THE WAITRESS WAS PARALYZED WHEN SHE SAW HER CHILDHOOD PHOTO IN A BLACK FRAME IN THE MANSION...

[@livinganamazinglife1]

What a heartwarming twist! It's amazing how the past can come back to surprise us in such meaningful ways. ❤

[@larrymurdock8175]

This is unfortunate. A good story with no ending. This will make me think twice before watching more stories.

[@leedavis-m2o]

So many of these stories have no ending. When I comment saying how can someone put something like this up, then I get warnings from youtube about cyberbullying. Some of these people should not be posting.

[@MaryGreenwood-x1q]

Where is the rest of the story???

[@edwinaviet1270]

Yes , this story definitely needs a part two!!!

[@SioasiTaliai]

@edwinaviet1270

[@robbio1100]

Where's the rest of the story? Did they find her mother? Did she get what was rightfully hers?

[@claudioclaro7773]

Huh? What an ending...everything hanging on the air?!

[@DottyWallace]

JUST LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES, THERE IS NOT AN ENDING OR FINAL CONCLUSION TO THE STORY!!!!!!! IT IS JUST SUDDENLY CHOPPED OFF!!!!!!! WHY DON’T THE STORIES HAVE A PROPER ENDING????????

[@daff55odil]

I am slightly disappointed in the ending.

[@amazingstoryforlife1]

As she approached, her fingers tingled with an unfamiliar energy. She recalled that old treehouse, where they carved their names into the wood, dreams of the future swirling above them like the leaves in the breeze. This mansion was a world away from that innocence.

[@robbio1100]

Was Harland arrested? It was a good story but a terrible ending makes the story obsolete

[@AbCa-kx4yn]

Sloppy AI generated pictures that don’t even jive with the story. Lazy!

[@rehanashah9247]

??? Incomplete why bother

[@puananihoku7302]

Waste of time, long and boring... No ending for this story. Feels like a part 1.

[@m.mickeypayne9811]

Gee, thanks for spoiling it for the rest of us.

[@puananihoku7302]

@@m.mickeypayne9811 Your welcome. if your going to listen to a story, why do you come to the comments section before you listen? I come to the comments section to see if people like it I will watch or if they dont like when the story has no ending, or poor writing or editing, I wont waste time on it. And in this case I warned others about the no ending. Dont read comments before you listen then it will not spoil for you. And I'm not the only one warning others.

[@patriciareeves3471]

I agree with you!

[@gloaggabaoma1859]

Where's the Part 2

[@cheryllindsey-n2z]

Unfinished. I am a writer & this should have never been published. It is not a completed story but writings as if written as a child's made up stories. The content is empty & writing style is non-existent. I apologize to all readers for such an incompetent person. They have no right to call themselves writers. As for apology, also know that all who write, some are actual writers who can write well.

[@Norma-cc8ic]

It held my interest right up to the end, & then THERE WAS NONE ! 1000 percent totally disappointing ! ! ! !

[@brendalohrke2402]

A SERIOUS STORY WITH NO CLOSURE. WHAT KIND OF WRITER IS THIS!!!?

[@leedavis-m2o]

Carlos is stirring a pot of coffee?????

[@godlovesyousomuch5894]

These stories are made by AI right?

[@Lostchild-ki3rv]

Add part two

[@francit4856]

This is like an overwordy book that has the last few chapters missing. What a waste of my time.

[@terivertefeuille6996]

That was my first thought when it ended !!!

[@mariettalim4357]

YES A GOOD STORY BUT NO CLOSURE.NEEDS A PART 2

[@TheHumanExperience-p6z]

Super!!!

[@dianneferraro7969]

Too many commercials. Hard to watch if you are resting with your eyes closed just listening. Every few minutes you need to skip the commercials.

[@FaithIragould-ge3ru]

Is there a continuation to this story?

[@lindasuehall6303]

I need an ending.!!!!!!

[@susanroldan2254]

No need to continue watching when the story has no ending! 😢

[@icehousebeverages6430]

I was liking the suspense until the unfinished ending. Part 2 wouldn't have gone astray.

[@brendalohrke2402]

STUPID STORY THAT LEAVES THE LISTENER HANGING. RIDICULOUS. AN AMATURE COULD HAVE DONE BETTER

[@angietodd-dennis5292]

Thos story is too tedious and unbelievable

[@TrendReddit123]

(11:09 - 15:54) Lla learns from a staff member, Marta, about a tragic accident that befell the Waywright family years ago. The realization that her picture is connected to them leads her to suspect that she may be linked to their tragic history, potentially involving her own parents' deaths.

[@alialabry7548]

Why the story ended before she got her rights, this is not fair !

[@aqrst1430]

I won't watch it, because of these comments, but I wish people would be more genteel. The author needs to polish his ways. Enough!

[@MaryGreenwood-x1q]

Really, is there a second part?

[@calvinmanuel8339]

Why only half storys😢and not post the rest of the story

[@williamwuinn6601]

I'm sorry I started this story after reading the comments I will not continue with it.

[@leedavis-m2o]

All these comments about the ending and if there will be a second part. Yet you the uploader, do not respond. What is wrong with you? I hope KZbin will stop your channel.

[@DonnaAschenbrenner-yy2yq]

What the heck half of a story?

[@DilyseD]

What a ridiculous story. A waitress taking on business titans.

[@sakesama1]

well, where is pqrt 2, I hate stories that leave you hanging ! NO SUBSCRIBE OR LIKE till I get paret 2!

[@micheleracine2871]

so ridiculous : always the same texts probably all written by the same person, the poor girl, the millionnaire, the marble floors and the chandeliers, etc. ; no inventivity, so boring and dull !

[@creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973]

Well don’t ruin it for the rest of us jeez

[@kens32052]

And no ending. Also they sure found Edgar fast. Marta never said her mother was still alive.

[@brendalohrke2402]

THE NARRATOR REPEATS THE SAME THINGS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN......

[@puananihoku7302]

@@creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973 I wouldnt listen to this knowing there is no ending like it got cut short or maybe its a part 1 but no part 2.

[@aqrst1430]

For heaven sakes, stop ruining everything for the author and us! Like by stopping to watch these! There are great old movies on KZbin!

[@edwinaviet1270]

Why make in complete stories, especially with the truth and conclusion hanging in the balance?? This is not correct.

[@mariettalim4357]

where is the continuation of this stor

[@terezatsiokana7453]

I like it .The conclusion,.its not necessary to elaborate more.Laila found Edgar and from there the story stop.meaning ,Laila found Edgar with him they will her mother Edgar will testify against the Uncle the uncle will go to prison and Laaila will get back her rights, her fortune etc..the narrator don't need to elaborate more.Laila found what she needs for justice.and the sory goes on.. That is the end.

[@VivienneJaneTebbs]

wanrt the end!!!

[@brendalohrke2402]

SO THE ENDING IS THIS..... HARLAN WAS TAKEN TO COURT. AND PROSECUTED FOR HIS CRIMES. A LIFE SENTENCE WAS HIS PUNISHMENT. THE END

[@williamwuinn6601]

A 5yr is not a baby.

[@elizabethpascalli2233]

Get back to the. storyiwhachthis2story

[@MaryGreenwood-x1q]

Really, is there a second part?