"The Train I'm On" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

[@microwavetrash2501]

me: *falling asleep* MCP: Hey there kids!

[@noahbonanno6783]

This always happens then I realized I missed half of the story

[@luke.thedrifter2281]

As terrifying as that field of crystals seems, I wanna see it. Seems miserably peaceful.

[@alexsboring6999]

You got 69 likes, I’m gonna ruin it.

[@jeice3714]

Compared to hell, damn right it's peaceful

[@ValianceXx]

Sounds like the Elysian fields

[@luke.thedrifter2281]

@@alexsboring6999 aw man...I missed the 69 likes 😂😂😂

[@cashallenojaramilla7524]

it’s the Microsoft field

[@coalcreekdefense8106]

I feel like making a D&D one-shot campaign based on this.

[@turtl3warr1or]

Dude that's the best idea I've heard all night

[@existenceisrelative]

The _most_ fun would be when they reached Pazuzu's realm. He's the only one of those types who has a definite sense of humor and fun about his work.

[@plinko-moss]

That sounds so fun! Can I join if you make it?

[@Dapriestmon8516]

Heck yea man sign me up to lol

[@DietScrungo]

DO IT

[@jaybradford1023]

I could be completely wrong here, and I can't put all the pieces together, but was the guardian John? He had a mangled leg, so did John. He said it was a recent injury caused by Sentinels. And time seemed to pass differently. Much slower. So maybe when John died he became the guardian? But he'd been there millennia before Mia and Thomas showed up. I mean, when he found Thomas on the train he thought he only been gone a few hours, but Mia said he'd been gone two days. It's just a theory though.

[@phillipferguson7455]

Seems completely possible to me.

[@them4licious0ne]

i guess that makes sense considering time doesnt seem to run linearly in that place, you could say it parallels the guy on interstellar where he died on a planet that orbits a blackhole and when they got there, the guy only died a few hours ago

[@Hellnogizmo]

I thought the same thing when the leg injury was first mentioned. A Sentinel doing it sealed it for me.

[@sengan2475]

fantastic theory

[@blackknight50277621]

Absolutely love these longer ones Helps me get through the day

[@lanceoswalt8222]

Me to I’m a macanic and this is lit

[@tashconklin1828]

@@lanceoswalt8222 qqqqqqq

[@tashconklin1828]

@@lanceoswalt8222 qq

[@deltax8202]

I listened to some of your older creepypastas, and I noticed you don't use the creepy voice-changers you used to use, examples being in "Phantom Possession Syndrome" and "A Dead God". I'd love to hear you use them again someday. The way you delivered this whole story is amazing. You express real emotion when reading these stories, and that's why we love listening to you read. Have a good day

[@victoriataylor5584]

I like those too.

[@kacheymeow490]

Listen to "the dark somnium" the best in my opinion, with sound effects and all

[@josephlegg6986]

totally agree it really did give that extra extra

[@tyshaw1819]

The ending actually had me in tears, i loved this story, still not as good as the gas station mysteries tho

[@thepartingglass2538]

Ty Shaw yea not gonna lie that ending kinda made me teary eyed

[@connorfinnell5383]

I love how you pronounced Gehenna correctly the first three times then after that it was genea

[@connorfinnell5383]

And then Guyana

[@shadowknight1990o]

could be trying to throw the old demonetize bots off.

[@misdafireinfexus5828]

@@shadowknight1990o whats it even mean

[@shadowknight1990o]

@@misdafireinfexus5828 Hell.

[@sentzkal8287]

Dont forget giyena

[@Ajexec]

"What happened to your leg?" "It was a recent injury from the centennials" after he gets caught he tells them to go without him sounds an awful lot like the officer

[@yoyobeerman1289]

That's an interesting theory. We already know that time moves differently down there.

[@Ajexec]

@makeanewchronoplz you got the message

[@DUECE12412]

The officer from where ?

[@DUECE12412]

Are you referencing another creepy pastas?

[@Ajexec]

@@DUECE12412 its been 11 months since I listened to it but I remember someone dying on the train near the end. I think that is the same person at the end who has been there a while because time doesnt work the same there

[@Incred_Canemian]

Assuming a typical speed of a passenger train (59mph) this train would've gone 24,072 miles in 17 days, just 829 miles short of the circumference of the Earth. It will cover that remaining 829 in just a few hours. If the train is moving in a straight line then it will have had a net velocity of 0 (relative to the Earth).

