The Chronicle of Curse Word: Part 1 (Grimdark)

[@thelostnarrator]

🅸🆃 🅸🆂 🆃🅸🅼🅴

[@lightshade1960]

YAAAAASSS!!! MY FANGIRL-DOM HAS exploded BEST FRIDAY EVER^^

[@kayleighross4910]

IT’S NOT OVER

[@iconicgame4166]

I can't wait till part2

[@tobyharrison4702]

Don’t give up curse word you have to remain strong for your sake and magpies you have to remember that or mag will be stuck with.. ‘HER’ (not sure I can even call it a her anymore) FOREVER and I am not kidding when I say that. Do not give up Ever, not even for a moment. One final thing, remember that you’re special talent is storytelling and shaping reality with those stories. Remember that when you face ink dye

[@charlesdowelldowell8050]

Nein! She belongs to curse word and we’ll make sure of that.

[@ScribblerProductions101]

A truly impressive piece.

[@rhdarthur4280]

By far one of the best series loved the one before it and been waiting to find out what happen next and for those that dont know what the binary code said it say "it's not over"

[@iona5917]

Hiya Scibbler!!!!

[@thelostglich1604]

Hey ya Scribbler. How ya doing.

[@SoniaGomes_offical]

hi scribbler productions how you doing love your vids

[@yukikursosaki200]

17:40 "Especially now that I don't look like a goddamn scarecrow." HA! How did she manage to get such amazingly good macabe humor into this? This is amazing!

[@fireworkstudios4691]

17.41

[@OpticSpectrum]

She strokes my mane softly, rocking back and forth. As she grasps me tight against her *ChesT FlOoF* 🤣 I’m dying. In all seriousness, this turned out so well.! I wish I could express my excitement with the team when everyone was celebrating. 😆 . Regardless, this was definitely a great video to work with! Glad to have been part of it. 😉 Looking forward for the next one. If you or Mag need me for your other projects, don’t hesitate to ask. 😋👍

[@nislubis]

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[@CavatinaProductions]

I thought this was already intense enough, and then I heard "Reversion" play... I can't, man. *cries* Such a beautifully written story, in both the emotional and scary way. I look forward to Part 2, and however many parts follow.

[@doll1726]

Now I’m at the end.. and.. *SPOILER WARNING!!* Wow. That was a rollercoaster. It was written so well.. the smooth transitions near the beginning changed the abrupt glitch feeling transitions at the end. Everything worked so well together, how it went so fast from a happy ending to a living nightmare. And don’t even get me started on all the amazing voice acting. Mary’s voice was particularly well done. She gets her character and you just feel like it’s just her character talking, and that there isn’t even a human behind it. The ending was so powerful... you feel the happiness that you tear up. Then, it’s all ripped away so fast you feel like you’re in the position of Curse Word. I don’t think I need to go on, I’d be praising forever. Beautiful story. Can’t wait for the next part :)

[@thelifeoncloud9]

After all these years this is still one of my favorite series. Couldn’t have asked for a more epic part 1 finale, so full of emotion, tragedy, confusion, and GORE 😈 And there’s still more to come, can’t wait!!

[@MrJewishfox]

Same great work a hope there a happy ending to the story

[@captainclod5269]

I am obsessed with this series again. Damn it, Lost This is the only thing that makes me cry and tell dark and gory stuff at the same time. Part 2 surely won't disappoint

[@MrUser-xy4dd]

And to think that it's only the beginning of a splendid fiction. Your previous attempts have led you to this moment and it has really paid off from the first day. An hour and twenty-minute production really show your dedication in making these fantastic narrations - and with that mindset, your creations will only get better with each word you say and write. Everyone's role was played out perfectly and the editing was spot-on (the door knocking actually scared me for some reason). Visuals were well-fitted with each scenario, inflicting the emotions I'd imagine you would want to express. The ambience was not too saturated nor were there any lacking sound cues. Now, the story. I would imagine the difficulty in writing and presenting a story as well as dealing with other complications such as real-world activities and the editing process as well as receiving images from various artists. The narrative made sense overall but I feel there were some qualities that would have increased authenticity and emotion. Authenticity: What I mean is, there were many places where description would be essential in intriguing the viewers (the forest, bedroom, the abyss) and that potential was just wasted. World description is key in setting scenes and thoroughly creates a mental image in one's mind so everyone can understand. (Now, I haven't checked Fimfiction yet which probably does have the necessary description but this is just perspective) Emotion: This goes with authenticity. You could have added descriptions in the bedroom where she remembers textures of certain objects or the emptiness of the abyss reflecting on her soul. The first one may not be THAT important but subtle descriptions like these could really have both the viewers and creators benefit from this small change. More description means a vibrant mind for the viewers and the creators will be able to improve their ability to write vividly about their current situation and have their audience understand their expressions and story. (This may have slowed the story and this production is perfectly fine without said description. Sorry for the essay, and my thoughts)

