#whatifnaruto #narutowhatif #naruto #council Name- The Archangel Credit- dasonone
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@tomascook695828 күн бұрын
Please make part I hope to see it soon ❤❤❤
@galacticrepublicofthenerds93828 күн бұрын
Please make part 2 ❤❤❤❤❤
@anthonyhuffman169227 күн бұрын
Really enough of making him stupid and a doormat to Sakura. It's like every no I will admit it's like 60% of it. They leave him exactly like he was in cannon and stupid and falling around like a puppy dog behind Sakura. But then they do stuff to make it like he feels that Hinata is stalking him in stuff and it's like. That happens 95% of the time out of all the fan fictions, which is over 500 that I've rather listen to, they don't want to hook up with Hinata, and they think they're doing something different. No, they're doing like everybody else. And every time he says I'm going to be the best hokage I want to vomit. Why wouldn't you even want the job? Everybody's like all he wants to be accepted. You get accepted, then you become a Hokage. The way these stories are written is illogical. Nobody behaves that way. Now, abusive. Yes, I can see that happening. But him keep ongoing after Sakura. Time after time after time him telling people he wants to be hokage all the time. Why would he want the job if he has any intelligence to enough to tie his shoes, He wouldn't do these things.Sorry this is just my pet peeve and my rant for the day author I like your story I really do I just wish he would want to keep the wings. This is just a pet peeve . But author seriously the way you've ordered it You're going to bring villains from some other genre? You don't need to do that. And most people kill their stories when they do that. He has plenty of villains in his own world that are super tough. He doesn't need something like Fate or the angel demons from high school DX D. Introduceful 8 and truthfully, the ninjas without many of the supernatural creatures from DXD. And I do love this story. I do I think it's well written to, but it's just. I've been listening to fan fictions for about 2 days now. I'll come back every couple of weeks to listen to some More and the amount of Em that are either Hinata haters or I'm stupid Naruto, instead of I'm sneaky smart Naruto and Hinata X Naruto. It just gets old, love the stories. But it's still that they keep pushing my pet peeves and my buttons.