Tommy On Board || L'manburg Traitor AU || Dream SMP animatic

[@elisab5432]

dude, this is very epic! it really captures Tommy's plight and the delight of the dream team just hoping Tommy would have enough and break.

[@Milkie2]

Ahhh thank you!! :D

[@elisab5432]

@@Milkie2 you're very welcome! i really hope it gets more recognition, now the song is stuck in my head, and it's easy to change the lyrics as you go through to fit the story, so you can really get the full effect edit: earned yourself a sub

[@lilibgoon4073]

I want to hear more of this story, this au just makes since but the song complements Tommy’s part really well. I hope that tommy some how’s gains the upper hand

[@winterstorm7886]

That's so awfully sad but I love it-

[@elisab5432]

this took a while to do, but here are the dsmp lyrics: (apologies if I accidentally missed a pronoun from the original lyrics I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories, of Tommy when he had his fill, of Wilbur soot and the other lost boys. now Tommy never was a boy to go against his friends, but recall when dream had kidnaped him and promised no good end, surrounded then by pirates and asked to join the crew, the story goes he told them no. but not all tales are true, wouldn't he rather climb the rigging, and wield the cutlass bright, wouldn't he rather have his own sweet say on wrong or right, "your decision boy" says dream "you think you'll pass the test?", the scurvy crew are snickering, but tommy, answers "yes", "you set me any task old man and watch me see it through, you've never known the likes of piracy this boy can do," oh I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories, of tommy when he'd had his fill, of wil and the other lost boys, old deam amused sent punz to draw a contract then and there "survive and you're my son" he says "succeed and you're my heir", says tommy "then I'll sign but king, just be sure you know, break your word and it's straight to retirement or down to the end you go" says dream "you see you do the same my boy, no secret plans, if 'ere I find you scheming with that rascal wilbur soot, it's down to the end you'll go yourself or a likewise wat'ry grave" but tommy simply shakes his hand resolving to be brave, says dream " i keep my word" says tommy "we shall see" he signs the scroll 'tommyinit' and hands it back to punz, he sets his jaw and binds his heart, a boy, no longer free, oh I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories, of tommy when he'd had his fill, of wil and the other lost boys. well, old dream had tommy, and he thought he'd break him yet, he set him first to scrubbing pots and swabbing every deck, "before you learn the pirate life, you'll do the work that's worst, we'll not have you soft toms, you'll know hunger, work, and thirst," so it's up the deck and down the deck tommy did toil, for dream would never have a future son known as spoiled, he cooked, he cleans, grows strong and lean, and every night he cries, forall dreams men keep up their jeering the harder that he tries, oh, I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories, of tommy when he'd had his fill, of wil and the other lost boys, well, it didn't take long as we knew to be for wilbur soot to learn, of tommy's state then he strove to knock old dream a nasty turn, he comes to rescue tommy stealing to the ship by night, and dries his tears most galliantly in the full moon's yellow light, "let's go back to the forest" says brave wilbur with a smile, "your brother truely misses you as the lost boys do and i," how tommy longs to take his hand but he must shake his head, the tears return, he takes a breath to say what must be said, "i'm bound to stay here wilbur, and to learn among dream's men, untill such time that they decide to call me one of them," oh wilbur soot he smacks his head to clear his silly ears, he can't believe what tommy says, not a word of what he hears, "but tommy" wilbur says " this place is not where you belong" tommy cries "this home is mine and wilbur soot is wrong, old dream forgot his mother, well, i'll not forget my own, it's she who gave me courage and first told me to be strong, like you i'll use my cunning and survive to see the dawn,and when this scurvy crew's in hand i'll set a course for home," he winks at wilbur then in hopes he'll understand his game, but wilbur flies just out of reach and quickly places blame, says wil,"you have betrayed me, dream has stolen you away, and so i wish you joy of him until your dying day," says tommy "very well wil but i'll never wish you ill, just see you steer clear of your enemy 'tommyinit'" and wilbur flies away a furious star against the black, and tommy squares his shoulders though he feels his young heart crack, oh I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories, of tommy when he'd had his fill, of wil, and the other lost boys, oh tommy who'd had his fill, of wilbur soot and his lost boys.

