The Tooth Fairy - Nick Gisburne

[@Darwinsgift]

Terrific! Your readings have become even creepier!

[@Atarius]

Inspiring, I've begun writing myself and attaining this level of talent is a goal for sure. Well done.

[@HaleyMary]

This poem would make a great premise for a horror/suspense/thriller movie about the tooth fairy. Great write!

[@Atarius]

Thanks that helps, keep up the good work sir!

[@Atarius]

I'd also appreciate any advice if you have any to share.

[@Gisburne2000]

I now record my voice in the morning while it still has a whole-grain texture and I'm closer to the end of a bad night's sleep :o)

[@annonimus2247]

Great

[@Gisburne2000]

I can only speak for myself, but I rely heavily on a thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary - if the word I'm trying to rhyme doesn't let me do it, I find another from the thesaurus and try to rhyme that instead. It's like rummaging for pieces to fit into a jigsaw. Also, pick a rhyming scheme which 'fits'. I spend a lot of time with that. As for the story, I get a lot of inspiration from fantasy art which often suggests something to me. The audio part? Read out loud - a lot! You do get better!

[@Gisburne2000]

I certainly did

[@wmperkins25]

Well, aren’t you a little ray of sunshine- scared the heck outa me - dee- lite - full reading !!

[@Gisburne2000]

When they said "won't somebody think of the children?" I'm pretty sure the somebody they had in mind wasn't me :o)

[@practicalmagic9]

appropriately creepy my ytube friend...like fairy tales should be.:D

[@OMgnosis]

I dedicate this tooth fairy, to all deplorable dental and medical insurance practices.

[@BenjaminBadbrother]

o - o O_O O0O Damn, that is good stuff! Great stuff, sir.