Train Ride [SFM Creepypasta]

Trains are the best public transportation you can find in any city, however, be careful of strangers riding along with you. Even in midnight.
A link to CreepypastaJr's video: • "Train Ride" Creepypas...
A/N: There was nothing I can do with the glowing stuff on Scout's hood. I downloaded it from Gmod and I couldn't find the problem. Also don't mind, Heavy's chin passing through his beard while talking. The model (Casual Heavy) and the beards facial eexpressions are entirely different. But hope you'll still enjoy.

[@Ufail98]

And then the man says... "Yo wassup"

[@YOU_ARE_ILL]

"Do you have any idea, any idea who I am?"

[@ItsBonjii]

@@YOU_ARE_ILL Basically....im a rapist nigga

[@jalmtj]

DAT BOI are those Latin rhythms? I love Latin rhythms

[@lemonlimeeyeliner7905]

Ufail98 that would be so funny!

[@dingdawng]

@@YOU_ARE_ILL *BAWNK*

[@Xaxp]

I can't help but imagine what the actual Soldier from TF2 would do in this situation. "What are you staring at, MAGGOT!?" *Market Garden to the face*

[@vulturonix7460]

True, he would've done that

[@SenkaBandit]

Lol

[@LG-ii7gl]

*DO NOT LOOK AT ME I DID NOT ASK YOU A QUESTION!*

[@raulphilipgoco403]

Nah he would’ve shot him with a Times 100 beggars bazooka

[@JuanRodriguez-ri2iq]

Xayte I no

[@NickolasRAnderson]

I sprayed cologne in my eye once and it looked like that

[@emad9074]

Same lol

[@Ricky-hc1qv]

Ima guess ur the scout asking for a piece of gum

[@magentapurpleyap5566]

gotta keep those eyes fresh.

[@randoamerican]

I squirted soap into my eye and everybody at school thought i had pinkeye

[@wiernypancerny3348]

I sprayed cologne in my mouth as a kid. Don't try it, it doesn't taste as good as it smells.

[@thatterrariaguidenpc8054]

theres something i like how the old man switched from annoyed to genuinely concerned when the protag told him about the "man staring at him"

[@Blockinstaller12]

These SFM animations really help to visualize the stories. Great work, keep it up.

[@jasonblundelldobebussing]

Well, yeah, but actually no

[@Alinarotster]

@@jasonblundelldobebussing Haha! You are wrong Jason Blundell

[@halezom7661]

@@jasonblundelldobebussing liked for the meme, then disliked for it's misusage.

[@jasonblundelldobebussing]

@@halezom7661, true.

[@neonbatagor777]

yeaa i like the way he tell the story. It always freak me out at night LOL

[@RuckusHuckusYT]

And then the red eyed scunt said "whaddya looking at chuckle nuts?" *proceeds to conga away* Soldier: [visible confusion] "what"

[@arcihungbycraneonfire]

After the lights went in again, the man would say "WHADDYA LOOKING AT CHUCKLE NUTS?" As he looks at me with an angry expression, he'd leave the seat and conga away to the back seat, i was left with shock and confusion while the man with the cigar coughs and laughs it off. We arrived a few minutes after, i started becoming a ball and then rolled over to my house, i will never forget that experience.

[@koolguy5483]

The smoker seems like a genuinely nice dude ngl

[@MatG7421]

He is though.

[@HolyPopeJulian]

Scout got pink eye lol (This was written before i finished the vid)

[@suspense_comix3237]

I like how the smoker didn't put up a fight and instead asked the main character to just ask him nicely next time. He just kept calm.

[@C.A._Old]

Best Ever

[@Gaster_Undertale1337]

That is how heavy is portrayed real life

[@cadaverous6]

The fact that you made Scout genuinely creepy is a feat I’m impressed by.

[@C.A._Old]

Best Ever

[@EpicMusicalSniper]

If your a sniper he can sometimes be a horror character

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

@@EpicMusicalSniper Far away plus with the right professional precession however, Scout is not very scary. Your everyday up close and personally cunning Scout however, IS scary. This Creepypasta is actually pretty lore accurate... Aside you know, STANDING STILL.