[@harnodie8589]

You realy really put effort into coments wow Also thanks :)

[@vennelakadavakollu898]

this is so good

[@kyrawekiwi]

This is amazing! The song works so surprisingly well with everything, and the AU somehow makes perfect sense for the original characters, lol. The character designs and expressions are phenomenal! I can see how much effort you put into this, and I can say that it was probably well worth it considering how epic the final product is, haha. Great job with everything! You earned yourself another subscriber :D (oh, and in case you were wondering, I was sent here by the KZbin algorithm gods. This was in my recommended when I opened up the website this morning, haha)

[@Milkie2]

Ahhh thank you!!! qwqqq Yall are so nice fjdskfjkld

[@grovitemultiverse]

Cool AU! I really like the concept.

[@Milkie2]

ahh thank you!!

[@melissaquinn1463]

I haven’t found anyone else who used Filk in an animatic! I’m so happy! Filk= fan music sung in the folk style, this style is usually found in conventions. But the broader definition is any fan song.

[@varafluffy4928]

Still one of my favorite animatics to date, keep up the amazing work as you draw other fandoms and ocs

[@Pl-iNK]

I cannot put into words how much I love this. The lineart, the character designs, all of it. It’s insane.

[@aaazartiscool]

Am never leaving this community

[@koilake9835]

I need a full fic of this concept! I love it!

[@MaloryGrimes-em1rg]

THIS IS SO AMAZING

[@yasminthespiritsinger7704]

I straight up still adore this animatic.

[@yasminthespiritsinger7704]

I am so sad that I haven’t discovered you earlier. However, I am enjoying your work. This one struck an old chord within me. I can’t wait to see how your work evolves with your OCs and new fandoms! :D

[@divatherandomperson1017]

this is so underrated- i love it so muchhhhhhhhhh

[@Milkie2]

jfkdsjf Thank you!! qwqq

[@mango8665]

Your art style is so beautiful and consistent I’m in love with this

[@Milkie2]

jfkdsj aww thank you!! ;v;;

[@memedoge7356]

Underrated

[@iwanttogotoaustralia]

A DREAM SMP ANIMATIC INSPIRED BY ONE OF MY FAVOURITE MAPS I LOVE IT 🥰

[@ToygerSet]

Time to send this to all my friends:D

[@sailormoonnerd_]

I fucking love SJ Tucker

[@atligarcia4655]

I can't with this animatic it's too good!

[@redqueen772]

