The Last Apple [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

[@scottmaurning9591]

death: raise this barn, raise this barn, 1, 2, 3, 4. me: damn! that's a lot of irony

[@ThHellhound]

It was probably "raze" with a z.

[@57575756]

I was hoping Applejack plan was to call Celestia in. Death doesn't fuck with Celestia. She crushes it under her hooves and laughs upon her immortal throne! Awesome reading.

[@PrinceArtemis]

So, even death can get pissed off :P

[@DatOneAsianKid]

*Death

[@DatOneAsianKid]

+GamingWithJacob342 sorry I had too xD

[@PrinceArtemis]

You silly GamingWithJacob342

[@GutiSerenade]

This turned out amazing Lost! The music selection was superb, and dat rendition of Promise at the end! GAH!~ Beautiful work as always

[@TsuriaDragon]

Great voice acting as death :)

[@Bewildering3630]

12:40-Hold on, douse the burning barn with ''fire''

[@WolfHeadBrony]

I've never listened to Lost read a grim dark before. Thanks to twitter, I wanted this one to be my first. This was masterfully executed! I still have chills.

[@killerfrostbite]

She has like 10 billion cousin's dou..

[@Mespoina]

Good point

[@chaos_opossum]

Oof apocalypse I guess then

[@DinosaurNick]

she did say "who'd you take this..." implying her parents weren't the only deaths ...

[@Vill-e3v]

Geez, this guy is an even darker writer than I am! Well written sir, well written indeed...

[@Monteeize]

Thank you. This is my (ANGRY_RainbowDash) KZbin profile.

[@Vill-e3v]

The Brony Writer Kudos to you, sir. I'm gonna have to up my darkfic game for this one...

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@Vill-e3v Wow and poor Applejack

[@robertavram1388]

death is not your enemy it is a long and lasting friendship that you make whether you like to or not death never lies nor cheats Nor hates anyone death never deceives no tricks you death is your closest friend from beginning till the end of your life you and death are closer than any bonds between friends family or lovers death has a warm smile and sad eyes so when you meet death treat death as an old friend and go in peace Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more.

[@Krisskrossratsauce]

robert avram Your literally making me want to cry...

[@robertavram1388]

XPGamers [GAMING|ANIMATION|BRONIES] me or the video ?

[@Krisskrossratsauce]

robert avram Your comment ;3;

[@robertavram1388]

XPGamers [GAMING|ANIMATION|BRONIES] thank you i try my best. :D

[@Krisskrossratsauce]

robert avram =)

[@kelseybailey4364]

applejack you do relize you can't kill death. he is immortal.

[@1God1Fury]

You can't kill something that is not even alive.

[@eevee1583]

Kelsey Bailey you can't kill death, death is dead. HES DEATH

[@iguanaboi3921]

Tell that to joel

[@trixiemarie5608]

Kelsey Bailey well.... he’s kinda dead...

[@whillgaming24]

Actually, Death is just a deliverer of death, not the embodiment of Death itself. He just carries the souls to where they need to go, and knows when to take and when to leave.

[@RealFunlock]

The moral of the story is: don't mess with death, cause death itself will always win...

[@joshgarcia4462]

let's bring pony Danny Phantom then let's see death mess with him.

[@emissary8071]

that sounds cool

[@cube5337]

Josh Garcia yes

[@Kirumi_Bear217]

I bet you Danny Phantom could whip the Grim Reaper's ass.

[@demvian9780]

Or a ponified version of a Dark souls protagonist. That would be interesting.

[@freeskatergamer4987]

Wow! This was so well done!!! The story, the characters and the whole truth around it was soo intense. Real nice job on this one! :)

[@LewdNoodz]

'Big Mac was to masculine to show emotion' Don't know about that chief, best boi cross dressed for Apple Bloom before.

[@everytimeishowupeveryonedi3672]

I am searching your channel for more pinkie fanfics. But there isn't any. Do more! They are awesome! But now I'm listening to this one.

[@KORI-e7y]

Everytime I show up Everyone disappears your profile picture tho

[@isabellaotchere486]

That death is emery

[@GriffinProductions]

That "Raze this barn" quote was my favorite touch x3 Though I'm a little upset that Death is portrayed as so passively malicious...he' Death; he's not evil, nor good... but eh, it isn't my story, and it's still well written and well-read! :)

[@Monteeize]

I am the author of this story. My belief was that since Death is sentient and immortal, he takes on different personalities for different periods of time, just to keep his existence interesting.

[@GriffinProductions]

The Brony Writer I guess even a constant such as Death needs to keep himself "hip and fresh" with the other immortals.

[@Monteeize]

I couldn't have said it better myself.

[@ryanlozano9086]

@@Monteeize huh no wonder he sounded like a dick to others

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@Monteeize This voice is perfect for Death in Pony Form.

[@SilentCanScream]

Only one minute in and I am allready blown away by the writing style :O

[@Monteeize]

Thanks. I am the author of this story.

