What a heartwarming twist! It's amazing how the past can come back to surprise us in such meaningful ways. ❤
@larrymurdock817513 күн бұрын
This is unfortunate. A good story with no ending. This will make me think twice before watching more stories.
@leedavis-m2o12 күн бұрын
So many of these stories have no ending. When I comment saying how can someone put something like this up, then I get warnings from youtube about cyberbullying. Some of these people should not be posting.
@MaryGreenwood-x1q13 күн бұрын
Where is the rest of the story???
@edwinaviet127014 күн бұрын
Yes , this story definitely needs a part two!!!
@SioasiTaliai14 күн бұрын
@edwinaviet1270
@robbio110013 күн бұрын
Where's the rest of the story? Did they find her mother? Did she get what was rightfully hers?
@claudioclaro777314 күн бұрын
Huh? What an ending...everything hanging on the air?!
@DottyWallace12 күн бұрын
JUST LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES, THERE IS NOT AN ENDING OR FINAL CONCLUSION TO THE STORY!!!!!!! IT IS JUST SUDDENLY CHOPPED OFF!!!!!!! WHY DON’T THE STORIES HAVE A PROPER ENDING????????
@daff55odil14 күн бұрын
I am slightly disappointed in the ending.
@amazingstoryforlife19 күн бұрын
As she approached, her fingers tingled with an unfamiliar energy. She recalled that old treehouse, where they carved their names into the wood, dreams of the future swirling above them like the leaves in the breeze. This mansion was a world away from that innocence.
@robbio110013 күн бұрын
Was Harland arrested? It was a good story but a terrible ending makes the story obsolete
@AbCa-kx4yn14 күн бұрын
Sloppy AI generated pictures that don’t even jive with the story. Lazy!
@rehanashah924714 күн бұрын
??? Incomplete why bother
@puananihoku730214 күн бұрын
Waste of time, long and boring... No ending for this story. Feels like a part 1.
@m.mickeypayne981113 күн бұрын
Gee, thanks for spoiling it for the rest of us.
@puananihoku730213 күн бұрын
@@m.mickeypayne9811 Your welcome. if your going to listen to a story, why do you come to the comments section before you listen? I come to the comments section to see if people like it I will watch or if they dont like when the story has no ending, or poor writing or editing, I wont waste time on it. And in this case I warned others about the no ending. Dont read comments before you listen then it will not spoil for you. And I'm not the only one warning others.
@patriciareeves347112 күн бұрын
I agree with you!
@gloaggabaoma185914 күн бұрын
Where's the Part 2
@cheryllindsey-n2z13 күн бұрын
Unfinished. I am a writer & this should have never been published. It is not a completed story but writings as if written as a child's made up stories. The content is empty & writing style is non-existent. I apologize to all readers for such an incompetent person. They have no right to call themselves writers. As for apology, also know that all who write, some are actual writers who can write well.
@Norma-cc8ic13 күн бұрын
It held my interest right up to the end, & then THERE WAS NONE ! 1000 percent totally disappointing ! ! ! !
@brendalohrke240214 күн бұрын
A SERIOUS STORY WITH NO CLOSURE. WHAT KIND OF WRITER IS THIS!!!?
@leedavis-m2o12 күн бұрын
Carlos is stirring a pot of coffee?????
@godlovesyousomuch589411 күн бұрын
These stories are made by AI right?
@Lostchild-ki3rv14 күн бұрын
Add part two
@francit485614 күн бұрын
This is like an overwordy book that has the last few chapters missing. What a waste of my time.
@terivertefeuille699614 күн бұрын
That was my first thought when it ended !!!
@mariettalim435714 күн бұрын
YES A GOOD STORY BUT NO CLOSURE.NEEDS A PART 2
@TheHumanExperience-p6z6 күн бұрын
Super!!!
@dianneferraro796910 күн бұрын
Too many commercials. Hard to watch if you are resting with your eyes closed just listening. Every few minutes you need to skip the commercials.
@FaithIragould-ge3ru14 күн бұрын
Is there a continuation to this story?
@lindasuehall630314 күн бұрын
I need an ending.!!!!!!
@susanroldan225410 күн бұрын
No need to continue watching when the story has no ending! 😢
@icehousebeverages643014 күн бұрын
I was liking the suspense until the unfinished ending. Part 2 wouldn't have gone astray.
@brendalohrke240214 күн бұрын
STUPID STORY THAT LEAVES THE LISTENER HANGING. RIDICULOUS. AN AMATURE COULD HAVE DONE BETTER
@angietodd-dennis529214 күн бұрын
Thos story is too tedious and unbelievable
@TrendReddit12310 күн бұрын
(11:09 - 15:54) Lla learns from a staff member, Marta, about a tragic accident that befell the Waywright family years ago. The realization that her picture is connected to them leads her to suspect that she may be linked to their tragic history, potentially involving her own parents' deaths.
@alialabry75488 күн бұрын
Why the story ended before she got her rights, this is not fair !
@aqrst14305 күн бұрын
I won't watch it, because of these comments, but I wish people would be more genteel. The author needs to polish his ways. Enough!
@MaryGreenwood-x1q13 күн бұрын
Really, is there a second part?
@calvinmanuel83396 күн бұрын
Why only half storys😢and not post the rest of the story
@williamwuinn660110 күн бұрын
I'm sorry I started this story after reading the comments I will not continue with it.
@leedavis-m2o12 күн бұрын
All these comments about the ending and if there will be a second part. Yet you the uploader, do not respond. What is wrong with you? I hope KZbin will stop your channel.
@DonnaAschenbrenner-yy2yq14 күн бұрын
What the heck half of a story?
@DilyseD14 күн бұрын
What a ridiculous story. A waitress taking on business titans.
@sakesama19 күн бұрын
well, where is pqrt 2, I hate stories that leave you hanging ! NO SUBSCRIBE OR LIKE till I get paret 2!
@micheleracine287114 күн бұрын
so ridiculous : always the same texts probably all written by the same person, the poor girl, the millionnaire, the marble floors and the chandeliers, etc. ; no inventivity, so boring and dull !
@creativeroadsartbyjulialee997314 күн бұрын
Well don’t ruin it for the rest of us jeez
@kens3205214 күн бұрын
And no ending. Also they sure found Edgar fast. Marta never said her mother was still alive.
@brendalohrke240214 күн бұрын
THE NARRATOR REPEATS THE SAME THINGS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN......
@puananihoku730214 күн бұрын
@@creativeroadsartbyjulialee9973 I wouldnt listen to this knowing there is no ending like it got cut short or maybe its a part 1 but no part 2.
@aqrst143014 күн бұрын
For heaven sakes, stop ruining everything for the author and us! Like by stopping to watch these! There are great old movies on KZbin!
@edwinaviet127014 күн бұрын
Why make in complete stories, especially with the truth and conclusion hanging in the balance?? This is not correct.
@mariettalim435714 күн бұрын
where is the continuation of this stor
@terezatsiokana745314 күн бұрын
I like it .The conclusion,.its not necessary to elaborate more.Laila found Edgar and from there the story stop.meaning ,Laila found Edgar with him they will her mother Edgar will testify against the Uncle the uncle will go to prison and Laaila will get back her rights, her fortune etc..the narrator don't need to elaborate more.Laila found what she needs for justice.and the sory goes on.. That is the end.
@VivienneJaneTebbs11 күн бұрын
wanrt the end!!!
@brendalohrke240214 күн бұрын
SO THE ENDING IS THIS..... HARLAN WAS TAKEN TO COURT. AND PROSECUTED FOR HIS CRIMES. A LIFE SENTENCE WAS HIS PUNISHMENT. THE END