Shredder Deku Texting Story | Episode 16 | Izuku x Harem (4) |

[@knightmare938]

Ngl, I thought the reunion would be at the usj event like most stories, but I am loving the flow of the story, it's nice to see world building and character building for his lovers and friends.

[@JohnersatzYT]

FINALLY SOMEONE APPRECIATES MY WORLD-BUILDING! I've seen like 3 others complaining about the pacing and lack of focus on Izuku. But, personally, I feel that things become FAR more enjoyable when other characters become more fleshed-out.

[@JohnersatzYT]

Also, I was considering having the reveal take place at the USJ... Or something equally good.

[@knightmare938]

@@JohnersatzYT I would've said the overhaul arc would be a good place, but you got eri out early, besides usj, I'd say the training camp arc where bakugo gets captured.

[@Angel_22_mtz]

13:31 ochakos switched up is crazy 😅

[@PD_572]

JOHNNNN MAKE ANOTHER EPISODE AND MY LIFEEE IS YOURSSSSSSSS 🗣🗣🗣

[@mistogan9282]

We need be pop and rock steady now

[@Snowshoes-ru5iq]

*Bebop and Rocksteady

[@cola06o72]

LOVE IT!!!!

[@philipsonberggotthard2920]

Great video, Keep it up.👍🏼

[@JohnersatzYT]

Thanks, will do!

[@voiceoffire6690]

Love the idea to get people questioning if izuku is going to be found out or the idea of new members either way the story is showing great points in the 2 different aspects izuku getting stronger will protecting his family and toga trying to get use to being love by friends either way the story show even if it doesn't show the one you like it still shows the struggle of the character that is seen later in the next one. ❤❤ Would gentle criminal be in the story later on if so I would like to know how it would work, but thanks for making a wonderful series please keep it up and I don't know how to do quote of some sort for what I was texting but it's still good because at most I just love the action that is written or text so please keep it up.❣️🥀🌹

[@JohnersatzYT]

I was thinking about adding Gentle and La Brava... It's Just that I'm not quite sure how yet.

[@knightmare938]

​@@JohnersatzYTwell they're basically outcasts, right? What about izu finding them through their streams and offering them a new life as vigilantes with La Brava being the tech member?

[@viseshkambhampati7925]

Next part please ❤

[@Seigfried_sigil]

If we are going martial arts more we got kendo and ochaco(gunhead martial arts) toga with actual training from deku. 🤔 want to stay the ninja route then toru would be best but if you want a person tech wise mei would work or melissa. Personally mei would be good i still dont know melissa much as a character cause i have not watched any mha movies. But another one coulf do is jirou if you want a ninja with info gathering and able to attack with sound. Or momo if you want her to be more confident and skilled with a blade 🤔 but for jirou or momo idea sooner or later izuku would need to be captured and kirishima so they get added into 1B this be a plot twist of sorts and a good surprise for bakugo when he doesnt know who izuku is but is the shredder unless he doesnt know izuku in this cause i forgot but shredder did save bakugo

[@JohnersatzYT]

Well, the ship was already decided on in the beginning so, I wasn't really needing suggestions for that. And it's doubtful that Shredder joins the class in this one.

[@The_part-time_Emo-ic2vg]

First

[@Mason-ks2tn]

Before they see him in he’s shredder outfit can they meet dog pound?

[@Mason-ks2tn]

Can they see him in his shredder outfit?

[@connordaggs6675]

Next part please

[@agenthound9708]

When next NOVA PRIME Deku will be out?

[@JohnersatzYT]

Not until next year, as DECEMBER will be dedicated to my Arcosian (AKA Frieza's race) Deku AU.

[@agenthound9708]

@@JohnersatzYT I'll be hearing "monkey" on that AU soon. Deku as Frieza's race.

[@JohnersatzYT]

Well... Not as much as you think.

[@knightmare938]

​@@JohnersatzYTright, cause from the past series you twist to the bad guy being good iirc from hobgoblin, cobra commander, and this series.

[@jonathancore4541]

So....hmm with all the plot interruptions *cough*excuses*cough* for the girl to NEVER SAY A DANG THING about izuku FULLY, the rotating upload schedule basically one episode of this every 3 to 4 weeks not counting delays. It might take 1/4 to 3/4ths of a real life year for this izuku to even meet the rest of the girls, let alone progress relationship with them.

[@jonathancore4541]

@JohnersatzYT it wouldn't be as bad if every single idea didn't seem to only be made to keep prolonging the rest of the cast to actually meet izuku. I am pretty sure meeting him would open up a lot of plot and ideas, unless you are going for a long story and not an entertaining one. Also edit: them meeting izuku has been teased for the past 3-6 episodes straight but goes no where. It's starting to feel like a slap in the face like "ha I got your hopes up, joke on you I am not letting it happen" at this point. It like a really important plot point that refuses to be played no matter how much it's teased or built up to.

[@JohnersatzYT]

... Look, at least I have weekly uploads, right? And, I was planning on getting ep17 done before December if I can.

[@JohnersatzYT]

It's called a pacing mistake because I forgot about the media breaking into the School

[@TommyBaker-d7d]

BORING . is this texing story about toga or izuku

[@JohnersatzYT]

... Well, someone is going to be changing their tune come episode 17

[@ryanziesler4073]

How about you shut tf up. You don't need to read it if you think it's boring. Your not the one spending time out of their day to write these stories for others to enjoy.