Wandering witch: the journey of elaina react to rimuru | [AU] in the description |

[@kirby69813]

I love the AU’s that are just: Rimuru got bored, so he went to a different universe

[@Donny131]

hey broskie, im glad you are not taking the criticism in a bad way but instead taking it as a chance to improve! but all of the comments i do agree with

[@RipBwah]

Nice vid

[@Rblxxx_1290]

Its a nice vid u just need to improve the design and face motion🔥🔥🔥

[@Yamiyugi7987]

Tips to make your videos look like they weren't made by a 7yr old Inprove your characters looks Add a lot more frames to your videos never use a frame twice unless its a non reaction/talking frame Move your characters both they're bodys and faces need to move in order to make your characters look like they dont belong in skyrim Dont use the big bulging eyes they look plain and generic use the suprised eyes when they are surprised Dont have your characters go from 😐 to 😮 its lifeless and boring use plenty of screenshots for surprised moments Have your characters inquire more on the character they are reacting to Only have at most 2 speach bubbles up at once Have your videos structured more have some introduction videos then some videos on one topic then another topic ect. Inprove your spelling and grammar Lastly take inspiration from other gatcha react creaters

[@RimuruTempestvoidprince]

@@Yamiyugi7987 thanks I will try your tip🤔😁

[@valley212]

Nice vid good reaction time but at the very least can I request that you improve the character please

[@RimuruTempestvoidprince]

@@valley212 like how can I improve the character please do tell me it would be helpful 😁

[@vinayaputri8779]

😊

[@Sane_25]

nice idea, but to be brutely honest the video quality is shit

[@RimuruTempestvoidprince]

@@Sane_25 then I will try to increase the quality😁

[@hellboyhero7819]

​@@RimuruTempestvoidprince Most of your sentences are wrong The most common problem you have is writing will instead of well,but that isn't the only thing. You should also try to not always start a sentence with the same word.

[@RimuruTempestvoidprince]

@@hellboyhero7819 thanks for you guidance