Trying to put more effort in!

I am trying to learn more and more about video and editing .. right now I want to focus on the editing part and see if I can make it better... Please forgive the mess in the condo and this is just a 30 sec clip ... But what do you all think?
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[@RonCallari1]

I like it - nice job. Editing takes a while. But as they say, the more you do, the better you get. Keep it up!

[@LanceandYing]

Thanks so much :) I am working on a 2 min video and I am taking 2 weeks to do it ... planning the shots and making sure the shots look good :) looking forward to sharing it :)