They Want His Nectar - 10 Years in Captivity with Passionate Amazons | Sci-Fi | A Short HFY Story #scifi #hfy
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@tbjoyrider12 күн бұрын
Couldn't watch/listen to the end. I'm not a writer, so I'm not saying that I could do it better. But this story is simply too boring and filled with too many adjectives. I suspect it's done to give the story some length, but it just dull out a story which is already lacking a decent storyline.