Upon entering her son's garage, where she was forbidden to go, the old woman fainted at the sight...

[@shivanidumas6607]

Very detailed story. One cannot always foresee how reconciliation will take place in the scope of two people lives, yet the circumstances of the young woman’s death and discovery of her body brought the mother and her estranged elder son together. The villain in the story was truly depicted as a misogynist with a deranged personality. The character played out until he was met with his demise in prison where his own death was orchestrated by fellow inmates who became aware of his crimes. Wish that the story was told in story-telling mode rather than a script reading. When one attempts to read a story rather than invoking a story teller’s voice, the nuances are somewhat lost.

[@lorifiler121]

Find better material. This story sucks.