When I was THIRTEEN My Friends and I Solved The STRINGS Murders

[@yvette_is_Mamacado]

Half a POUND of coke???? I clearly missed my calling as "janitor." 😅

[@avib943]

I need to know more about this little girl. I hope this is part of a series but if not, I need the author to give me more! 😂

[@winstonwins1096]

Agreed!

[@OveltineJenkins]

What a twist! I wasn't expecting all that

[@harvenger0death]

" and in case I don't see you again, good afternoon, good evening and good night" This took a Truman Show turn that I wasn't expecting

[@Shadow1The]

Thank you Jordan, good cadence and as always thank you for the hard work

[@kimberlyshepherd270]

Hi Jordan 👋. I'm sick and I'm off work today 😔. Trying to get some cleaning done so I'll be listening as I do so ❤

[@lacylaizure6540]

You are doing it wrong! You are supposed to get comfy and chill while you are sick! 😊

[@robbing8452]

Drink water, rest don’t over exert, remember you are loved. There that is my mom advice. I hope you feel better soon ❤

[@twiggygrl84]

Feel better fast 💗

[@kimberlyshepherd270]

​@@lacylaizure6540 I know 😔. But I work and on my days off I usually relax. But hubby keeps getting on me for being on my phone all the time.

[@kimberlyshepherd270]

​@@robbing8452Thank you and your mom ❤🫂. I think we (hubby and I) have bronchitis 😭. No medical insurance to go and see the doctor (let alone my neurologist for my brain cancer) so no help there. I've been trying to drink more water. Usually all I drink is energy drinks.

[@beckywatt2263]

I'm Ready!

[@grayhatjen5924]

I absolutely LOVED this. Initially, I was like, there has to be a part 2!!! But but but, only if the next part can be just as good. If you look back at some of the very OG nosleep stories. Every once in a while, you can run across a story that was extended because people were just clamboring for more, not because there was more story to tell. Either way, I love this. If it's the start of a new series, we're looking at a Borrasca type situation. Something that can't become a genre because it's so unique. Or we have an amazing stand-alone piece. Either way, I'm pleased as friggin punch. Well done.

[@ericexp497]

That plot twist was just got of left field. It went from kids playing detective to some kind paranormal evil organization. I say paranormal because it seemed like the kids at the end had some awareness even though they were deceased

[@agathacamilladcruz4938]

This needs a continuation!

[@alniahjohnson8494]

That escalated quickly

[@CLCinflorida]

I've got no strings no hold me down, to make me laugh, or make me Frown... 👏👏👏👍👍👍

[@robbing8452]

Here late and on the road listening. It’s my husband’s birthday and we are going out! ❤️🎃🍀

[@lacylaizure6540]

@robbing8452 Happy birthday to your husband! Have fun!

[@robbing8452]

@ thank you so much

[@ChristianPerez-ku9dz]

Bro, that was a damn good story fingers crossed this becomes a series I gotta know more 😖

[@nitalowrey5021]

Great story. I never saw that ending coming. Thank you ❤

[@suecasper4243]

This was so interesting. I loved it.

[@marietepper724]

💙💚🖤 That was a helluva good story!!! And great narration of course!!!

[@darkbb187]

Wow. I need a part 2 asap

[@kristinacable]

This is ADORABLE!! 😊

[@claudekidder7280]

Great story Jordan. 👏 I hope there's a part two.

[@suzanallan5440]

Plot twist! PLOT TWIST!! Although calling the happenings a plot twist is rather like calling a 12-car collision a wee fender bender. Mind blown. Totally shattered. Low threshold? Maybe. If there's no sequel, then I just don't know. BTW if you're the kind who says "I saw that coming from the very beginning," YOU DID NOT!! Going for a lie down now...

[@tenalohr1300]

Love, love, love this story. I want more, please

[@carolineverner9773]

Great story! Thankyou Jordan ❤

[@EvelynWade-k6w]

👍👍indisputably excellent, this story was thrilling and totally captivating. The end was surprising.I loved and enjoyed this marvelous story. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖

[@dravenbladesong1]

I want a continuation. Which classmate is the puppetmaster? Kids on the strings reminds me of the fate of the sheriff in “Killer Klowns from Outer Space”

[@erikaballard5224]

That's one of my top 3 favorite movies of all time, but I hardly ever come across anyone who's even heard of it 😂

[@nancyd2240]

That was a good story. TY

[@caymens604]

Dang 🥺 that plot twist

[@claydragon6055]

I bet these little kids had all kinds of friends growing up. Yep, I bet they were the very first kids that were invited to every party, and everyone wanted to hang with 😞😮‍💨😡

[@Ljh440]

Hey Jordon this was a fantastic story!!! ❤️

[@georgeleslie7259]

These guys needs to get more stories 4real

[@kimberlyshepherd270]

What do you mean by that?