[@ScoutGamingYes]

I’m not scary, I’m very cool

[@void6482]

​@@ScoutGamingYesShut up, pink eye

[@dogonpc618]

The light went out again... And the red eyed man .... Was siting on my head !!!!!

[@RustyCanadien]

Oh no the horror!!

[@SenkaBandit]

Rap ee

[@effigytormented]

How wude.

[@luck4608]

Looks like we got a jockey,ELIS,NICK,ROCHELLE

[@glizzygobbler8012]

@Luck Kruger PIGGY BACK TO VICTORY!

[@boredperson2798]

Imagine if Scout just said in the last momment "Wanna drink An energy drink?"

[@IronGamer3006]

Rather Yo Wanna Have Some Bonk?

[@boredperson2798]

@@IronGamer3006 *y e s*

[@justarandomguy2263]

DO YOU WANT A SPRITE CRANBERRY

[@minemaster1337]

"want some bonk?"

[@FattyMachine3000]

@@justarandomguy2263 beat me to it

[@Troglodyte98]

The light went out again... And the red eyed man... “Yo, you got any gum?”

[@danielbogdanoski4412]

TAKE THE GODDAMNED GUM TAKE IT IL BUY YOU A WHOLE BOX JUST LEAVE ME ALONE

[@xlorrix-6320]

The light went out again... And the red eyed man... moved even closer because i moved away in the dark but he wasnt looking at me he was looking at my bag... i took my phone out and activated the torch light... my torchlight turned off and the trains light too when they came back out.... the red eyed man asked ... YA GOT GAMES ON UR PHONE

[@therealeikichionizuka]

@@xlorrix-6320 lol I was thinking the exact same thing!

[@nikkigreer1385]

this made me chuckle, king

[@bugsauce2261]

"You got games on yo phone?"

[@doublesided183]

Goddamnit Soldier stop taking drugs?

[@maximilienrobespierre7927]

The fact that in Eltorro64Rus' video it was Soldier who asked for a Box of Cox, this is fucking hilarious

[@ZalmanFarisiUNAS]

@@maximilienrobespierre7927 FEGELEIN WAINKSTAIN

[@Sesujoestar]

I really love how you animate these horror stories using SFM and with tf2 models as well. Love your work!

[@C.A._Old]

Best Ever

[@scrittle]

"I nodded at him trying to break the tension" Getting tense from a teenager? Getting tense from a guy holding a briefcase? Okay then

[@AggressiveSpaghetti]

don't underestimate what some people can do. Even kids can kill

[@sothisishowusernameswork.2043]

@@AggressiveSpaghetti yea, yea they can, ever heard of micheal myers?

[@lills3879]

I'm sorry but if I get onto any public transport system and somebody is looking at me I'm scared.

[@seizuresalad1558]

Love how soldier is used as an everyman by the sfm creepypasta community, while soldier in tf2 canon is an actual hilarious maniac.

[@themaster011bass2]

It's him before his war days so he was pretty sane.

[@linkfreeman1998]

I mean, soldier was meant to be jack of all trades when u start to play the game so...

[@darkdanker2326]

What can I say, he’s going off the rails on a Crazy Train *Immense guitar solo plays*

[@oogabooga658]

What if Soldier got rage and Punch Scout *-MAGGOT-*

[@starlight846]

He’d probably be on the floor with no one under him because of the lack of sleep. He’s imagining it, but his brain tells him that this shit’s real

[@ultimadragonlord6764]

“Hopefully it will be worth the wait” It was

[@borediideath6526]

This would make a great campfire story. The ones where you build up tension and jumps are them at the end.

[@ttpbroadcastingcompany.4460]

Nah, since this story was lame. It builds up all of that tension and then NOTHING happens.

[@GygX]

If this was posted to the trollpasta wiki, it would be listed as "well, that was anticlimactic."

[@captaindemobeard9560]

Either a hallucination, or a creature that has the ability to only appear to it's victims.