[@thelostnarrator]

A lot of the time when it comes to the written version vs. the audio adaptation, a lot gets left on the cutting room floor. If I wanted to expand more on details like that this story would be probably about another 20k words on top of what I've already written (the final product ended up being 19k, but still lol). There were even a few concepts for the torture scenes with ink that I wanted to expand upon, but time constraints are always a thing. I think the next time I tackle writing again, I dont want to box myself to the limits of audio first and see where that takes me though. Thank you for the feedback. I've been looking forward to your critiques of my videos lately. I always welcome feedback, because it helps me grow as a creator. :)

[@Ribonchan]

This was amazing, Lost. Probably the most powerful installment you've ever written of this series. You, Magpie, and everyone involved with this story did a fantastic job. I can't wait for its exciting conclusion.

[@sithlordgaming01]

No one deserves to be tortured. Not even monsters. TheLostNarrator you clearly have a passion for this. The emotion, the feel, the comedy, the horror, the thrill, the love for each other, I loved every bit of this story TheLostNarrator and I hope you continue doing stuff like this.

[@GastArts]

I didn't even realize this was a hour long! You guys are amazing at writing, acting and story telling! I can't wait for the second part! ^^ Edit: THANK YOU FOR THE HEART!!!!!! >w

[@The_Chimeras_Den]

I finally was able to sit down and listen to this and holy fuck is this the most amazing thing I have ever listened to in my life. The way that every single emotion was portrayed and the quiet tones of darkened music still keeping me on the edge of my seat and intentive, even if I was distracted by something in the corner of my eye. This is absolutely amazing and I can't wait for part two!!!

[@cameronjsmith7382]

A truly amazing awesome story Lost I've been prepared for this moment!!!!!! It was worth it! You totally rocked this reading series! Heck all of your readings rule! Keep it up queen Lost! You totally rock! I'm so ready for the exciting conclusion to one of the best works you've made!

[@darkblightballas7445]

Meet SCP-1026 aka Ink demon/ Ink Dye

[@Jaidyn228]

More like SCP-0718

[@heathledgersjoker6262]

Code name: Venom

[@theoptimistictabby2785]

Code name: Scrawny Little Bitch

[@TheCommenterDragon]

This is fantastic Lost i love it,you and your associates did a truly masterful and astounding job making this project,i mean the voices and the artwork are all just so remarkable and terrific no doubt about it,major props to the lot of you and i look forward to part 2.

[@fandom_luver2985]

Oh!! Yes!!! Questions will be answered!! Edit: I actually started crying when they finally reunited!! Curse's search had finally come to an end and Ink Dye........I hate her so Flippin much. You know a story is really Great when you wanna Murder the antagonist!!!! @TheLostNarrator this was such a great piece and it's only part 1!? I can't wait to see the conclusion of "The Chronicles of TLN" #LostMagForLife

[@knov8361]

Well if u want to know at the end like on part 2, ink dye dies

[@holidaycat5160]

"We all know that monsters don't get second chances." Well unless you've read a few dozen fanfics. I've seen my fair share of people redeeming infinite from 'Sonic Forces' alone.

[@Mordysrainbowcastle]

I can't tell you how much it AMAZES me to be able to go from laughing, to excitement, to concern in 5 seconds. This story is insanely amazing and I have been waiting forever for this SO EXCITEDLY. I love horror and gore and emotional stories, and this is just perfection. I can't even express how much that all the reference to abuse still hits me. As a man who has been through mental, physical, and emotional abuse myself, I honestly can't express how well written this is and how it accurately can portray how disgusting and horrid abuse is. This story gave me EXCITED shivers. It is FANTASTIC and I'm so excited for part 2, You write amazing stories. Sincerely, this is awesome! All the voice actors in this were INCREDIBLE and the artists did an amazing job!

[@tonyvolverton9605]

9:29 "THIS IS FINE" this one line spoke to my soul and i just spent 20 minutes trying to find this one one little tiny bit. ❤❤ worth it

[@christtonmash1385]

THIS. Yes. THIS. This is how you make a good story!

[@doll1726]

The part with the damned souls reminds me of that one scene in truth be told.. huh.