[@georgeleslie7259]

@kimberlyshepherd270 that this story needs to keep going

[@jeanmaynes3684]

This was really weird. Well done

[@Soulsfromthevoid]

🤣 "Protective", nah MF, Noah was tryna be all alpha. Wanted to be the only guy in the group. So transparent.

[@lindaarrington9397]

Ty hun😊❤

[@keithblount229]

Thanks Jordan.

[@GrilledCheeseDaniel]

Can’t lie, ending confused TF outta me 😂😂 can anyone explain?!

[@DontrplytoMycomments]

Thank god a conclusion im so happy for that even tho its unclear if its a girl or boy bc the thumbnail shows one thing the director said another thing and the narrator another thing. Is it just an ai voice made to repeat the lines? Kinda silly to consistently get names, genders and other simple stuff wrong this often

[@visnjica30]

It's a girl. Last line was from Pinocchio.

[@DontrplytoMycomments]

@visnjica30 yes but I'm not convinced it was intentional just seems weird to not just say im a real girl. Idk I'm being picky but still fine enough

[@stephonmanny7555]

It’s real person reading the story they just made a mistake. The last line was actually supposed to be “And now I guess I am a real girl”. The link to the original story is in the description.

[@nicolasfiore]

WTF did I just listen to?

[@richardsmith4653]

Have to say it didn't gi like I expected super Weird ending

[@Djwunmoshen]

The end confused the hell Outta me. The director said. “Get her Daughter of the set” the. The end words was “I am a Boy” for a matter of fact. I didn’t even know the gender of the main narrator… until the end

[@luckyrobinshomestead]

That was not a twist I was expecting. At all.

[@queensuccessful1]

Hooking up with your nemesis to catch the real nemesis. Dang milk stealing kid 😂

[@mirzamay]

Super creepy story. But I really don't understand the ending. I'm lost.

[@rileyward8112]

Me too. I don't understand the ending I think I missed something

[@suecasper4243]

​@rileyward8112 same still good is it a show within a show. I'll have to replay the last part

[@Badassoldwoman]

Glad I'm not the only one. Came to the comments to get answers.

[@alicefly3198]

Hmmm, from charming child sleuthing to WTF?!💜💜💀💀🖤🖤

[@NamasW24]

Oh cool something different is this a stand alone or part of a series ..? This has a Japanese vibe with the shoes being removed at school

[@devinvaldesalice7427]

Ugh.....this one was hard to follow. It felt WAYYY too rushed. At the end, suddenly he doesn't know what his mom does for work so he follows her? Wherw did the last quarter of this story come from??

[@Roadwarrior721]

Reminds me of a kids scooby doo

[@AMARK1NG]

I feel sorry for the milk thing

[@winstonwins1096]

Ok so was the protagonist a "daughter" or "a real boy?" Symbolic for gender transformation?

[@mattmain237]

Principal Main!???

[@annettefrancis2034]

❤❤❤

[@MizMorgue1]

Great narration as usual, but ....not my favorite story of yours. I feel fairly confident in saying your fans need a part 2, and we want to see the evil little girl go down🔪🔪🔪💜

[@NamasW24]

14:47 4TH GRADE

[@ettapage-]

❤❤

[@rdbuckels]

All this time I though it was a girl. 🤷‍♂️

[@dantealexander9142]

The ending was stupid.

[@WindyBurns]

❤👋😍😘

[@kimberlyshepherd270]

Thank you for the story and excellent narration Jordan 🫶❤️. We "grupies" appreciate everything you do for us ❤️. I could never do what you do!! I'm way too shy 😔. Surprisingly enough I have people subscribed to me but I don't post anything so I'm not sure why. Like I said in my other comment I'm cleaning the room with my husband. Therefore I'm going to have to relisten because I feel like I missed a lot of it 😢. Sorry this is so long 😔