[@CCaster2000]

Maybe the red eye thing is a curse? "Scout" was a previous victim and now "Soldier" will take his place and have a red eye himself until he finds a new victim who sees him.

[@captaindemobeard9560]

@@CCaster2000 Interestin' idea matey. I like it. Could make a good horror saga o' stories.

[@CrashAttak5]

Hey man can I just say that, I love your creepypastas Keep up the amazing work!! ♥

[@facelessrabbit6361]

I knew it wasnt real when the smoker didnt notice scout moving

[@Michi_Exiled]

The lights went out again. and the red eyed man... *gave me a big smooch on the cheek*

[@Coldaardvark2]

Dude hell yeah, I lost your channel a while ago. Glad I found you again, AND with new content! Super happy! Thank you so much for making these!

[@Freef_01]

"I#MA tAx PaYing grownUP ADult" HAHAHA GOT ME

[@cerc1316]

What did we learn from this ? NEVER EVER GO AT NIGHT WITH THE TRAIN IF THERE IS A WEIRD PERSON

[@tacticstonk4740]

We have a red eyes master here

[@michaelv7519]

U should never go to the subway at night to begin with

[@becauseyoureblack]

We dont give a shit!!!

[@timecoldslow2950]

but it wasn't a weird person it was like a ghost since the guy smoking couldn't see him

[@sherriff_colt4223]

I really wanna know what happened next!

[@The_Dragon_of_Dojima_]

Let me help you with that "The lights went on and he was gone"

[@AverageUsernames]

"The lights went on and it was a sick prank."

[@lmn_godie2598]

the lights went out and 7 minutes in heaven

[@trafficcones7804]

by the looks of it , the main character is ok, if he had died , he wouldnt be writing this story

[@CA11M3J0sch]

Clearly the dude was an enemy stand, that's why the old man couldn't see him. What other explanation could there be?

[@vreikezen8268]

That would mean soldier is a stand user tho

[@maniacgreen8609]

@@vreikezen8268 it's kinda like wonder of u

[@isaiahneo2735]

Soldier: WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING AT MAGGOT?!?!?! Scout: ……… Soldier: DON’T GIVE ME THAT LOOK!!!!!! Scout: ……… Soldier: *Grabs Suitcase And Takes Out Shotgun And Points It At Scout’s Face* Scout: *Moves Back* WOAH!!!!! WOAH!!!!!! WOAH!!!!! WOAH!!!!! CHILL MAN!!!!! CHILL!!!!! Soldier: THAT’S WHAT I THOUGHT!!!!!!

[@shelleymcrae514]

*sees he’s teleported* yeah nope! *hits with breethcase*

[@CoolioOJulio]

B R E E T H C A S E

[@chronos8436]

B R E E T H C A S E

[@greytilldeath]

B R E E T H C A S E

[@shelleymcrae514]

Well this just got weird did I accidentally start a a cult or something

[@greytilldeath]

@@shelleymcrae514 *begins chanting* BREETHCASE BREETHCASE BREETHCASE BREETHCASE BREETHCASE

[@vanndymaywho1910]

Amazing, I’m not ever going to this out of my mind.

[@richhhhhz4449]

YES FINNALY THANK YOU FOR CREEPYPASTA :D

[@LostGeburah]

"you! you can see me?! finally someone to talk to! no longer alone in this deathless lifeless existence!"

[@CommanderFox-cc]

Why does it always have to be a solider why not a sniper

[@thomastheneckbreaker2961]

This is the equivalent of a special ed kid on Halloween

[@Lehinsky_27]

I'm happy, new creepypasta genre is developing!

[@horrormatrix9080]

The light when out again….. And then the red eyed man said…… Yo do you got any games in your phone?

[@soul9299]

DO NOT LOOK AT ME, I DID NOT ASK YOU A QUESTION.

