What a fun mini-park! I really liked the dark ride in this one, some of the scenes were really detailed! The log flume was quite nice too! What was done with the firework display was pretty cool, I liked how it was more of a show, rather than a few random fireworks. For feedback, I feel like the coaster needed a few major adjustments. Everything up to and including the vertical loop was nice, but everything else after that just felt a bit clunky and rushed. There could have been a much better break run at the end instead of that weird flat turn at full speed with the bump up after slowing it down. I also think some of those giant trees looked a little bit odd. Other than that, I really like this mini-park, it's another great beginner submission!
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Hey Johnny, hey Xaphor, thanks for the spotlight and the feedback! The Freefalltower should have been ridden in Seat 20, then you would have seen more:) Oh and you missed a few pirate scenes who tell the story of the sunken ship at 8:46 near the balloon ride :) -whosthatChris aka -thisChris :P
@jimmyhutchison16384 жыл бұрын
Your park looks very nice
@coastermaker38324 жыл бұрын
Best park until now! Xaphor makes everything so much more fun, though lol
@pounzer77914 жыл бұрын
I like that he looks at the parks independently from Jonny's screen. That way he picks up on stuff Jonny would probably miss (like the dark ride here).
@rcb30004 жыл бұрын
It was definitely the fireworks for me lol. Beautiful display. I love the story that goes with you. You put a lot of work with the theme. The lighting is spectacular and all. Great job.
@Rohanadarilin4 жыл бұрын
"Have you ever switched poison for your herbs?" Happens to me all the time.... really, I shouldn't keep'm all on the same shelf. You coming for dinner next week right? Jokes apart, we can't name that newbie WhosThatChris anymore, after a park like this everyone's gonna remember their name. Well done.
@denies-babies29734 жыл бұрын
This park is so much fun. Love all the colors at night and the little notes everywhere.
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Thanks Denies!
@rice84704 жыл бұрын
That witch is definitely evil... :P Seriously though, great park! I think the lighting can be improved (4m floodlights for the win!!!) and the coaster layout, but I loved how cute everything was otherwise!
@chiefwebsearcher92294 жыл бұрын
Wonderful park. Very playful. Loved the firework show with the witch casting it. As for the dark ride story, The witch is gaslighting the story. She is flat out evil! Great job WhosThatChris .
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot Websearcher!
@capitalthrills4 жыл бұрын
This contest is really ramping up, enjoying every park spotlight! Only 200 more or so to go (:
@pounzer77914 жыл бұрын
I'm really impressed with this park. The theming is so fun and vibrant and there are so many hidden areas, which makes ist really fun to explore, despite being just a mini park. Well done!
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
There are even more than Johnny visited! Feel free to check it out steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2175199914
@lounap2114 жыл бұрын
I like this! A lot of thought went into this and it shows. Another great park in the beginners bracket. Good luck!
@rellimetep4 жыл бұрын
Lots of boxes ticked here for me. Love a fantasy/fairytale theme, great buildings, bad ass sign work, funny storytelling, some cool ideas - especially with the witch casting the fireworks. Excellent work 👍
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
thank you kind stranger! -whosthatChris
@ae_drags96184 жыл бұрын
This is one of the coolest parks I’ve seen and it’s from a new builder great build
@Dougmysticeye4 жыл бұрын
Best one so far. That was fun and well designed.
@coasterzigner4 жыл бұрын
Witch just can't cook... must be my mother or sister.... so not evil! Love the firework show. The log flume is well designed, but I agree with Xaphor: a bit lackluster; however, I can guess that might be the design for a more kiddie-friendly log flume. This park does leave me wanting more, though. I think more story development could have been taken and planning to execute it so it's not so all over the place. That being said, what IS present is very very smartly themed and has some unique never-before-seen elements from queue design to just one little themed item that sets things apart. I have a feeling this creator is going to do even better with more space, and not being restricted on a timeline. I got the impression this might have gotten rushed, which is expected for a contest and being a newer builder. So overall, great park, want more!
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Hi, thanks for that awesome feedback! I‘m gonna do more planning on future projects. And yes: story telling might be developed more in another park!:)
@alastairpullan4 жыл бұрын
This is an amazing park, you did a great job. Think he needs to move up the ranks for sure.
