What If Naruto Left Konoha After Failing the Genin Exams for the Third Time?

[@jackstorm1954]

Part 2 soon please

[@isaacjohnson1992]

Part 2,3 please

[@anthonyhuffman1692]

Okay, this author is making a lot of unnecessary changes like the uzimak's do not have blonde hair blue eyes. They tend to have red hair purple or green eyes. It's like he's wanting to eliminate the namikaze part of Naruto or maybe this was written before a lot of that information come out. I don't know but those monkey tend to have red hair. Particularly, the head fami know, people who have actually listened to it and read the Manga note of the US, but that's just one of them, it really wasn't necessary to make up a story like that, my opinion, and it's just an opinion nobody has to change anything is that it? Doesn't enhance your story. Don't change the Canon. Change the Canon all you want if it builds your story. But don't make unnecessary changes to the fan just for the fan fiction. Or I don't know, maybe you felt a needed to make it blonde hair and blue eyes, but I don't see why and I don't see how that would enhance the story. I've made this comment on people. Want to do that now? Make a motor and I'm like you missed one of the points of the original story and it didn't enhance there's any So really in fan fictions. A lot of authors get a little too creative to full of their own imaginations. They make a lot of changes to the story that is never comment it on again in their story. It's like describing all of the clothes everyone wears and they may change Colors. And then they'll go through a complete new description of it. It's like all that is unnecessary page filler. Another issue I'm having right now is his utter hatred of the village as a whole. Here's the issue with that. There's a lot of people who actually like Naruto and narto's personality isn't one to do the same thing to other people that was done to him, a lot of people hated him and didn't even know him. And now he's hating the entire village, he doesn't even know everybody in the village. And I've made him oblivious to the people who actually did like him like hanata. He couldn't read her actions or he chose not to I don't know. Was he wrapped up in secure in this one? They never said, but the whole point is. He's making a sweetie thing judgment. He's painting the entire village with the same brush strokes and I can understand some aint. But he's, I hate the village. Why? What did the actual village due to him? It's the people in the village. Is buildings and land people live in the village? The people are the ones that made him feel so bad and hurt him and abuse him. And it's not everybody, so if they haven't just go in and destroy an act hateful toward everybody, including the people who actually were nice to him, I'm going to be like they just. F***** over this guy's personality.

[@taskdgg7843]

Go back to school 😆

[@Nikolai2i]

You know that if you didn't like the story you could just not read it. I done it multiple times. Also the changed are pretty minimal. Not to mention that it could be old fanfic. These fanfics are just voice over. Originally most of them created when Naruto was airing. Maybe even before we discovered about Minato and Kushina.