[@angel-nv7jk]

StitchedSocks nostalgia right there

[@doll1726]

Selena DelaRosa I meant rocket to insanity. Too many pinkie stories to keep track of xD

[@icesswolvescats404]

Hey I know this is off topic, but I want to know if you know what the name of the song that plays at 30:57, I keep hearing them in the darkfic and creepypasta videos, but I can't find it anywhere, nor figure it out. if you know what is called or where can I find it, could you please help me? I've heard it around and its driving me crazy when i can't find it anywhere

[@Sanukuni]

*slams play button on notification* YYAAAASSSSSS Hour later: Ugh......when you wanna listen to the new video, and everyone has something for me to do, just now got to the halfway point. =.= 3 Hours later: *Scree* No nononono! Don't end there!

[@TotalFreakZoid]

I have to say that Mary did an excellent job as the voice of Ink Dye. That insane twisted acting is not easy to be pulled off but she got it down, point blank. She's probably my favorite part of this series XD I kinda came in half way, but I'm so glad I'm around to see this series finale. Though I am sad it's ending... I'm so excited for the last one. Amazing job Lost~

[@reillykuhn5692]

Sweet Celestia, this is INSANE!! I love it! I'm dying to know what happens next!

[@skiddy3715]

I was listening to Smooth McGroove when I saw this as I was browsing down my subscription feed. I was like “Be back in an hour Smooth. Glad you’re back but I’ve been waiting for this for a year.”

[@weareallbronies9031]

It was disturbing, tragic, and depressing... I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

[@MoonQuill_SqueeSqueeSquee]

S A M E BEST THING IVE HEARD FROM A STORY. EVER.✋

[@hopesrainbowworld1130]

Same!

[@sonicstarling777]

I felt like this once... when my mom disappeared I felt like it was my fault... I felt like ending my life but I finally reunited with her.

[@Kitty-ed2mm]

Can't wait to see the bloopers for this (If there is bloopers for this soon...)

[@TheGamerboy1103]

Kitty oh that’s guaranteed come on it’s lost and mag, the better question is, how many bloopers are there?

[@iona5917]

Omg. That would be awesome!

[@Lucidtundra]

theres one for story with ink... its pretty funny

[@kevinbeast5894]

oh wow this is so amazing i'm loving this bruh you don't even know, the way lost narrates and acts in her stories i can feel the intensity of her voice when, a dramatic scene comes up and that's truly impressive, and part1?! bro I can't wait to see what happens next year.^^

[@AJponyAPschannel]

Mary gives one hell of an entertaining performance! :) Been awhile since I’ve heard of her... hope she’s doing well.

[@ash-tf3jt]

Truly out of all your stories original or just narrated this one by far has given me so much emotions to feel at once it is truly a masterpiece. I have never felt this much hate for somepony like this before. My grandma always told me that I have a strong motherly instinct and that's all I feel for magpie and curseword through this whole thing I felt like I needed to help them to save them from all of it. It is an amazing story and will stay one of my favorites for a long time.

[@MaryMedley]

I don’t think I’ll ever get over had truly amazing this story is. SHIT. GETS. REEAL. Everyone involved did such an amazing job; it would not be the wodnerful piece it is otherwise. And it was especially a blast coming back at Ink Dye 😈

[@matededdneddy]

You nailed it Carmen you gave ink dye a fantastic performance.

[@cameronjsmith7382]

You were incredible as Ink, how did you come up with the voice of her?

[@Firestarsparkle]

Your amazing

[@jayfether167]

Its 2020 and i still am rewatching... Yay still love it

[@MinersLoveGames]

Oh boy... Some parts of this were truly hard to listen to.

[@Gresekjr122]

Fantastic job on part 1 Lost Narrator. Keep up the good work. Have a good day.

[@AuraNova-AshleyH]

YESSSSSSSSSSS

[@brittanyhellman4912]

Just so beautifully written and read. I'm in love with this whole story

[@vayneinsane]

Jesus, an hour and a half. It's going to take me a bit to fully digest this.

[@serendipitousstudiosyt33]

Curse word is still THE most relatable character in my life.

[@jamr0tt345]

It's not over, nice touch! This narration is really cool, I love your stories!

[@Chronicle_MV]

1:15:55 "There's a chance now for reversion...There's a way into the light...I will guide you back from darkness...I will bring you full delight..."