[@KiwiFights]

Incredible Canemian Circumference of one plane of the earth not the diameter. Diameter means one side to the opposite side, relative to the earth the velocity is still 59mph. It’s relative velocity is 0 if it travels around the entire world back to where it started.

[@Incred_Canemian]

@@KiwiFights I meant circumference, nice catch. The math is right, I just used the wrong word.

[@jacopclark4403]

@Pralaya Bodyworks did u just say the earth is flat?

[@justanerd4527]

Pralaya Bodyworks are you serious or are you trolling us?

[@KiwiFights]

Pralaya Bodyworks I think for explanation sakes it’s better to assume the earth is spherical. But yeah more than one person has. Regardless the velocity is 0 if they return to the starting position and the speed is still 59mph

[@nixmurphy6875]

I truly enjoyed this beautiful story. I love when you get sooooo excited, you raise your voice and my heart race. Im perfectly Paranoid. Waiting for the next scene to be described. You give your listeners real emotions without telling us how to feel. So easy to follow along to the point of completely absorbing the story youre telling. Love love love, this station.

[@Behemoth9030]

As soon as Phillip said “Omoxyillin” my first thought was “shit, I’m resistant” 😂

[@saltyseadog4719]

😂huhh

[@lemon-cherrygacha9142]

*"where would i even go? to double hell?"*

[@archterran6734-phasedout]

Hell: Well, you see I'm like an onion.... I have layers.

[@connor48880]

Welcome to Double Hell! What can I do you for?

[@gargles5270]

hell 2: the squeakual

[@starshineproductions9087]

Hazbin Hotel!!!!

[@LexiLove145]

Do you know she is right angel

[@soulking6801]

Yes a long story this stuff motivates me to do work lol that is for all the uploads keep them coming

[@the7thseven873]

When you say. "Work" do you actually mean hands-on labour work or desk work like Homework? If it's the latter. Then... Wow. Congrats.

[@DinoCism]

I've never heard the word "tendrils" so many times in my life...

[@TheVividKiWi]

Agreed

[@Lancelot0311]

Clearly you have not read Lovecraftian horror

[@ThreeofMoths]

You clearly haven't read a fanfiction with the mention or description of slenderman, then, have you?

[@christianzamora4639]

Idk why but that last part felt so sweet but sad, it was a huge sacrifice...

[@hazartboss]

This story kinda reminds me of Infinity Train. The tentacle monster the train, another dimension.

[@katylepetsos7512]

I’m gonna have to check out that cartoon

[@hazartboss]

@@katylepetsos7512 check out the pilot episode its kn KZbin for free, just look up infinity train pilot

[@taylatay4100]

That's what I was just thinking! A messed up version of infinity train

[@karmaakabane7772]

Thank you u are the goat mrcreepypasta like really keep dropping these bangers

[@deathbysockss5508]

lol ive never heard someone call someone a goat as a compliment befor

[@karmaakabane7772]

deathbysockss goat as in greatest of all time

[@deathbysockss5508]

ohhh i get you fair man

[@karmaakabane7772]

deathbysockss yeah

[@yeshuaischrist9951]

@@karmaakabane7772 THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK? OR PART BAPHOMET

[@maleficent2993]

Dang you MrCreepyPasta.... I have been sucked into yet another nail biting, edge of seat sitting epic tale that I end with alligator treats pouring out of my face..... I love it.

[@MynAnthony]

"Geneya" Hmm, never heard of it. "It's hell in the Bible!" ... Wait, is he mispronouncing Gehenna? **checks original story** Yep. XD

[@84superninja]

This was fantastic. The writer nailed this and so did you sir. Well done

[@Wonderoddity]

This one is interesting. (Spoiler ahead) People were asking the narrator how he was able to survive without food or water for two weeks among the surveyors but in the end it becomes obvious: out of the entirety of people on that train, he was deemed “most fit” for this title of gatekeeper to hell. That’s why he never got so much as a twisted ankle. (Idk if that could be symbolic for something like achilles’ heel? His weakness being the fact that unlike the others who were on the train with people they knew, he was a complete outsider with no memory of what life he lived previously, therefore he was obliged to take the guardian’s place and set Mia free.) just a theory though.

[@ravendangernavy3575]

It's twelve A.M so timestamp 42:09

[@davo_9673]

Did you ever finish the story?