[@Rendemnis]

i was expecting scout to say BONK and hitting soldier with a bat xD

[@starlight846]

Just imagine being so tired, and seeing a figment of your imagination staring at you in the middle of the night…when it’s only you in the room

[@pieguy6992]

Cliffhanger? WHAT HAPPENED?!

[@luluczs]

Soldier is full of DED.

[@megustaelmate5499]

SCP-173: Hey men, working late? Scout: Yeah

[@suscrewmate9615]

3:16: Soldiers face tho-

[@YayoCreeg]

The light went out again And the red eyed man was..... fortnite dancing!!!!!

[@lgdub6060]

Theory: He is an entity from the hotel’s abandoned door and somehow escaped to finish the job.

[@lordlammi1562]

What's this in reference to?

[@lgdub6060]

@@lordlammi1562 White with Red.

[@lordlammi1562]

@@lgdub6060 ooooohhhh, yeah that was one of the first two creepypastas I ever heard, the other one was when the people moved to the new house and couldn't turn on lights, but played a game where they ran to the corners.

[@chr0min0id]

I didn’t know scout was a drug addict ghost who could teleport

[@ArchangelExile]

Then when the lights turned back on, the red-eyed guy was inside of him. Take that however you please.

[@RichterBelmont2235]

In Asia they says the dead wants the living to acknowledge their existence. So if you see them, pretend you don't, lest you attracts their attention...

[@fortress2270]

Legit thought it won’t scare me because of the TF2 characters it the moment that scene where scout’s close face was shown, that shit creeped me. Nice story and animation bro

[@CobbleTrash]

Well obviously it’s human sans

[@glitteringpeachy]

I know this is a bit old but I genuinely love the shot at the very beginning where Scout looks up and you can just see the red eye under the darkness of his hood. Really sets the kinda 'mysterious' feeling to come later in the animation.

[@daillysmidgeoftrolling6485]

The light went out, and i heard the red eyed man say... I have come to inform you of your cars extended warenty

[@ttdstudios6860]

Imagine The Story From The Smokers Side

[@GenaTurbo]

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[@jockeyfield1954]

the smoker looks like a younger, beefier version of Bill

[@greythepercyrepaint7888]

3:18 the 3rd grader next to me about to ask "you got any games on your phone?"

[@Guymanjack]

4:02 I'm traumatized

[@dews3217]

plot twist he had schizophrenia

[@gabrielherman3004]

3:46 where did we go so wrong?

[@Ginfeldi]

the hooded man has his sneak maxed out but the narrator had his perception maxed

[@ShonaS]

guys like if you got bewildered by this

[@Excuse_You]

Only in New York bro...

[@thepizzaman5622]

Normal train ride in New york

[@eridanasbagdonavicius5818]

that man was not a human i this was a ghost

[@dorteto2115]

The smoker got me the idea for my heavy set

[@elenabucur58]

as soon as the old man spoke after soldier yelled, i instantly thought "oh hecks naw he aint real"

[@karontheone1067]

Bro scout is just spy checking

[@trafficcones7804]

atleast the main character survived, no way he just ended it in a cliffhanger , if he died he wouldnt have written this story

[@mantisynth2186]

and here we see a red soldier trying to defend the intel. unfortunately for him, he ran into a blue heavy and a spy, who was disguised as a red scout.

[@Mateo-uv7fi]

SCOUT JUMPSCAREE

[@thomas_c0nn0r26]

0:55: sitting across the smoker *had flashbacks of left 4 dead*

[@กฤษดากลิ่นพิกุล]

This is how to make Creepy pasta more nicer and greater visualize. Question: 03:29 What's that Scout's hood model? I can't find in simple SFM Tf2 and its workshop.

[@necrocephsfm6793]

steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=146960103&searchtext=scout+hood I took the model from the Gmod workshop

[@ruffruggednraw]

Theory: it’s was all in his imagination

[@catyoga3691]

Make more sfm creepypasta please this is your first video I watched and I love it

[@user-co4dm9eb7t]

"I took 3 vitamimins at 3am"

[@SurfinBird.]