Dsmp lyrics UwU I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories Of Tommy when he'd had his fill of Wilbur Soot and the other Lost Boys Now, Tommy never was a boy to go against his friends But recall when Dream had kidnapped him and promised no good end Surrounded then by pirates and asked to join the crew The story goes he told them no, but not all tales are true! Wouldn't he rather climb the rigging and wield a cutlass bright Wouldn't he rather have his own sweet say o'er wrong and right? "Your decision, boy," says Dream. "You think you'll pass the test?" The scurvy crew are sniggering, but Tommy answers "Yes! You set me any task, old man, and watch me see it through You've never known the likes of piracy a boy can do!" I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories Of Tommy when he'd had his fill of Soot and the other Lost Boys Old Dream, bemused, set George to draw a contract, then and there "Survive, and you're my son," says he, "succeed, and you're my heir." Says Tommy then, "I'll sign, but captain, just be sure you know: Break your word and it's straight to retirement or down to the croc you go!" Says Dream, "you see you do the same, my boy, no secret plans! If e'er I find you scheming with that rascal Wilbur Soot It's down to the croc you'll go yourself, or a likewise watery grave!" But Tommy simply shakes his hand, resolving to be brave Says Captain Dream, "I keep my word." Says Tommy, "we shall see." he signs the scroll Theseus and hands it back to George he sets his jaw and binds his hair, a boy no longer free I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories Of Tommy when he'd had his fill of Soot and the other Lost Boys Well, Dream thought he had Tommy, and he thought he'd break him yet He set his first to scrubbing pots and swabbing every deck "Before you learn the pirate life, you'll do the work that's worst; We'll not have you soft, Tom. You'll know hunger, work, and thirst!" So up the deck and down the deck Theseus did toil For Dream would never have a future son known as spoiled he cooks, he cleans, grows strong and lean, and every night he cries For old Dream's men keep up their jeers the harder that he tries I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories Of Tommy when he'd had his fill of Soot and the other Lost Boys Well it didn't take long, as we knew 'twould be, for Wilbur Soot to learn Of Tommy's state, and he strove to knock old Dream a nasty turn He comes to rescue Tommy, steals out to the ship by night And he dries his tears most gallantly in the full moon's yellow light "Let's go back to the forest" says brave Wilbur with a smile "Your brothers truly miss you, as the Lost Boys do, and I." How Tommy longs to take his hand! But he must shake his head The tears return; he takes a breath to say what must be said "I'm bound to stay here, Wilbur, and to learn among Dream's men Until such time as they decide to call me one of them." Wilbur Soot, he smacks his head to clear his silly ears He can't believe what Tommy says, not a word of what he hears! "But Tommy" Wilbur says, "This ship is not where you belong!" Tommy cries "This ship is mine, and Wilbur Soot is wrong! Old Dream forgot his Father; well, I'll not forget my own It's he who gave me courage and first told me to be strong Like you, I'll use my cunning and survive to see the dawn And when this scurvy crew's in hand, I'll set a course for home!" he winks at Wilbur then, in hopes he'll understand his game But Wilbur flies just out of reach and quickly places blame Says Wil, "You have betrayed me. Dream has stolen you away And so, I wish you joy of him, until your dying day!" Says Tommy, "very well, Wil, though I'll never wish you ill See that you steer clear of your enemy, Big man Theseus!" Wilbur flies away, a furious star against the black And Tommy squares his shoulders, though he feels his young heart crack. I will sing you pirate songs and tell you pirate stories Of Tommy when he'd had his fill of Soot and the other Lost Boys Oh Theseus when he’d had his fill Of Soot and his lost boys

[@r.t.7288]

I love this

[@watermelonfrog1756]

AHHHH I loved this so much!!

[@mizicolous]

THIS IS AWESOME

[@someonerandom1273]

this is too good to only have 3k views

[@karmamintz]

HOW ARE YOU SO UNDERRATED?!?! FOR real this is amazing! I love your style and the way you executed the story and the expressions and shit? It was all so good mate! Good job, this was amazing!

[@xemgnerx4769]

Dude this is so pog and underrated!!!!

[@shaegrin2009]

This was amazing! I’d never heard this song before either, but now I’ll be sure to go find it! Thanks so much for sharing. 😊

[@sophiarieke118]

This is amazing! You are so underrated!!!!

[@xemgnerx4769]

Rewatching because this is so good

[@attemptedanimations7953]

OMG- This is sick. Love your art style, and the song choice was perfect!

[@KZFathom]

yo I love this it has such a creepy melancholy feel to it!!

[@Milkie2]

Ayyy thanks!!! :DD

[@lenathefirst_4574]

THIS WAS SO AWESOME WOWWW

[@faithseden293]

This is neat! I like this a lot ☺️

[@Milkie2]

Aww thank you!! qwqq

[@silvminecraf]

this is actually so cool, and also underrated!! I love this!! :D

[@b3rrytheflower]

Amazing animatic

[@bymaji]

HOLY SHIT I WAS JUST LISTENING TO THIS SONG AND. DSMP AND SJ TUCKER?? PLEASE- okay anyways saving this for later

[@bymaji]

okay i've watched it and like. this is such a niche overlap of interests i am so goddamn excited.