[@MissRaex]

​@@Monteeize You did a magnificent job. 👏

[@jimmysuros6302]

In the MLP universe time travel is cannon, so all Applejack would need to do is cause a causal loop. Her memories of the death of her family become part of the mendella effect for everyone involved.

[@pacakemaster29]

hooray more delicious readings!

[@spencerrandolph5203]

What about her cousins ????!

[@eevee1583]

Spencer Randolph probably are dead by now

[@somerandomyoutubeaccount5895]

They fine

[@gren8te319]

9:23 that was a really low blow and i love it!

[@RandomPopcultureNewsFreak]

Damn lost, you really went really purely suicidal hellish grimdark here girl XD.But i'm not really too surprised though since horror and creepypasta ,Grimdark and darkfics are your most favorite things in the world , i loved your voice over as Applejack again

[@dnpanimationstudio382]

Holy crap.Death saved her!Perhaps the evil in deaths eyes were just a manifestation of common fear of dying.Though death can be cruel that does'nt mean its evil.When you think about it Death's job is hard so perhap's his cold smile is simply him staying strong because he knows the world needs him

[@mr.mercury3820]

Therapist:And how does this make you feel? Me: hungry 🤤

[@cherryktikat]

raise this barn we raise this barn, 1, 2, 3, 4, together we will raise this barn

[@CatsRul85]

"Douse the burning barn with fire" Uhhh wut..someone forgot to proof read their story. I think that should be water.

[@kawaiigirl1868]

Dragontamer05 why water

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@kawaiigirl1868 Isn't Dousing also Water?

[@LilaHubert-jl9zd]

Funfact: hanging doesn't kill by suffocation it breaks your neck like dislocation that's how it kills you once you drop you're dead immediately

[@selectidiot]

broken neck is not immediate death.

[@Monteeize]

Having someone read this makes me realize how flowery the language is at the beginning. I'll have to work on that.

[@calledrocket2653]

Scary Stories to tell in the dark vibes

[@LilaHubert-jl9zd]

Death's voice was the BEST

[@darknessdeathbringer1349]

I like how death sounds

[@mousekuteerkhylert.n.p1228]

8:36 Those screams... Chilling...

[@mochastar3362]

chills. Love the voice of death, so gonna use it! THX

[@katelynbodiford5680]

At least Applejack's friends saved her from trying to kill herself because killing yourself is never the right thing

[@somedudewhodraws9377]

Death?! As in The Grim Reaper?! :O In mythology The Grim Reaper takes souls usually based on deals or contracts.

[@wolfierose4290]

*sigh* every night for two weeks...every night I would listen to these... why? I have no idea

[@Sircreepington9th]

I love the guitar rendition of The World That Never Was’ theme.

[@discord4life602]

Oh. Well, alright then. My favorite Mane Six just lost her entire family, had a chat with Death itself, then try to commit suicide only to be rescued. Talk about a hell of a night!

[@spitrot]

NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT AJ! NO!

[@Meriphia]

Im slowly getting back into grimdark, but after something sweet to bite I gave it up. That story scared me to death.Ima start small and move my way up again :3

[@furryfan1416]

"The burning barn whit fire" 10/10

[@lightningburn324]

Death: “I’m Death straight up.”

[@jameskitt15]

i got a chill up my spine from listionibg 2 this.......AWESOME!

[@BreakerInc]

That was awesome, and jarring.. and awesome because it was jarring.. Very nice!

[@Rainbows_dark]

13:13 I thought it was applejack for a second

[@kryptonrich176]

I see this as an ongoing story, it's that good

[@Monteeize]

I am the author of this story. I do plan on writing a sequel. This time focused on Death's relationship with Time Turner Whooves.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@Monteeize Wow cool that's interesting and I'm sure AJ can live with Twilight and Spike

[@galatoots9398]

Where in the world do you find these fanfics? XD These are awesome! Just like you Lost! You are one of my favorite listeners XD

[@reesesp1561]

Great story -what's the music at the end called-

[@thelostnarrator]

That would be a acoustic cover of Promise (reprise) from the silent hill 2 OST performed by With Ether. :)

[@reesesp1561]

Thank you -love your work-

[@Mochi_Madness87]

Oh silly Applejack. *You cannot kill DEATH.*

[@sournote8610]

Silly Applejack, you can't kill death! Silly you!

[@DinosaurNick]

Me: I'm not gonna click... I'm not gonna click ... I'm not gonna.. Me: *Clicks* Me: I'm not gonna watch... not gonna watch.. not gonna.. Me: *Watches*

[@randominternetman8177]

Death always wins... Unless your last name is Belmont, then he loses.

[@chippawa2014]

Nice love it u should make a series about it

[@farrahpagan7699]

Well she didn't write the story. She just reads them.

[@chippawa2014]

Ok

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@chippawa2014 And a sequel would be interesting to see especially with how Applejack deals with the loss and being the Last Apple Family Member.

[@Thedragonlover95]

Death Sounded more like that one friend you really dont know if what he says is good or bad

[@teamidris]

Wow, that was horrible! I really enjoyed that one. A great bit of Grimdark. Spooky as hell with; the thing you dare not look at, but, at some point, you know you must!

