The beginning of a MOBILE FORTRESS!!! Project Castaway Part: 5

[@mobileplayers5008]

I used wooden based because it Sturdy than other twos & sometimes those two bases moved ur Racks because of the Raft shaking too much. When u crunching under a tent & open ur backpack that shakes everything on ur Raft too.

[@Dejin1]

Great video, A couple suggestions if that's ok? Lets start off with some great positives: Wonderful deep voice!, Wonderful video quality! Explain your goals on the start of the video better? The title helps but it also reinforces if you say your plan and sound excited to do it. Perhaps some more catchier titles? Most people type "Episodes" when searching KZbin rather than "parts" but not sure you can change that now for consistency sake. Also for your narration, sometimes, I think you speak more in explaining what your doing rather than -> speaking your emotions... For example you said "There is a hornet over there ima Un-alive it" instead maybe you can say "take this you evil hornet!" or "not you again", or maybe why you did it like...."Oh you dang hornet I'ma eat you need some food." Now this is my suggestion others may disagree...or maybe you just like to narrate like this please take my opinion with a grain of salt. Btw I did notice your leopard Scene this was a good example of emotion though you did show joy in your words I don't think you relished the kill hahaha. Try to talk to your audience by being your first comment could be like Hey Yall, Thanks for watching what did you like the most that kinda thing shows your eager to hear more. For some extra items could use some fastforwarding but not required maybe some animations but again not required. Nonetheless you may not have wanted criticisms if so i'm sorry and feel free to delete this hahah just wanted to tell my thoughts as I feel you have some amazing aspects and id like to see you become popular!