Nne u are the best ❤

[@RamatuYussif-k3g]

Am second 🎉😂

[@JohannaD7288]

Nice story ❤

[@giftosita]

Pls always start with once upon a time or in the village of ...

[@karenchinembiri9950]

I once said the same. The stories now start in the middle

[@1326jayjay]

Yes am still waiting for the story to start till the end😢

[@ZamaTimes2]

Pls generate some creativity of your own and go through the production process then publish and wait for the criticisma😊.

[@ZamaTimes2]

Also... If you had bothered to read actually books over the years you'd you'd understand literature. This story is very well structured, intense in such a short space of time. Truly one of the best published on KZbin. 🎉🎉🎉❤❤

[@giftosita]

@@ZamaTimes2 you will heal

[@VictoriaAbia-lp1wx]

I really love ur story but please always start from once upon the time as you always do before, because it's always look like it start from the beginning.

[@ndivhuwonemambwea-ii9dy]

💖

[@isatoujobe7353]

Exactly

[@MaryChidimma-oz5hn]

Can you read what you wrote? Like read it out.

[@miriamugochi3791]

​​@@MaryChidimma-oz5hn🤭🤣😂🤣😂Omo! R.I.P English. She murdered English

[@odiirita8540]

My dear ooo My brain wasn't braining 😂😂​@@MaryChidimma-oz5hn

[@FlorenceDaka-mu1ws]

Am early today ❤❤

[@ifeanyichukwumirabelle383]

She just wanted to have fun She felt restricted at home that is one reason that made her wanted it so bad I grew up in a strict Home ,at some point I wanted freedom

[@PreciousOkeoghene-ez9vt]

Exactly. Some parents are overbearing, give children their freedom only then will you have a good relationship with them. Her parents need to be blamed too

[@ifeanyichukwumirabelle383]

@PreciousOkeoghene-ez9vt yes,her parents Are also but in AFRICA parents are always right even when they are failing

[@ojiugoboardman1367]

Good Life Kills.

[@adjoavisekpe9112]

❤

[@darego234]

Second to comment ❤

[@MaryChidimma-oz5hn]

Please when are we getting part 2 of the ice cream man?

[@MaryChidimma-oz5hn]

Since ada was drugged, couldn't they have taken her for a test as evidence to help her case?

[@AfricantalesbyRuth]

Lets learn to be contented with our reality until nature is ready to push us out of it. Let's not force things.

[@EstherEjebi]

😢😢😢

[@sushanayoung1302]

🇯🇲

[@terethacray7057]

See Share Have Listen To Her Parents Going Out Partying With Her Friend's Look At Her Life Now Pay For Something She No Anything About That's Crazy

[@morgainlove]

It was just a young girl who wanted to have fun. She was not under age,so i don't see her wrong! Or did i miss something? It looks like she is holding responsibility for other people bad deeds! What is the lesson here? That she should lock herselve up never to encounter bad people?

[@africanbraidsbymonic87]

This is our African rules, even if you are 30 years older or marry you have to obey your family on their decisions.

[@angiebee2993]

Tomorrow is not promised when it comes to our loved ones life is short and many times when you have a disagree with a family member especially your parents disagreement in a family is something you can eventually get over but the loss of a loved one is harder to get over

[@brkthough-i1p]

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[@feliciaeze3943]

Why are you starting your stories midway, instead of from the beginning, you've changed the way you tell story 😑

[@nnesfolktales]

@@feliciaeze3943 There are different story narration styles. This style is called “in medias res narration style” 💜

[@feliciaeze3943]

@nnesfolktales you have to tell it in a way that your listeners will understand

[@thearthurs1431]

Am Esther from Ghana I love your stories and always waiting for the next story

[@QueenyBlack]

❤❤❤❤

[@elizabethuhuka]

❤❤❤❤

[@nacykalaba9892]

❤❤❤❤❤❤

[@victoriaanane6212]

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

[@HarrietMutambo-v7k]

❤❤❤❤

[@sheelaruby9380]

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