[@itsjustmenova]

This was so amazing, you’ve once again inspired me to write my own stories, and probably do just this I just wish I could live up to my idol, you Every single story, from the good to the bad, they’ve all changed me, and for that, I thank you

[@cjgillett]

Horror fall on us today as Ink Dye takes center stage she looked magpie in a cage screaming as curse word feels her unbridled rage mind games, guilt, and tragedy see you all at Halloween

[@redchaos3389]

I'm getting this Vemon vipe at the beginning

[@journijones3253]

Same

[@Nyxedmisfit]

Venom. Vibe.

[@AroarinScales1]

That was awesome!! The title scared me right off the bat, thought my headset wasn't working, lol. All the little tid bits we got lead to this, I was so in. The art work was just amazing, and Curse just telling the demon to fuck off, loved it!

[@Sketch_E_Toons]

44:50 OMG I had chills. That art was so cool!

[@chloebouland]

THIS WAS SO GOOD OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2 I AM SO CURIOUS AS TO WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN

[@dinoenglish5431]

I’m only 10 minutes in and DAMM INK WONT BACK OFF!!!!!!! But I love it!!!! Everyone involved did an amazing job and I love this channel!!!!! I can’t wait until the next part.

[@Lucidtundra]

That’s what they do they are so jealous and they love to suck the energy out of you

[@Midge-ou3sz]

A good easter egg, would be after the credits in the readings outside of this series, would be the quote. “But nothing compared to the loss of a beloved” now THAT would be cool.

[@moonshadow3324]

The the part when you and Mag are kissing..... That reminds me when I first kiss my fiance when we got back together. Our parents tore us apart, four months, for six months. You're separated. I had no contact with him oh, nothing. And it wasn't his parents, it was mine. My parents tore us apart. I thought the first day that we got back together, and kiss me... the way that you are describing the feeling, I said exactly the same feeling I had. And now... We engaged. You and mag have been very big part of me not giving up on my fiance, when we were separated... I thank you for that.

[@Lunaflower2016]

This was both scary and sad and I LOVED IT I can’t wait for part 2

[@pon3vinyl586]

Okay I have loved every second of this saga over the last few years and I finally got around to listening to this...part one of the finale and to say the least it was beautifully written and narrated by everyone that took part in it and the imagery throughout the whole thing was perfect but listening to mag and curse actually reunite was really special but to top it off with myuu's "reversion" I dont think there was a dry eye watching when it came to that so amazing work and I literally can not wait for part 2 haven't been this excited for Halloween in a long time!!! ❤

[@parthxus]

Oh hell yes. I have been waiting for this. This is absolutely amazing. I love hearing these stories. Amazing job.

[@drswag0076]

this time ink dye is going too far YOU CAN FIGHT HER!!!!!

[@doobie_mouse2083]

Wow! This reading is super intense. You guys have truly woven a masterpiece of psychological Terror.

[@skaterbirb8648]

It translate to ITS NOT OVER YET Perfect spoopy mood for the spoopy season Great job Lost

[@crimsonhunter9911]

10 out of 10!! I wait all year just to listen to another one of your stories. Can't get enough of them. Never stop being you Lost

[@a.ro5]

*IT'S* *NOT* *OVER.*

[@nxxvie]

patience for a year was sooo worth it😍😍😍😍😍 I almost cried because of the background music was reversion hmmm.....Scenes from 'against the world'...spoiler alert '^

[@tmntgirl4life]

What Mary Medley is Ink Dye?!?! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Bride of Discord’s Fluttershy is this villain!!! Wow. 😱. Mary you are one talented actress

[@creepypastademon5684]

Omg i am crying this is...beautiful...it was far more worth the wait then anything I personally have waited for this story is just perfect...thankyou all for being so amazing

[@delightfullydiscordant]

THIS IS SO AMAZING, I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS XD Also, can I just say I LOVE the art in this.. It's so beautiful.. And everyone who was a part of this, WELL DONE!! YOU ARE AMAZING AND TALENTED!! 🎉. 💜

[@tiacuppe6681]

Wow this is amazing! The voice acting, the art.... it's so well made!

[@seventeen9408]

This story is the best! I’m listening to it over and over again! I love this so much, it’s so creative and so delightfully disturbing😈 I can’t thank you enough for you’re stories Lost and Mag!!!!❤️❤️❤️

[@Glist_]

I've re-listened to this many times since it came out and I still love it!

[@ava-1536]

man I had to stop and go have a drink around 40 minutes this is so vivid I love it lost

[@serinferret1074]

I can't wait for part 2

[@serinferret1074]

This is so good. I love this

[@Skleeck]

I really liked this. I can not wait for part two!