[@jmoulds7383]

love this fic. another late nighter ;)

[@sweetstepstudio6069]

There's nothing better than listening to a great Fanfic reading on a late night!😄

[@alyssariddell2629]

death sounds like "him" from the powerpuff girls

[@sabrena1977]

Alyssa Riddell That is the scariest character in cartoons in my opinon

[@sonicthefakerhedgehog8691]

Alyssa Riddell Actually I think Death sounds like CreepsMcPasta

[@vannahchan9800]

HIM doesnt sound like that his voice is more.....how do I say it. Sassier? Maybe....idk......but sassy and more devilish if that makes sense?

[@DatOneAsianKid]

Why must i watch these type of videos late night? *sigh*

[@amberlight1631]

+GamingWithJacob342 me too!

[@katelynbodiford5680]

The Last Apple cover is like the R.L Stine's Fear Street book The Betrayal

[@LosOcmasoriginales]

I saw that my favorite grimdark/dark/sad stories are the ones with Applejack, Ranbow Dash or Twilight

[@djj25k2]

Yay silent hill 2, yay death, yay aj, yay ramen noodles, yay fried granysmithchops, yay everything.

[@harmonyfountain1064]

I really love your videos.

[@epicleo]

What's the music called playing at the end of the video

[@wildfire2372]

awesome reading!!

[@wildfire2372]

" you bastard!" ( starts laughing)

[@alexbacich2451]

im getting a nightmare on elm street vive from this

[@wolfierose4290]

I almost forgot! I love the music

[@GODZILLADRAGON111]

Well, that's not disturbing. Not disturbing at all. *cries for a few moments*

[@br7078]

Plot twist: AJ was Illuminati all along............. 2insane4membrane

[@mamabear2847]

when there is a warning i just get comfortable

[@Life-tastic]

I get a serious ghost rider vibe.

[@mementomortalis9592]

Bro, what is the song at the end. I recognize it but I don't know the name and it's going to drive me crazy.

[@BlackMoonHowls]

The artist, Akira Yamaoka. It's in one of the Silent Hill games. You can start there.

[@eden7868]

Lol pinkie's scream thought xDDD

[@Buster.Cortez]

What's the name of the ending song? I love it!

[@BlackMoonHowls]

The artist's name is Akira Yamaoka, you can start looking from there.

[@spring626]

For some reason I tought the pony next behind applejack was fluttershy

[@elliephant2270]

Poor an (Gives hug) I will be with you always so don't cry... it will be ok.🙂

[@nightwing9151]

Grand story as always good work scribler

[@DuncanDonutzRAWRXD]

Raze this barn, Raze this barn-

[@vob28]

Cool

[@buttercup900]

I wanna listen to more pinkie fanfics their so cool and creepy.......plz make more dark pinkie fanfics ;-;

[@katiesteinman3449]

It made me sad that that everyone she loved died and I actualy started to cry

[@moof3381]

death can I have that clock I really want it * sorry if I spelled that wrong *

[@hypedragon2197]

The last * gulps* melon

[@SnazzGirl]

Pretty neat!

[@vhsjpdfg]

What is the song that plays at the end?

[@martinjunior1206]

15:08 What was that song. It sounds so familiar.

[@thelostnarrator]

That would be a acoustic cover of Zanzibar (sp?) from the FFX OST :)

[@thelostnarrator]

***** Same thing? xD I'm just kidding.

[@martinjunior1206]

I just have to say this. I love your grimdarks!!!!

[@killerfrostbite]

TheLostNarrator Notice me Senpai

[@thedarklrd6714]

death is in the hood

[@kristinwiebold2433]

Poor Applejack! But one thing is suicide isn't going to make anything better.

[@wolfdasavage7967]

this wasn't scary it was just a cool story! XD

[@amberlight1631]

I don't remember what is the difference from a Darkfic and a Grimdark?

[@bubblecalf]

A darkfic should be scary but not have blood and gore but grimdark is the opposite though it should be scary

[@Kickback2108]

Anyone else catch that Watchmen reference?

[@getfidgedkid3719]

WHY IS IT ALWAYS my favorite ones that die WHY?????!!!????!!!!?

[@MidnightMuffin]

5:11 Yes, you've already stated this.

[@jonathanbishop2129]

Killing herself wouldn't work because death goes with destiny, isn't that her destiny so hes going along with it

[@roseannaruthlynnewyman3123]

Only the Lord himself our savior can truly defeat death

[@dulcineaparker6469]

I thought aj ran back into the house and died trying to save her fam

[@WolfX1120]

wow.... /)

[@williambriggs3379]

Holy crap... There are no words...

[@crackerjack3762]

I'm strong 17:53 later........I was so wrong

[@stargalasyn778]

My god. So nightmareish. Well looks like im gana have a bad dream

[@josephrenshaw5609]

all i thought during her family was apple pie

[@wolfierose4290]

Dude I LOVED it!!!!!