Really love the idea, cuz normally when people talk about ghosts and other paranormal stuff, it’s always about someone alone or in a small group, but a paranormal entity that affects an entire country? Like a ghost god that literally eats everyone in the country who opened their door? Unimaginable!
@drinking_master2 жыл бұрын
Reminds me a bit of the 3 days of darkness, how you can't leave your house and the demons will attempt to lure you outside by pretending to be people you know.
@leximey23102 жыл бұрын
I absolutely love how this film and the stairs seem to be connected!
@prestofilms2 жыл бұрын
Nicely done! Definitely getting some Purge vibes from that announcement at the beginning!
@djrydell2 жыл бұрын
CONGRATS ON THE NEW ROOMMATE!!! I loved how you made the creature come to life, the flashlight eyes were a genius idea
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@goteamslugs2 жыл бұрын
@@dentonfilms9370 "This is not a test!" - Siren head
@St0mach_bugz2 жыл бұрын
To me, a short film that actually managed to scare me is extremely impressive. I normally go for psychological horror, and have seen a lot of creepy stuff- but this was so good. I’m shocked. Keep up the good work!
@karinaarklie752 жыл бұрын
What a scary film , anything to do with stairs when you look through the gaps and see something horrible and then hear the most awful scary noise like that is enough to make you die of fright , I know I bloody would .😱😱😱😱
@ryantsup66232 жыл бұрын
I really like the fact that this is a paranormal anomaly what affects the entire nation.
@jalynrich5192 жыл бұрын
this is impressive! i am addicted to watching horror shorts on youtube and, to be honest, i mostly just watch videos or channels that have tons and tons of views/likes. not anymore! you just proved that even if a video doesn’t have a thousands of likes or a channel doesn’t have millions of subs, that doesn’t reflect that quality of the content in any way. i can definitely see your channel getting huge!
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m glad you enjoyed the short. More to come soon.. :)
@paultiffanyrutherford58982 жыл бұрын
Ya
@NightFogFilms2 жыл бұрын
You're right. I'm always looking for good horror shorts as well and found not all have tons of views. I created a Horror Shorts playlist on my channel of all my favorites (kzbin.info/aero/PLLCjuytMFIgbbVezWm6_WF5F__JEAJQRf) I would love to share some I made. Would you check out mine and comment, like and share if you wouldn't mind? UNwanted Guest - kzbin.info/www/bejne/m3zGk6mNZduApKM Isolated - kzbin.info/www/bejne/h6fRdZeGaK9pa6c Enjoy!
@ninabtio59352 жыл бұрын
(JalynRichvo5Montenbearbeitet)
@istragames92672 жыл бұрын
I like how the Stairs and this film are connected. And the opening shot is great, with the slow push out, sound and voice over. You have a great eye for composition and atmosphere. Good job.
@mariajulien-harris1462 жыл бұрын
When in doubt stay inside. Why do they always come out.
@rickysanchez87092 жыл бұрын
Keep it up. Wud love to see a longer version. Looking forward to seeing more
@herheartbeats57272 жыл бұрын
Leaving his own flat during a time of big trouble while not even locking door behind himself ? Hell...
@kellya712 жыл бұрын
He shouldn't have left his door unlocked and slightly open
@RabidRabbit931112 ай бұрын
YOLO! 😂
@jimtessin41303 ай бұрын
Excellent
@absolutvodka5872 жыл бұрын
This is mind blowing! I can't describe how great it is. This is severly underrated. The Horror Factor went totally crazy, my heart is beating faster than ever😂😱
@MisterG23232 жыл бұрын
Moral: Follow instructions, dipstick! Well done short, kudos!
@brandyseverin40773 ай бұрын
I would love to see this as a movie
@demoscrution2 жыл бұрын
I love this because there’s a monster and all you can do is stay still or run
@briecee332 ай бұрын
This is one of my fav short films 🥰 I love the concept behind it… I really enjoyed the description too, where you stated making it in a weekend to challenge yourself. Well done! 😉
@marcy6161Ай бұрын
Fantastic!! Loved the special effects❤. Totally believable!!!
@finalomega88942 жыл бұрын
This was made perfect! We need more horror films.
@trishazechel84022 жыл бұрын
Moral of story, take heed to what is being said on the National Broadcasting Warning.
@johnbaggs59012 жыл бұрын
Yeah, because trusting the govt is always best,...what could go wrong?
@Ninafaison667 Жыл бұрын
What Is This Movie About?
@trishazechel8402 Жыл бұрын
@@Ninafaison667 Watch it. And if you don't get it, I'll explain it.
@smcanalbell Жыл бұрын
You deserve more subscriber!!
@thebrpob2 жыл бұрын
Great job! I’ve been binge watching some horror and horror-adjacent short films recently and this really stands out despite being from a smaller channel. Please Keep this up! Awesome job on the emergency broadcast and keeping the suspense up throughout the film. ❤❤❤
@tinaj18162 жыл бұрын
You made this film in one weekend...Awesome job👍🏼
@thecreejcrew2 жыл бұрын
HOW DO YOU ONLY HAVE 40 SUBS ONLY? That was amazing!
