The Day I Became 'Dawn [Crossdressing Stories / MtF Transition]

[@bobbiecd8262]

Beautiful story, please do part 2 for Dawn.❤💋

[@JenniferEcto]

We need a part 2.❤

[@bikerheart]

When I saw the video's length I never dreamt it would need a part 2. It is a beautiful story but it needs a follow-up

[@collincluff7955]

I love this story 💕 as it reminded me of an experience that I had when I was younger. Being transgender, these types of things happen more often than you'd think. 🎉 I'd love to hear more stories like this one. 😍

[@juanchevalier1]

Great story. Well written.

[@mrstudios010]

Please a part 2

[@AbigaleStuart]

Liked the story. The moving picture was not as bad as with some of your other stories due to it being smaller and away from the text area. Agree with Jen, need a part 2. Would be interesting to see how far Dawn goes in being herself and her relationship with Alan.

[@collincluff7955]

@@AbigaleStuart the motion is distracting and doesn't add anything to the story.

[@AbigaleStuart]

I agree totally Collin that these ‘motion pictures’ are distracting and useless. Sometimes I only get the chance to read the text and not hear the audio. When only reading I have to cover that part of my iPad screen to stop my eyes wandering to the right! Idiotic distracting feature!

[@daveharrison7970]

A part 2 would be nice to complete a number of threads. Barring that that a rewrite of the ending, or at least an extension to tidy up the various open threads. While the video may present challenges, a change of subjects would be nice. Thanks for asking and I hope this helps.

[@Anthony_Cantos]

Nah Fam, we DEFINITELY need a part two to this story. I need to know asap what's going on with Dawn and Alan

[@Anthony_Cantos]

And especially to see if they successfully dealt with hector

[@peterlovell4617]

The short clip, cycling every few seconds, is quite distracting. A series of stills would be much, much better