What if Naruto Left Jiraiya and Betrayed Konoha | 2

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Credit to the author: The Dark Hood

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Very nice premise to this story. Props to the author for the original thought. I do wish the scenes were longer and that he didn’t bounce around as much. It gets distracting and takes away from key moments. I get that it is his writing style, but as I said, it is distracting.

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Hey! KCM, if you are looking for full fics to publish with authors approval, hit me up.