The Difference In Editing - Two Pints S9Ep6 Final Scene Remake

This video and its joining videos were made to illustrate how different one piece of footage can be edited and how each deliver completely different results in viewer satisfaction.
The Scene taken is the final scene from the BBC hit show Two pints of lager and a packet of crisps Series 9 Episode 6 which was the series finale.
The scene see's Donna(Natalie Casey) chase Gaz(Will Mellor) through the airport, an emotional scene ensues, a flash back sequence is played and eventually ends in Gaz saying goodbye to Donna.
As a fan of the show, I was saddened by how much they lost in this final scene, the opportunity to bring more emotion was fumbled by the choice of music and choice of scenes for the flashback sequence, on top of this the scene lasted far too long at a whopping 4 minutes 30 seconds, the majority being taken up by the flash back sequence.
As an Industry professional I see this scene having the potential to be extremely powerful, and with a few tweaks, I believe I have created something that is far more emotional and overall more satisfying to watch.
My version of the scene has used no extra footage, but uses the addition of the Westlife track "If I let you go".
It also runs at 2 Minutes 34 seconds, shaving off almost a full 2 minutes whilst retaining everything required to make the scene work and in my own opinion adds more emotion.
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The Difference In Editing - Two pints of lager and a packet of crisps Series 9 Episode 6 Scene Finale Selection Screen.
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