He’s escaping with the suit case get him boys

[@glockroach8482]

Omg I love your work I can never wait for your next video x3

[@CSL19]

DEAD

[@supergamerxda.k.azabuza4031]

Spooky

[@cptray-steam]

Really good animation.

[@X-SPONGED]

Then the lights went out, Then someone said right on my ear "Heads Up ChuckleNuts !" *Bonk*

[@jtm5304]

The lights flickered and and then........ Scout teleported and got stuck to a cliffhanger...

[@C.A._Old]

That Scout was amazing ever... Mostly Red Eye.

[@raketti7631]

I will never look at scouts the same way... 2:51

[@Taterzz]

it should have ended with 'BURGER KING FOOT LETTUCE"

[@kingdicemare]

pause at 2:15 this me when the teacher gives me homework

[@Barbarian1244]

I'm surprised in the end he didn't put the Hunter's scream from L4D

[@davidapplegate3744]

I get pressure migraines...it makes my right eye go blood red, always the right eye too.

[@clem7542]

Really, the heavy, smoking a CIGARETTE ?! This thing is even bigger than a cigare ! EDIT: also, if that scout was an actual person, he would probably a drug dealer

[@ddblock46]

he comes closer... and closer... and closer.... then he says, "I've been trying to reach you about your cars extended warranty"

[@johnmkinney5871]

The lights came on. Until.... He was next to me.. Me: OH SHIT!!!

[@mikestion4629]

Damn you, cliffhangers!

[@hamburgerBoons]

Why my brain told me in demo's voice to " kiss ya " When the scout teleported close 😭😭😭

[@xlorrix-6320]

i will continue the story just because i can: ...the light went out again... i bolted out of my seat and ran to the capitains cabin while i did that i took out my phone and in the complete dark tried to turn on the torch light of my problem is it was at 12% so the screen was almost black... then the smoker asked... "WHY ARE YOU RUNNING AWAY KID" i just answered "lights" i finally managed to brighten the screen and turn on the torch light... the button said it was open but only a speck of light came out just barely... it wasnt normal my flashlight was way brighter... but the speck of light managed to illuminate only one thing... the red eye of the red eyed man... the smoker screamed" WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING STOP SHINING YOUR LIGHT AT MY EYE ARE YOU CRAZY" i answered as the light turned back on " the lights just urned back on i was illuminating the room and the man right in front of me... the smoker said" the lights only turned off once kid you're the only one that they're turning off too" i then realized that the phones flashlight was turned off now and it was because... of the red eyed man he had his finger on my phone right on the flashlights icon... it now came to me that i only had 10% battery so i coudnt be stop him much longer i then ran to the drivers cabin asking for help... the driver opened the door and asked "whats the problem?" how many times did the lights turn off?" he responded "only 3 times sorry for the problem" i then explained the situation of the man he responded" what i was watching the cameras the kid walked out when you came in this train you're the only one on here" i responded "the only one?? what about the smoker?" he responded " there was never a smoker on this train are you good?" then the lights turned off again " the pilot was gone i scremed in confusion and the red eyed man was behing me... then... the light turned off again... i was waiting in a station for my train it was just past midnight i entered a train where there were 2 passengers...

[@0xenobys]

The lights went out.. SCOUT: Got gum?

[@betrayer_toxicmancer]

after the light came back on...he was inside me

[@qualia8047]

When i was in a daycare one time there was This Kid who was mentally ill. He was i would say even nice to me but he Had these Rageful outburts which were really scary Sometimes because both or only one of his eye started turning Red. Probably because of the blood pressure but im Not an expert. He Had to be locked away so he could calm down but He was Always kicking and screaming at the door. Like i said i don't think He was a Bad Person but to witness these things was fascinating but also very disturbing. So you can Imagine why This Animation Struck me a little more than expected.

[@capitalliz7635]

The light went out again... And the red-eyed man... "You got any games on your phone?"

[@rowannyooom6958]

Maybe the guy just had pinkeye. It could definitely explain why his eye was red.

[@nahuelagustindubo8181]

soldier:the light went out and the red eyed man... disappears