@magnetdesignandadver12 күн бұрын
So well done. Totally love it!
@spotty3292 жыл бұрын
genuinely terrifying,,, only thing is that the eyes at the end were a bit cheesy but other than that,, this was amazing
@gnsmovies88492 жыл бұрын
this is really killer!! for a quick solo project this is really impressive
@SusanNoulton9 ай бұрын
Wow that was very very creepy, the way things are at the moment, this sought of thing could happen. Great acting and brilliant story. Thank you.
@amelieenger2 жыл бұрын
this was really great, good job! and that jump scare scared the living daylight out of me, but that's good, because it means its scary.
@lienomzekon47635 ай бұрын
Also turn on subtitle.
@annecohen8927 Жыл бұрын
Must be a strange larvae!
@SinisterAnimationS2 жыл бұрын
this storyline youve built is so good
@yacotaco51432 жыл бұрын
That was really cool, I hope you make more short fillms. Was the "creature" at the end stock footage from somewhere? It looked really good, and the gray color it has despite that warm light being pointed at it made me think stock footage.
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Thank you! No, it wasn’t stock footage. We filmed the subject, back facing the camera and then colorized the skin grey in editing. For the eyes I just took a flashlight, pointed it at the camera, duplicated that shot and composited it over the creature.
@yacotaco51432 жыл бұрын
@@dentonfilms9370 Oh wow, very cool! I hope you make more short films.
@alexarmes29602 жыл бұрын
@@dentonfilms9370 was that supposed to be the rake from creepypasta it looked like him
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
@@alexarmes2960 no it was not the rake but it’s design is somewhat inspired by the rake
@anon894612 жыл бұрын
Really good. The jumpscare really scared me.
@vadimc21442 жыл бұрын
Great job. Thanks.
@einienj3281 Жыл бұрын
Really good, I'm impressed! Thank You 💖
@brucemonkhouse6698 Жыл бұрын
A future Stephen king of film..well done
@snapeplissken9292 жыл бұрын
Really well done, especially for how quickly it was made!
@IceCenders2 жыл бұрын
Constructive criticism: The internet search scene at the start was merely repeating what we already knew, and so felt pointless and dragged on for too long, for such a short film. The staircase scene on the other hand was extremely good at ramping up the tension, keeping us waiting for *something* to happen for several seconds was a very good thing. The biggest issue though is that there was no real way to empathize with the main character who appeared to be either suicidal or a Darwin Award contestant (and ultimately winner). I guess you didn't manage to find any actually good reason to make him leave his apartment, but at the very least it would have been more plausible if he'd heard the voice of someone he knew and cared about... Also the final monster reveal may have dragged on for too long to produce that much fear (there's a reason why jumpscares work better than extended shots of monsters). As soon as the lamp started flickering the plot became predictable and the ending known, and so there wasn't any (or much) tension left. All in all it had a few flaws but it still packed a nice punch and the 'broadcast emergency' premise was a very, very good idea, so just keep improving :)
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
I can’t thank you enough for your feedback. Really helpful criticism and after some reflection, I would agree with a lot of your points. Especially making it someone the character knows, would have made it easier to empathize with him. The internet search scene is definitely unnecessary and if I could I would go back and cut it out to be honest. The film was made with no script in one weekend, kind of just out of nowhere for fun so I didn’t plan it out like I usually try to for my projects and there’s bound to be flaws but they are flaws nonetheless. Again, I really appreciate the feedback, very helpful.
@IceCenders2 жыл бұрын
@@dentonfilms9370 Glad my feedback was helpful to you. :) For something unscripted and done 'just for fun' in one weekend, this is definitely respectable.👍
@PailKidPictures2 жыл бұрын
Wow, that was fantastic. Great feel and super creepy! Keep it up!
@TheLifeofJay12 жыл бұрын
This is absolutely outstanding, and if you keep releasing stuff like this, I have no doubt your channel will boom. I’ll be releasing a “reacting to horror shorts” video soon, and yours is the second one. Bravo!!
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Oh wow, that’s so great to hear. I greatly appreciate it and I’m glad you enjoyed the short. More coming soon!
@abushet12652 жыл бұрын
Where have you been hiding!! This is amazing
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@tttomato-souppp2 жыл бұрын
Whoaa, this short reminds me of the KZbin horror series 'Mandela Effect' really cool!
@FearMechanism2 жыл бұрын
Great use of lighting, loved the look. 🔥
@Graphicstation8 ай бұрын
That was creepy!!!!! Well done!
@t.ruththeblack2 жыл бұрын
Very nicely done for a weekend project. I couldn't have done it in a month of Sundays!
@t.ruththeblack2 жыл бұрын
That sound is very menacing!
@NightFogFilms2 жыл бұрын
Nice job. Love your style.
@michaelcoughlin53089 ай бұрын
Very good 👍 I liked that one.
