What If Naruto Bijuu Level Chunin Exams || Part-1 ||

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part 2 please

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Fanfic name - Naruto: Jinchuriki of Two Bijuu

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I'm really wondering who ever wrote this and others like it if they've ever had any kind of espionage training nor any idea how being secretive actually works. You don't hide it dead last. You had third from the bottom or just under the middle. And other words, you hide in mediocre territory, but not completely last. Cause that makes you a target for bullying. And if you want to be seen as both good, but not so important. You had a force of the way from the top hidden dead last never does him any good. It's not that they underestimate him. They see him as a fool and he would never get respect. I mean, Naruto had to win the fourth ninja war and almost died numerous times in the cannon story before everybody finally decided he needed to be hokage. He had to do the most ridiculous stuff to get everybody's respect and he had to be taken to the edge of death so many times before they actually admitted he deserved to be hokagee and it's all because he was the class clown and he was a fool for most of his. Childhood, but if we wanted to have respect, but also be under. Estimated, he should be right around the middle, but being dead last done, absolutely no favors. And in most of these stories where he's hiding his true abilities hiding it dead last doesn't know good. It just made him ridicule it gave him the wrong kind of attention. While if he was like third from the bottom, he wouldn't be called dead. Last all the time, you wouldn't be seen as a complete fold. But he also would have been us underestimated. Maybe it's just because I was in the military. And I know how you hide shithe nail that stands out gets hammered and if you're top of it and you make a mistake you'll get hammered and if you're at the bottom you get hammered anyway. So don't be the nail that sticks up at the top or bottom. Be the nail that's quietly sitting there in the middle.

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Please make more of these videos

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Please make part 2

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PART 2

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can you please make another one

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Authors. Why do you keep making unnecessary changes? Why change that? Sunade was the granddaughter and make her the daughter of seriously. It doesn't affect the story. Why do that? We're not just one of the changes that we're made. That made not a single difference to the story. One way or the other. I spend all this time thinking up these convoluted ideas. That don't make a bit of difference and then they kind of go lackluster with the actual storyline. There's part of the storyline that could have been improved instead. It's like all these unnecessary changes took up. The creativity of the author isn't really me trashing on any stories. I do creative criticisms even on stories. I absolutely love. I will still pick it apart and that's what I'm doing here. I like this story. But there was too many unnecessary changes to the plot. If you're going to spend all that time, re write the entire story or write a story in your own independent world, put the creative changes to use within the story itself. Not just change s*** because you feel like it. And they don't make a bit of difference later. You changed them and they don't matter at all to the story. And what really detracts from the story? Is the improper use of terminology? It's not true blood. It's true born true blood couldn't be too different. Bloodlines, you don't only have one blood line. A true born of 2 bloodlines could exist and again don't changing all these little tiny things in the story if it does not enhance it. Then don't use the changes. It's like this story was Renton. Really complicated, so you don't have to put much effort into the actual relationships and storyline. It just becomes all technical gibberish.

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Part 2