[@neminico3568]

Why are there so few views? This video deserves better... Underrated..

[@frog_m3trash684]

It was so good we got this tommy im our system now :D its poggggg ^^

[@meili2740]

Oh this is epic!!

[@Milkie2]

Thanks!! qwqq

[@AUsefulNPC]

I'm guessing tommy was the traitor instead of eret? That's the best I could get, lovely art btw!

[@AceHotSauce]

I just wanna say- Your animations are awesome

[@xelqua-p]

HOLY??? MUAH TAKE MY /P KISSES 😌😌😌

[@Mio_Chxn]

Wow! This must have taken forever! You deserve more subs and views ♥♥♥

[@taterose8075]

Man! This is amazing, another sub coming ur way!

[@illusion6362]

can we have part 2 Please

[@Nevestheseven]

I LOVE THIS! AMAZING WORK! ps also! you have 0 dislikes whats AMAZING!!

[@agifra05]

Cool

[@annaplayz6714]

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[@kasius9093]

commenting for the algorithm

[@alittlebitofme07]

Is there more of this AU? I would love to read it or watch more videos on it! Also, is this Tommy taking Eret's place or is it a completely diferent betrayeal?

[@Milkie2]

I may or may not make more videos on this AU unfortunately, but maybe one day if I decide to^^ I’m thinking that it was a different kind of betrayal, as in he wasn’t rewarded like Eret and instead is trapped in Dream’s deal, if that makes sense^^^

[@alittlebitofme07]

@@Milkie2 So manipulation.... again.... GREAAAAT, LMAO That's cool! Don't feel preshured to make more parts if you don't want, but this is great!!

[@Milkie2]

@@alittlebitofme07 Ahhh thank you!!! ^^^ qwqq

[@yasminthespiritsinger7704]

HI I AM BACK AND I AM NOT EVER LEAVING THE FANDOM AT THIS POINT. I STILL LOVE YOUR ANIMATICS AND YOUR WORK IN OMORI BUT I STILL LOVE THIS ANIMATIC TOO!

[@yasminthespiritsinger7704]

ONE YEAR AGO I FOUND YOU. YOU ARE AS BEAUTIFUL AS THE DAY I LOST YOU. XD

[@Anatol590]

I'm sorry to disturb you，I like your work very much，May I ask if I can transfer the video to a website called Bilibili? 【And make Chinese subtitles for it. 】In this way, some Chinese can enjoy your works. I promise that it will not generate any revenue. I will write down the URL of the original video and your name. （Here's a more detailed explanation） Due to the GFW(Great Firewall of China), the ones who lived in Chinese mainland who cannot freely access to your KZbin, I humbly ask for your official permission to republish your works to the Chinese website（'cause Bilibili has no so-called advertising revenue,so we can't get any benefit from this aspect.）

[@Milkie2]

Sure!! Of course you can ^^ Just give credit and you should be fine.

[@plain0v0]

This is really cool and underrated! I would like to inquire. If I would make a underrated animation video may part of a video be used of yours? With credits to you of course. Not saying I'm really going to or something. I just thought if I ever truly would because I think there are quite a few underrated animations out there. I hope I don't offend you and you are free to say no.

[@Milkie2]

You may ^^ Just remember to credit me and you should be fine!

[@plain0v0]

OK! Thanks! I hope you have a wonderful day!

[@DnD_Boy]

I sub

[@demigirlwithoutaturtle3556]

This kept appearing in my recommended, and i thought I wouldn't like this au, but I really like your art style and this au, surprisingly! You're really underrated. Maybe I can help, just a little? + 1 sub

[@thelifehackerest]

Wondering where i can find the guitar chords for this? 🙏