Two Bikers Pick on the Wrong Black Navy Commander at a Diner

[@DGSTORY-t3e]

This story masterfully demonstrates the quiet strength and resilience of a character who, despite her unassuming appearance, commands respect through her calm determination and assertiveness. It is an empowering narrative that challenges stereotypes and highlights how true authority and dignity are often revealed under pressure. The commander’s ability to stand her ground without resorting to aggression, even when faced with hostility, is both inspiring and thought-provoking. This is a testament to the idea that strength lies not in the loudest voice but in unwavering composure and conviction.

[@vickijoseph53]

Why do these story tellers feel it necessary to repeat the same line over and over again. It is so damn irritating. Added to that it just takes away from the enjoyment of the story.

[@StoriesofJustice-channel]

It’s shocking how quickly things can escalate when people underestimate others. The twist with the Navy commander is incredible-definitely a reminder to never judge or mess with someone based on appearance. Respect is key!

[@delanolicorish1443]

I love it when women stand up to Bullies.

[@TJay41]

The only thing I got out of this was the woman was incredibly patient, and the fact that it didn’t end in violence showed her strength, but otherwise there was no real point to the story, there were no consequences to the men’s actions, not that I wanted anyone to get harmed I just didn’t get the point of the story, things could have been handled so differently the title is deceptive because she didn’t even identify herself, unless she thought it would make the situation worse, the fact that she went back in there to get a paper by herself knowing these guys were there without any back up made no sense as well, that paper wasn’t worth risking her life or the lives of others was not worth it, and why would she take something like that in a place where it could be seen by others in the first place it just made no sense.

[@chlofene]

This is longer than it should have been...too wordy.

[@AfricanTalesBestHT]

Thanks for sharing your insights! If one of the characters had to sacrifice something important to them, how do you think it would change their journey and relationship with others?"

[@clicketyclack57]

shorter length without the repeat

[@EmotionVault01]

We will improve

[@AfricanTalesBestHT]

"Thank you for your feedback! If the story had a different tone-more serious or lighthearted-how do you think it would affect the characters' growth and decisions?"

[@TangiCook-co7vf]

Weird for a navy commander she had no car explain

[@christrepanier4912]

Watching from😢and 😮Brighton in the uk

[@virginiam2223]

This was sooo bad so much talkingthis could have been 30-40 mins. an hour and 34 mins. was just too long for this 😮 🇵🇦

[@dorothyKirkwood]

Wow they are still talking still dragging on 😮

[@dorothyKirkwood]

,Finally she stated or I'll move you

[@MarleneQuaw]

Gosh finally she doing something about it

[@MarleneQuaw]

Gee she rich her ship and back on the road

[@patriciadeleon8969]

Hope all your stories don’t go on like this one. This one really turned me away❤

[@cocoakid9976]

This story was too long and repetitive…my patience was as taxed as the navy commander. I skipped to the end. 😢

[@sylviasamuels3089]

I hated this every other one of these stories where former military personnel are confronted with bullying you don't spend the whole story with them taking it like you did with this woman of color! Even some civilian women get in on the action but here this whole story was her being bullied Mercilessly!

[@savlettapriester6748]

long and boring

[@AfricanTalesBestHT]

Thanks for sharing your perspective! If the protagonist could get a glimpse of their life five years after the story ends, do you think they’d be satisfied with their choices, or would they regret some?"

[@MarleneQuaw]

Well leave

[@dorothyKirkwood]

Too much back and forth

[@jacquelynjones616]

Why do these bikers feel that they are hadass???

[@evangelistphyllissimmons8242]

This is not logits,

[@dorothyKirkwood]

So long too much repetition

[@maryedwards8551]

I hope your next stories are better than this boring I think

[@dalbertgordon4177]

You repeat the same words over and over again too drawn out

[@georgiavassel8202]

Your story telling is boring to long

[@mervnethenry2818]

This story is boring, and long repeating the same thing over and over

[@patriciadeleon8969]

Hope all your stories don’t go on like this one. This one really turned me away❤