What if Deku became Japan's guardian? |Part 1|

[@wolfoxMineblox]

Bakugou said "2 mess buns and yellows eyes with slit puplis" i paused and thought "toga?" 😭😂😂😂

[@starlightlost1]

This sounds like 15 different "what if" stitch together, I keep hearing parts I know are from other stories it just so confusing though I got to say it works

[@heideelentz9571]

We need part 2... this is a great story 😂love it ❤

[@arjegarcia3661]

Please please please please please pleaaaaaaaasssssse make part 2. I love this what if series 😇😇😇😇

[@dieoxyfrom3079]

We need part 2

[@thefoundationgaming9912]

Part 2 please 🙏🏼

[@jariuscollins]

does anyone realize he is just a japan batman

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Well I was inspired by a story called 'the hero we need'.

[@buttmuncher6670]

It should be Bush man

[@The_Blue_Otaku]

Bruh this fanfic kinda started mostly original up until the cannibalistic Purana hero was introduced then this fanfic's writer started copying from other peoples fics, hell at times almost word for word mostly from this one fanfic about Izuku becoming Batman that takes down criminals and corrupt heroes because his mom was killed by a corrupt hero when he was like 6 or something

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Please add part 2 when I add more chapters.

[@DnWhatIf]

ohk

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Add part two please! From chapter 20 to 43

[@raddyvexxgamez3946]

"I'm vengeance,"

[@jacobjohnson8635]

Honestly I would’ve liked this story a lot if it was a bit more original. There are so many passages and dialogues that I recognize from other people’s fics that it lacks cohesion. It’s one thing to be inspired by other people’s works but when you try to piece together aspects and interactions straight from those other works it’s very obvious. Especially when there are dialogues and statements that lacked pre-established context. Things like Izuku’s relationship with Melissa Shield and Eraserhead’s comment of “it’s fine so long as the kid continues to stay out of fights” after hearing a report of Izuku fighting criminals. To be clear I liked a lot of the other fanfics that were referenced in this one, and I want to like this fic as well, however I can’t. This feels like an amalgamation of other people’s fanfics pieced together rather than trying to be it’s own thing, and for that reason I just can’t enjoy it.

[@foxydo-any-think]

hooe the next part come out soon

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Add part two! I got a bunch of chapters and two new arcs!

[@aleksixristov9407]

This is gold 😅😅😂😂

[@gage6416]

EVEN THE WORDING IS THE SAME 47:30 goof ahh green guid nock off

[@Spyker13]

Is there a part 2?

[@DnWhatIf]

No

[@Braxton.Schlenker]

Does nobody read the title?

[@Mooseman987]

The hate on Endeavor is top tier

[@Olivia-o6s]

Fr 😂

[@gage6416]

55:00 is a direct quote from the green guide wtf

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

By 3 more days I should get at least 10 more chapters!

[@DnWhatIf]

Oohk let me know after finishing

[@Ottopip]

Damn that fast

[@thegreatpapyrus1097]

To be honest, i dont really mind the lines taken from the green guide fic, it's actually funny to me.

[@partydisaster7556]

I heard this is a movie 😂😂

[@mariamagdalenacaderao8148]

Is this the family of the wayn this is a knock off of batman😂😂😂😂

[@josiahsilverstein4979]

This is Batman

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Is that bad?

[@donaford1259]

Who makes a better Red Hood Jason Todd or Himeko Toga???? Please Part 2!!!!!!

[@DnWhatIf]

Start countdown of 40 minutes you will get it.

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Definitely Toga! She is more hilarious

[@rosetrice7739]

oh and can I get the copy of the endeavor easy

[@nekku8604]

They are all cursing on endevor

[@ccarrl1257]

why do so many of these make toga, or the crafter girl (brain dumb)or both friends

[@rosetrice7739]

why dose this remind me of batman?

[@tylerlane9981]

He's just batman

[@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw]

Is that bad?

[@denki-kaminari2]

​@@DekuvigilanceX2009-xv9yw I don't think it is

[@Red-m444ddtt]

What if deku married team rwby and Velvet, Coco part 1. Deku have boost gear in rwby universe. Deku become a hero in rwby universe. Please do it 😃🙏!!!!!

[@DnWhatIf]

link?

[@0UR0B0R0S]

they think you write them@@DnWhatIf

[@Red-m444ddtt]

What if deku married team rwby and Velvet Coco part 1. Deku have kratos god of war ragnarok power in rwby universe. Deku have six son from his wife. Please do it 😃🙏!!!!

[@DnWhatIf]

link?

[@gage6416]

Green guide rip off goof ahh