The Galaxy's Most Feared Creature Was Dying, Until a Human Soldier Stepped In! | BEST HFY Stories

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[@davidkarella894]

I too found the repetition of the battle scenes a bit disconcerting. Try varying the descriptive wording of each battle to alleviate the repitition. Refrain from using the same phrasing too often. This is basically a good story.😊

[@labelledamedumanor4876]

Here's my add-on: Years later, another ship lands on Veritas Prime. Professor Alexander Drake Jnr., accompanied by his elderly father, has come to study the fauna of the planet. He was reared on the story of how his dad saved the Tyrant & wished to see the animal if it was still thriving, his wish is granted when he sees said beast resting in a forest glade. But that is not all he gets to see, he sees he is not alone, the Tyrant is surrounded by more of his kind! He had taken a harem of females & bred young with them! The young have now reached adulthood & started breeding with mates they themselves have found, our tyrant is now a proud grandpa! When he catches sight of the father - son duo he immediately recognises them! He has never forgotten, he makes his way over to the old captain & nuzzles him in greeting, his snorting & the glint in his eyes gives the impression of a smirk. "We both did well my friend." The old captain wheezes, touching the tyrant on the snout, "This is my boy & he's got young of his own as well, his oldest kids has begun to start families too!" The Tyrant snorted in what seemed like surprise, "DAD! Did you have to tell him that?" Junior replies, "Well, it's clear he seems to understand son," his father answers, "this universe has much to reveal, much indeed." The Tyrant's family crowds around to meet the 2 humans, eager to get familliar with their patriarch's saviour & his son.

[@SandraNelson063]

Scrub? Scruve? Scrave? Scrov?Oy. Sometimes all you can offer is a dignifiend end. Bodies of the fallen. Sheeeesh.

[@georgearden7075]

The fearsome creature roared and then told the humans, I am hungry so where is my breakfast?

[@richardwalther151]

I am so tired of these A.I. generated stories. Too much repetition with no real plot that a person can connect with, the characters don't feel real. The use of fancy seldom used words does not make for a better story. How many "For the first time ________ feels a deep connection" or similar statements can your listeners be expected to endure? For me the novelty of A.I. stories have warren off. How much longer before the rest of the people come to the same realization? Is it wrong for us your audience to expect better more enjoyable stories? A.I. is not good story telling it is just different and if it does not get better it is doomed to die as nothing more than a passing fad.

[@seanc.cooper4669]

To the people who criticize the writing. Shut up!!!! Are you trying to demoralize young or new writers? Or are you upset because their writing is better than yours?

[@cab8866]

Bot supporting ai...

[@davidkarella894]

No not trying to demoralize young writers. Giving them constructive criticism. Some of the comments are a bit condescending but the basis is correct. There are three different battles but with essentially the same wording. The writer might vary the descriptions more to eliminate the repeated wording and present better interest.

[@Rockribbedman]

This was written by AI. Not good. Something akin to the uncanny valley of amateur robot faces

[@richardwalther151]

In this country we the listeners have a right to express our opinions on what we listen to. How else is the author or owner of this channel going to know if we enjoy the content? If you are going to use A.I. to generate stories use it wisely and listen to the story before it gets published. Common since would tell you that "garbage in equals garbage out". Reuse of the same thing over and over in a story is just garbage. As for demoralizing young or new writers, the use of A.I. does not make you a writer. To be a good writer requires the use of writing skills that A.I. still does not have. Stop trying to take short cuts and spend the time to learn the craft of writing! We your audience will thank you for it.

[@cseale61]

This COULD HAVE been a good story, but the robo-reader kept reading the same things over and over. Try editing these things before you post them. Got to give you a thumbs-down on this one. It's a shame, I really liked the concept.

[@ednorton7715]

Using the same phrase over and over you need to clean it up some but other that it's good Storie

[@GothaCotopaxi]

How many times did You read the same page ? I lost count

[@Rockribbedman]

Written by AI. Not good at all. The repetitive language and terrible lack of imagination. Repetitive attacks, described so superficially that I didn't care about the outcome. Please do better.

[@wilburcollins8342]

The air was thick with whatever over and over

[@dochunnicutt6980]

I liked it, but the repeating stuff over and over had to stop