Congrats on your first video! Feedback wise, I'd say think about who the video is for. It was a little long for a single POV, but hey it's the camera you had and the footage you got. It's great to remember more of the day with your friends, but for a general audience its better to either have a shorter video, or use variety or a story to keep the audience invested in a longer one. Some music would help as well. Find a channel you like watching, take notes about what they do to keep you interested, and see what you can work in with the resources you have. Have fun making videos!