@ludoviclaviolette42172 жыл бұрын
SCP project well done
@brettsmith59032 жыл бұрын
I've often wondered if in real life they would use basic instructions with no context as to why haha
@yohighness2 жыл бұрын
Wow, intriguing stuff! ❤
@glennparker55162 жыл бұрын
That kept my attention Great job all involved. Creeeeeepy
@Negan_Smith01 Жыл бұрын
I want a sequel!❤
@sallyoquinn2 жыл бұрын
Well done!
@valiantwarrior45174 ай бұрын
Oops. He shoulda heeded the warning. Thanks for the video!
@shaunhurt2 жыл бұрын
Yo the end made me think that maybe it came in after he left, tried to take out the light, failed and got caught in it instead, it knew the light was gonna go out it just was a matter of time...
@Tncapa2 жыл бұрын
I followed the instructions till I saw it wasn’t real 😂
@susanoo.28142 жыл бұрын
This video is: ✔ Life changing ✔ Informative ✔ Inspiring ✔ Heartwarming ✔ Useful ✔calming ✔Enjoyable ✔ Other
@abigailtrumbo1782 жыл бұрын
Beautifully done!
@roccgg2 жыл бұрын
Well done 👏
@davidluck167817 күн бұрын
well done
@dragon558552 жыл бұрын
this is fire. my girlfriend covered her eyes the whole time. Impressive ❤️❤️❤️❤️
@vampgrrl2 жыл бұрын
Very suspenseful🙂
@wp53552 жыл бұрын
Great job!!
@chrisjones59497 ай бұрын
Yet another horror movie character who dies of, essentially, never having seen a horror movie before. lol Pretty good, especially for something you put together in a weekend. I would agree with another commenter who said the final shot goes on a bit too long - when I saw the mottled gray skin of the Thing, I was like, "oh, fuck!" and I think it would've been more effective to go from that to the light flickering and dying, and then that's the end. But a decent short nonetheless.
@davidnordmeyer513 Жыл бұрын
I have a currently published book, a collection of horror stories, available now. I think most of them could be adapted into effective short films. If you're interested, feel free to reply in the comments
@dentonfilms9370 Жыл бұрын
I’m always interested to read some short horror stories! I’m not sure if I can adapt them, all depends on capabilities and idk what exactly that would entail, but color me intrigued. What’s the book and where may I find it?
@eros42112 жыл бұрын
I may be wrong, but isn't this an scp event?
@diontaedaughtry9742 жыл бұрын
Cool monster, Great film good job 👍👍
@NPNGPhotography2 жыл бұрын
Great short dude
@joel1964.2 жыл бұрын
Love it 😀. Excellent job 👏
@mayhemacres7252 жыл бұрын
VERY nice job!!!
@InvasionAnimation2 жыл бұрын
Watched this on cuestar's stream!
@GrEeNEyEz1972 жыл бұрын
Wow that was creepy
@bryanfisher83772 жыл бұрын
That was awesome
@used_user4482 жыл бұрын
Bro your underated fr man 👏
@LandonHarrison2 жыл бұрын
Great video! You’d deserve mores subs!
@neptune99612 жыл бұрын
I dont like the ending, but it was still well made! A lot of suspense built up in such a short amount of time.
@mayahigginbotham98736 ай бұрын
Damn it Napoleon!
@dombailey52022 жыл бұрын
But this was very very IMPRESSIVE
@NMDR-Next-Gen2 жыл бұрын
on the thumbnail it shows pyramid head it would be more creepier if you put pyramid head doing that sounds on those creepy long stairs down the building by drawing his sword
@cherryscarlett2 жыл бұрын
_you can stay where you are.. but never touch any weapons or pills.. just talk to me, and your money won't "go away" forever.._ ✓
@theblackalkemistmaat32122 жыл бұрын
♥️🔥🔥
@benae44552 жыл бұрын
I wonder if this was at all inspired by the whole Covid-19 staying indoors thing.
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Actually it was to an extent as well as analog horror being an inspiration.
@Search4Truth2 жыл бұрын
Stupid is what stupid doe’s 😂☠️
@D.M.S.11 ай бұрын
I don't like that he opened the door. I would have preferred the horror of not knowing and him fighting the fear and interest at the same time. I mean, the state warned him in an official message. He shouldn't even let friends and family in, and he opens the door for a random stranger. Come on... But besides that it was well done.
@delisalevy2 ай бұрын
Lol...ooopssss.
@Ninafaison667 Жыл бұрын
What Is This Short Movie About?
@altilley26942 жыл бұрын
😳😎😉
@Lumberjack_Linnie Жыл бұрын
Lead died because he is an idiot. That there is a monster inside when he goes back was obious, because you showed the door not closing. And the stair scene was predictable. It took too long.
@ach62393 ай бұрын
No close caption 😱
@youlooklikeapotato2 жыл бұрын
Can I use your video and I will tag your channels name. 🥺I like itt
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
Use it in what way?
@youlooklikeapotato2 жыл бұрын
@@dentonfilms9370 In my yt channel. I have upload it and mention your yt name already. But if you want to delete it then i will remove it 😊
@dentonfilms93702 жыл бұрын
@@youlooklikeapotato sure go ahead as long as I am credited and you put a link to the original video as well as not gaining money off of my work.