Webtoon Critique and Review: Asher

[@JELea-wc6re]

Eeeee! Thank you so much! That being said... I can't believe we haven't stated Nerine's name. Or how long it took for Cael and Asher to be named... whoops.

[@cassiscrowmatic]

Thank you so much for the thorough critique! It was actually really helpful and my cowriter and I are already discussing it all for improving things! (I still can't believe we have yet to say Nerine's name, or how long it took to say Asher's! Woops.) Several points of danger are planned to appear soon, but I think you're right that Asher has had things a little too easy, and it makes it less clear that he's cockier than he should be. It's an excellent point (though all of your points are excellent) I will also add that there are some establishing shots you mentioned that were planned, buuuut I ran out of time before I could finish them. ._.;; I'll need to make sure I make sure there's extra time to cover those scenes from now on. (And though I don't have time to go back at the moment... it might be worth doing that as well, just to really give a sense of scale.) Despite not wanting to redo text, I've actually been thinking of replacing Adi's text explicitly because that B, and I think this just affirmed it as something I'm going to do. It'll just take a bit of time, since I'll probably end up making the font myself. (You're definitely correct about the struggle of finding good, readable and fitting fonts if you're doing things nontraditionally!) Nerine I hadn't been paying enough attention to spacing, but I think I should be able to tweak the font more so that spacing between words is more consistent, so thank you for pointing that out! :) The icon itself I, uh... never actually designed and just grabbed something from one of the first collabs I did. ._.;;; so I think I'll make an actual one. I was wondering if I should try to get all the main cast in, but I'll try focusing on Asher. Thank you! :) Anyway, I should stop now, but thank you again, this has been incredibly helpful. (And hopeful to plenty other people too!)

[@abyss1996]

Your comic looks really cool!!

[@cassiscrowmatic]

@@abyss1996 Thank you so much! I love Walter's critiques and his channel in general.

[@Gleamiarts]

ooh this comic is beautiful :0

[@klgraywill]

The sense of urgency is such a good crit - you always have honest and interesting insight. Appreciate this series immensely!

[@dianasaurstudio]

Great critique as always! I'm a fan of Asher and it's creators, done a collab with them once too (super nice people and so talented!!) and it was cool to see your perspective again. It's cool that all these critiques apply to anyone wanting to make comics, helps us all grow together! Webtoon seems to have a great vibe about cultivating artists' explorations.

[@Magillana]

I have found so many awesome webtoons through your critiques :D Great job, as always.

[@saranimator6746]

Yessss judgments bunny time!!!

[@armaril7552]

You are literally so underrated! If I ever need Webtoon advice, the first thing I do is hop on to this channel!

[@nootnootman6353]

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[@Gleamiarts]

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[@mink2882]

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[@marsbarr4144]

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[@anomeru5031]

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[@dreamingblue3939]

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[@Nikke283]

Again...great critique (on a cool comic). Lovely!

[@taylorcardinal9060]

Love your reviews and advice! It inspires me in my own comic making journey!

[@dreamsimpactcomics]

Mane! Your critiques are so dope. One of these days I will be ready lol

[@ziona2000]

Great critique! Establishing shot info was needed!

[@joyceoliveira3862]

Very enlightening 👏 would you critique a sketch of a webcomic and make the video only after the webcomic is out? I mean by that patreon tier...

[@rudy3383]

Thank you for the critique. If you decide to do another one, you should consider reviewing "Ghost Eyes" but Mr.Circus Papa. It's honestly one of the best things I've ever read. Their are a lot of chapters but they are VERY short. It also updates 2-3 times a week if not more. Anyways, i HIGHLY recommend this underrated Webtoon. TRIGGER WARNING TO THOSE WHO ARE CONSIDERING READING IT.

[@walterostlie]

The creator would have to ask me to do it and I am a little backed up with requests already. But Ghost Eyes does sound and look pretty cool.

[@randomcoyotestudios986]

I like your insights and thought processes; the way you approach critique is very useful and you have an excellent talent for speaking truths without making a reasonable person feel a need to be on the defensive. When I put that science-fiction war story up on webtoons I may ask for your input. I have another webcomic (self-owned site, not Webtoons) that I'd be interested in hearing your insights on but the project has run for 7+ years and has way, waaayyy too many episodes to reasonably wade through at this point (800+ at this point). So the next project will just have to do I guess! XD

[@saranimator6746]

I'm early!!!