[@ravendangernavy3575]

@@davo_9673 yes I did

[@davo_9673]

@@ravendangernavy3575 very cool

[@gildartsclive1315]

Amazing as always glad were getting back to theology style

[@ubershrimp69]

“Blains a pain and that is the truth”

[@earndoggy]

Ha, I'm not the only one who thought of that!

[@existenceisrelative]

"Gehenna" means hell. "Jenny Yeah" means a self-published magazine for pre-teen girls.

[@nevjordan1079]

Absolutely splendid story. I've been away from Creepypasta for a few years now, but I can honestly say this is my new favourite!

[@deadramaster]

I love how amazingly quick you are with uploading full runs of stories - Big ups as always my dude

[@bc8796]

ToT it was the left right game all over again! Happy I held myself back to listen in one go. So good

[@them4licious0ne]

BC87 loved that one as well

[@mornin6079]

Man i want a second part of this story of just Thomas growing into the next guardian

[@aworldtowin955]

Holy shit this story was intense!! It's hard to get over this amazing creepypasta lmao

[@nesy3634]

*When you are the chosen one.* "...Oh whew, time to meet some demon gurls."

[@ambroseandersonmusic]

*arrives in station* 'fantasy costcoooo, where all your dreams come trueeeee'

[@ThreeofMoths]

You thought of this as well??

[@Gshkent]

How cool it would be to be the person to create this story! Also to be the person bringing the story to life! Both author and reader you guys rock! I can only hope to be as cool as either one of ya.

[@swiftpig1229]

i listen to these stories while i paint or clean they are really good i love your narration :)

[@HarmfulGiggles]

Yooooo this one was awesome. This is such a cool universe.

[@mottdropsie]

It takes a special kind of creepypasta to traumatize me. This is one of them.

[@lavuntecolquitt]

This was far too late but I luv this and wished I got this YEARS ago! Glorious as usual

[@Shxnkzwrld_]

I feel like grass not moving in the wind as it blows fairly hard is kind of a big detail

[@them4licious0ne]

Sasuke Uzamaki not unless the train was moving lol, and grass is small, you wouldn’t notice it unless you see it directly, which mia did

[@renatabubblegum6524]

These stories gave me too many feels🤧

[@pillbugheart]

Holy shit i love this narrating! It actually gives life to the creepypasta, unlike some of the other ones who narrate in a nice, but monotone voice

[@honey3631]

2:20 ok do you guys ever try to yell in a dream but can only whisper? every time i try to yell in a dream thats all i can do

[@wholechalk1517]

This one is definitely up there with the goods ones, good shit

[@drew1554]

Fantastic story

[@claredyj2015]

Ooof, this is just brilliant!!! Loved it!!

[@mouse_burger8051]

i think that the guardian was john i mean time is different in hell and he was wounded by a sentinel in the leg and he thinks its recent and john got the wound recently. also like jhon he tells them to leave and stays behind

[@JohnsonFonDon]

Probably John. Johns a badass

[@Triqii]

My favorite part is the protagonist being the only person that knows Morse code. Then the announcement says “18 hours DONT get off the train” and the first thing he tells everyone is how much they have to get off the train right this instant lmaooo

[@THINK86200]

Damn this needs to be a movie!!!

[@sandracal92]

Dang this was good

[@tylermckillop408]

This would be an amazing virtual reality game to wake up into

[@robbabcock_]

Very cool story!

[@DevonCosmos]

There is basically a game about this now, and I love that.

[@RudeReaper]

Good stories are easy to keep up with no matter how long

[@legobattledroid4110]

me when I hear MrCreepypasta say the space between: HA! HA HE SAID IT, HE SAID THE THING!

[@l33r99]

This was really good

[@jasonbernard9012]

“We stood there staring as the crystals started spreading to his lungs and before lung his entire body had turned to rock” 😂😂😂

[@mazen6446]

And that's funny because?