[@destinytyler3432]

This piece was really chilling. Mainly with those poor unfortunate souls.

[@Jerimy_Senpai95]

Can’t believe it took me this long to finally watch this series. As usual you both bring your great flare. This series was dark, enticing, even the right balance of romantic & tragic. Keep up the Good Work Losty & Mag

[@debidenison1507]

Watching this on my birthday already an amazing story! Great job

[@Darkeningg]

Listening to this a second time... gosh it’s just too good.

[@motownwarriano5890]

This is truly amazing.. great story, amazing voice actors and truly awesome work put into this. I eagerly await the next video 😁👍⭐️

[@tochoXK3]

48:14 What a "nice" drawing of pony hell

[@mortcondron]

I've been waiting an entire year for this side note please tell me I don't have to wait another year for part 2 that was so fucking good best episode/part by far keep up the good work

[@MinersLoveGames]

The binary numbers in the description translated: *IT'S NOT OVER.*

[@StarReveurMA]

What other ponies hear: Ink Dye What i hear: Ink *D I E* Also "jumpscare" at 44:50

[@jaspernavall8204]

I somehow missed it

[@CreakyCraft]

I swear TheLostNarrator is the pony version of Steven King! You have no idea how many horror mlp audio videos I've watched and this youtuber out of most always scares me with her voice! (That was supposed to be a compliment btw :3) Keep it up, you deserve all the subs for your hard work and inspirations!

[@thelostnarrator]

Considering how much I love Steven King, I take this as the biggest compliment. Thank you! :)

[@CreakyCraft]

I was thinking with a friend, "I swear she's Steven King's daughter" xD

[@cassidyrosestearns586]

The squealing noise i made when i got this notification was so inuman.

[@blackhat_alicorn_yt8163]

New kind of drinking game: take a shot every time Curseword says a cussword.

[@IZabellaArtZ]

Listening to old content just to hear more of you..,

[@gloops-horror-corner]

You good?

[@totheheelentertainment3629]

I love all the detail and emotion in this. A glorious series indeed

[@emeraldsangel1979]

44:50 OK that's horrifying

[@Jane155-x6d]

Oh my god, finally! Ahhh! This was terrifying, a cacophony of gore! This was so worth the wait!

[@steponick]

In my opinion, I think that this is better than Silent Ponyville 2.

[@TheGamerboy1103]

I am shocked the artist took the time to draw jade jester’s cutie mark, i can tell it’s her cuz of the coat color, the mane color, and the comedy mask on her flank

[@thomasmettham9386]

While watching this it made me feel that having Thor as my favourite Marvel really comes in handy !! Because I thought Ink Dye was just being Loki on you by doing what he does best. It went away in time until it came back. It also seemed she had Batman's Scarecrow as her sidekick by poisoning you giving you your worst fears. ( Those dead ponies that she showed you ) But I'll stick to my Loki theory because of the scene where you thought you saw Curse Word controlling her " Little Bird ".

[@screamitloud7923]

This really hurt to watch-This was absolutely amazing I could feel so much emotion threw this I can’t wait for part 2!

[@alexxpotterpuff6341]

Well now I feel slightly less cheated out of an ending.

[@joelswenson6112]

Wow....great story, can’t wait for part two. Really outdid yourself.

[@Flowerbarrel]

That image of all the dead ponies reminds me of what happens in the Corridor of Revulsion in the first Fallout game. Yikes. "And by Celestia's Burning Mareheat..." That reminds me of Fallout: Equestria and Littlepip of the colorful swears!

[@queenkaterose]

IT'S NOT OVER

[@jacobalexanderselth2302]

On a separate note: this was an amazing piece! Great job to everyone involved!

[@bloodwolf3294]

OMG lost this story so AWESOME if I have more time I would listen to it again

[@sinningiswinning1615]

God I love this. I almost don’t want it to end, but I’m so, SO excited. And I just LOVE the continued use of “cursed” (ha) text and binary code. It’s so awesome, well done everyone!!

[@ScarletHuntress76]

Leave Curseword and Magpie alone Ink Dye, you second rate Ayano Aishi!!!

[@candyrox1493]

I love this so much! The stories you narrate inspire me to continue making my own action/gore mlp comic! 😍 i hope one day I'll finish it and someone as awesome as you will see it

[@heathledgersjoker6262]

Curse word: Who the f*** are you!? Ink dye: We are Venom!

[@revaslatts8011]

Ink Dye? Ugh, I so don't like that mare. Poor MagPie!