@mikebartholomew99454 жыл бұрын
whosthatChris: Hey Jonny! Please start on the left side of the park and ride SwitchWitch Kitchen first. (Later) Jonny: And that's the whole park! Xaphor: Well actually we missed that huntsmant darkride Chris said to ride first...... *facepalm*
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Thanks for feeling with me haha
@elinevandam43324 жыл бұрын
I actually love the nighttime lighting 😍
@smilingoma33344 жыл бұрын
Uhhh.... yeah I think it was an accident with using the wrong herb. Twice in a few months time I’ve done this grabbing cayenne pepper for chili powder for my chili! (It was definitely HOT!) & using a crap ton of pepper instead of oregano - so honestly I think this witch deserves a fair, second chance from the villagers. ✌️😉 SmilingGrandma333
@kristinebellamy52494 жыл бұрын
Really like the theming and all the details. I would’ve preferred to see the park in daytime - it’s easier to catch all the details and I wasn’t a huge fan of the lighting. But great for a beginner bracket with paths all integrated and lots of details on the buildings.
@projectnightfall68824 жыл бұрын
I like to think the witch did kill everyone by accident. Way funnier if she did! Great park! No idea how you found time to cram in all the little details.
@edenmoon82754 жыл бұрын
Lovely! really colourful! well done!
@RyRy23124 жыл бұрын
A great detailed park, really enjoyed it 👍🏻
@notesleb4 жыл бұрын
I like the giant trees
@matthijs36424 жыл бұрын
I love how much video’s we get because of the contest!!
@Pillsburryjoboi4 жыл бұрын
Great park but that loopin coaster went outside the park boarder otherwisw the theme was great and the lighting and everything was great
@micycles12004 жыл бұрын
ARGH! Now I'm kicking myself for not adding in the fireworks. I was going to but they are very time consuming to make. Plus, I thought nobody was going to do them. Oh well. Whenever I submit my next park, I'll add them in.
@MentalitaHrvatska4 жыл бұрын
Glad i did not submit mine, night elf themed val'shara park with shaladrassil in the middle that holds a freefall tower too. I decided to hold the submission back tho cuz I am currently turning it into a larger park
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Hit me up when it‘s done! -whosthatChris
@pernicious5444 жыл бұрын
I found the rides to be kinda "meh" minus that dark ride. The general theming however was FANTASTIC
@akcsamiru4 жыл бұрын
The princess is the real witch. She accidentally killed her family and blamed it on the witch. The witch then got mad and tried to destory everyone
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
Uh somebody‘s on the witchs side! :D who knows? Maybe the story will continue in my next park! -whosthatChris
@akcsamiru4 жыл бұрын
@@whosthatchris8149 youre the creator of that park?!?!? Wow, great job, the only issue was the ride inside the tree, it didnt have a view of the park, amd maybe inside the tree trunk meanwhile going up you should uave put some effects or animatronics. But even that was great
@whosthatchris81494 жыл бұрын
uri mascka yes i am :) yeah i know, xaphor and johnny were right. The one view was good, bit all other sided were rather boring
@jackison23744 жыл бұрын
Bruh this is so good I want this game so bad.
@northinfante83744 жыл бұрын
If the Wicked Witch coaster in this park was real life, I am unsure of which manufacturer would create it. My best guess would have to be Intamin.
@hulakingplays24354 жыл бұрын
No one would even attempt it except for six flags and intamin cause they are the wild cards
@Nathandelange4 жыл бұрын
Amazing
@masongould69914 жыл бұрын
Hey guys Rascal 5752 here in case ur wondering. Very nice theming! THis was a great build. I would go here 100%!
@mgunter4 жыл бұрын
Is Xzafour's kid going to have Xzafive as a handle?
@Jack-jv6sc4 жыл бұрын
Who says the intro with him
@francisnguyen63494 жыл бұрын
Hey, Planet Coaster!
@cjlorenz34984 жыл бұрын
Am I the only one noticing that they are not checking the vertical requirements for these? Or did that change and no longer a rule?
@troopermatthew91064 жыл бұрын
All the parks had a pre-check before recording to make sure they followed the rules from what I understand so they didn't have to waste time recording parks that got DQ'd.
@cjlorenz34984 жыл бұрын
@@troopermatthew9106 Thank you! This park looks really tall so I was curious. Thanks!
@Channel5Gaming4 жыл бұрын
Vertical requirement was also variable. After we set the height we quickly found out the tallest flatride in the game actually broke the height requirement set. So we allowed people to go slightly above that if needed. Generally speaking the height requirement was to avoid people making never ending stacked parks. Not necessarily something we will DQ for not being perfect on. Unless they went absurdly high. The main requirement is 40x40, which is plenty of challenge!
@cjlorenz34984 жыл бұрын
@@Channel5Gaming thank you for the clarification!
@dorothygordon97384 жыл бұрын
Hi Johnny
@toastyboysgaming89484 жыл бұрын
hey johnny. your the best dude.
@Gamerbro5284 жыл бұрын
I honestly liked it at night
@dalerardon16874 жыл бұрын
Sup Johnny 5!!!!
@Immortalcheese4 жыл бұрын
The witch chose the wrong herb on purpose so she would have an excuse to burn everything when the town retaliated. #deepLore