[@saltyseadog4719]

Huh😂😂😂

[@michellemoeckly]

🖤💚🖤❤🖤💚🖤 love love love!!! I've been waiting for the complete story to work to. Back to my daughter's crochet coat 😝

[@genericwhitekidthesecond4330]

Under the arc of a weather stain boards Ancient goblins, and warlords Come out the ground, not making a sound The smell of death is all around And the night when the cold wind blows No one cares, nobody knows I don't want to be buried in a pet cemetery I don't want to live my life again I don't want to be buried in a pet cemetery I don't want to live my life again Follow Victor to the sacred place This ain't a dream, I can't escape Molars and fangs, the clicking of bones Spirits moaning among the tombstones And the night, when the moon is bright Someone cries, something ain't right I don't want to be buried in a pet cemetery I don't want to live my life again I don't want to be buried in a pet cemetery I don't want to live my life again The moon is full, the air is still All of the sudden I feel a chain Victor is grinning, flesh is rotting away Skeletons dance, I curse this day And the night when the wolves cry out Listen close and you can hear me shout I don't want to be buried in a pet cemetery I don't want to live my life again - The Ramones

[@harrybaldino8955]

So basically infinity train from Netflix neat

[@noobatcoc]

Who needs sleep I must listen

[@echelonxc2852]

Really good captivating story

[@phoenixxxashez]

I'm sad John died. He was my favorite character in this.

[@ninanightmare3371]

Thanks!

[@puddleofaids]

Well done.👍👍👍

[@michaelseidel952]

The guy that became the guardian has my respect 💯 %.✌️☮️

[@mikem5820]

I love you MCP. Love the stories, love your personality, love your soul. With that said, I'm not reading what you are, but if you are reading "Gehenna" thr pronunciation is geh-HEHN-uh with a g sound at the beginning not a J. If it's not that I apologize! If it is just letting you know. Keep up the awesome work man.

[@ishagnannys7525]

Listening to this in the bath

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

It's The Haunted Train from Hey Arnold lol

[@realtalkwithj-man5195]

14:11 it's a supernatural train where did they get food and water from ?

[@cicadianrhythm]

I had to check the original story, because it sounded like the destination was Guiana--which would be a way more mysterious destination for a train traveling through an interdimensional void than Hell, if you ask me. And then it sounded like he was saying "Jenaya", which made me think they were talking about two different things.

[@aa_2054]

Oh hell yeah!!!

[@usamarayana5288]

Make a movie of this trust me you’ll hit it big 😂

[@randomsimpson]

Damn. The new season of "Infinity Train" sounds INTENSE

[@genreboy3802]

This was a cool story

[@angrypomeraniantrainer618]

I really just sat through a 1 hour story and thought it was 10 minutes

[@justaneditygangstar]

Damn what a good story

[@shadowbladergod2140]

Full story time to find sleep fuel

[@suzaan1943]

Listening to this on the 29th of November ;)

[@KM-uh5ro]

That was so good! 😍😍😍

[@trapscancreate5760]

Was the writer of this British. Because that would explain a bit

[@mira_115]

40:00

[@mandus.pandus]

I'm listening to this on a train

[@hellcaster6212]

Bruh awesome stuff to listen to during school

[@Taelyr]

Wait how did they get there in the first place? Sorry I’m dumb and feel like I might’ve missed it...

[@chopianist5226]

Lithium Princess The guardian was old and so liable to make mistakes. It was a mistake on his part.

[@crowleyforpresident1283]

And my night is now way better

[@TheAthens619]

Damn it, I already listen to this by Dr. Creepen, I don't mind listening to this again by yoi

[@yowhatup2941]

Big Smoke would like to see the train's Location.

[@harleyblack1154]

I'm on a train rn lol

[@poponolo4307]

I am on a train I can't complain

[@Alowishus52]

Cool.. but greyhound has social distancing rules.... soooo.....I'm gonna miss this one! Love the tales from the gas station with Jack n Jerry!! Those are epic!

[@merriichin]

this one was so good!!!! Cant believe I didnt hear it before omgmgmgm

[@-DEATHSTROKE]

Sorry I'm late, but thank you 🙏🏻

[@clocktomato4199]

I like how they just rely on john because he's big

[@Kenzaaa123]

Way down Hadestown way down under the ground 🎭

[@casperrevived3967]

Hell yeah

[@KillerSnoofie]

very nice

[@Name-yv2zq]

dude Imagine being named Mia watching this..

[@chapter8657]

Imagine if she lost her memory after her return and she hears this now

[@user-TheEngineer]

By Thomas. Goodluck in your new job 😊

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

I cannot be the only one thinking that the ending made u think of avengers infinity war when they were trying to sacrifice each other for the soul stone. I bet the writer got the idea from that.

[@YoruchiSenpai]

Can this be a movie please

[@White_Owl217]

I really hate that men’s soap add. ITS FUCKING SOAP A 5 MINUTE AD IS NOT NEEDED!