The Impossible Victory: Five Military Gambles That Changed History

[@kenn4660]

Great piece, Would suggest you slow the narration a knot to allow the ideas to sink, when you narrate as fast we are also rushing through that the ideas don't quite sink in, but an effective piece nonetheless.

[@ThrillingTrueStories]

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! I will play around with pacing, I think you are right. I'm still getting playing with all the inputs and I think this is an area I neglected. Thanks again for watching and for the comment!

[@kuluvas2]

These are, these were, these, these.... You waste about 10 minutes in the beginning saying these are, were...etc. you only need to say it once🤦

[@ThrillingTrueStories]

It's a good point. I will work on this. Thanks!

[@matthewarcher3024]

Ok. That was a great video

[@rossmacrae749]

Really? I'm 2 minutes 30 all he's done is ramble and say the same shit over and over again in different ways. Edit: Lmao nah u have to be a friend of the creator. Description and illustration of Alexander at Gaugamela is just laughably bad, vague descriptions of events with AI art, no context or numbers, no real tactics discussed. How are u supposed to understand the scale or have context for certain actions when ur looking at AI art that looks more like Lord of the Rings than a real battle? Watch Kings and Generals if you want to actually understand some details.

[@ThrillingTrueStories]

Thank you!!

[@ThrillingTrueStories]

That is just the introduction, it gets more in depth later. I will work on reducing the introduction, to get straight to the meat of the subject.