The Angry Humans Were the Only Ones to Respond to the Call | Sci-fi Battle Story

[@etiennezichterman1563]

Great story.

[@StellarHFY5]

Thanks for listening

[@jamesogden7756]

You're really striking a decent balance between adjectives to paint pictures and storytelling. I enjoyed this one. Thank you.

[@StellarHFY5]

I appreciate that!

[@yungth1811]

Wow! No Chen or Rodriguez!

[@kaykaymishka5548]

Or Patel 😂😂😂

[@ronniebentley5847]

No lie. Those mfers are everywhere.😅

[@Joehoss1987]

Probably retired or dead they have probably done about 1000 missions at this point

[@kaykaymishka5548]

Really enjoyed this different story ❤🎉

[@StellarHFY5]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@johnfolger8871]

Nice story

[@StellarHFY5]

Thanks for watching

[@fredrikabinger4818]

Ahhh..i see..Chen is on leave i suppose. :)

[@StellarHFY5]

Hahaha yeah, he is back to China!

[@victortatevosyan4001]

The Federation would be proud

[@StellarHFY5]

Ah, what a compliment! If the Federation would be proud, then the story must have struck the right balance of bravery, strategy, and unity. Here's to tales that honor the spirit of exploration, resilience, and standing strong against overwhelming odds. Thank you for the encouragement-long live the ideals of the Federation!

[@joelmurphy7980]

Decent premise, but as always told with the propensity for relentless repetiton.

[@StellarHFY5]

I appreciate your honesty and feedback! Repetition can definitely weaken pacing and impact, so it’s something I’ll keep a sharper eye on moving forward. The goal is always to keep the tension and flow engaging without overstating the obvious. I’ll work on tightening things up so the story hits harder without the echoes. Thanks for calling it out-I value readers like you who help me improve!

[@cpyeske]

Please "proof-hear" for repetitive sections".

[@StellarHFY5]

Thank you for pointing that out! I’ll make sure to thoroughly review the audio for any repetitive sections and eliminate them to ensure the flow is smooth and engaging. Your feedback is invaluable, and I truly appreciate your support in helping me improve. I’ll get on this right away to make the content even better for you!

[@biscuitninja]

Need a better reader... This is two mechanical

[@StellarHFY5]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I’ll take a closer look at the pacing and delivery to make it feel more natural and immersive. I’m always looking to improve, so I appreciate your honesty.