What would happen if the villainess knew the plot in advance?

[@MoreThanaPint]

Lots of stupid mistakes, but still enjoyable. Best quote is "dot oh dot" 😂😂😂😂

[@celestel7237]

What is with all the narration mistakes?! It makes the story almost too annoying to listen to.😢

[@dbg5942]

Ignore bad translation. If you're smart you will get used to it. Excellent story.

[@jenniferroberts9406]

OK, I think I've been a pre-beta editor too many times. I've become adept at sorting bad grammer & spelling to get through to story arc. This one is basic and straightforward.

[@GiGi-p6o]

Where is part 2 ?? This is very good ❤

[@СветланаСоловьева-в5ц]

I like my party 😂

[@CarolCarol31]

Proofread your videos before uploading, the story had potential but was ruined by the many mistakes 😞