When Your Half Brother Kicked You out of the house While Snowing Heavily

[@nynyrackzz2407]

it’s giving part two because that’s a lot to take in as a four year old child I want to see her reaction to them as a teenager

[@LoveStance]

Two things to our wonderful author here.... 1st. I'm so glad I made sure I had no distractions while I watched this through. You write well all the time, but the subtle darkness that progressed throughout this piece was exemplary. 2nd. I'm very glad you gave no hint about the background of the families, making all the readers take a big....Oh....Ahhh...when her parentage was revealed. While this is fiction, this is a reminder of how children's perceptions can be easily led astray and how cruel they can be when angered, jealous, or just 'cuz'. I was REAL happy that Yn didn't die outside, as that would have been sadly tragic, and her step-siblings might have felt bad for leaving her outside, but they'd have not understood the full impact of their actions if they'd not seen how terrorized she'd become of them. Part of me would like a bonus to explore how their lives unfolded over the years, but another part likes exactly where you left things. You've done an exceptional job with this. - St@nce

[@missrandom5430]

Why am I smiling so big while reading your comment? 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@LoveStance]

@@missrandom5430 Because you know you made a FINE piece of work, and you were gifted with some personal validation for all the toil and...turmoils you experienced putting your world into print for us to enjoy with you!! :) xoxoxox - St@nce

[@nohway07]

I'm crying rn! This is such a good story! I felt like i was actually reading a book.

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@army_girl_ot71313]

Your every story have always made me cry no matter what................. I just loved the way you put sooo much details in your every story and how you just make up the actual scene....................... Mind-blowing ✨ Well, I actually fell more emotional then any other person because I am also a story writer just the thing is I haven't made any story on internet, I have them in a book but absolutely the stories are also deep meaning one, so I really like your stories a lot

[@missrandom5430]

Awww. Thank You so much for appreciating the way ai write. It really makes me happy 💜💜💜

[@ishratjahanjui4109]

Author really can make me cry . I did cry I'm not lying

[@cookiebts7743]

Author nim!!! Y do u always make me cry??!!! 😫😫💜✨

[@missrandom5430]

Peace, sweetieee💜💜💜

[@radhagupta9162]

You never fails to make me cry 😭

[@Saanvigattani]

Now this is what a masterpiece called! 😭 you will become a great Author one day😭❤❤

[@Myriamele]

Absolutely perfect, as always. My emotions took a rollercoaster ride, I am glad to see how it ended. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@melodyshortcuts4225]

I never felt so happy to cry 😭 love u author

[@missrandom5430]

Awwwww love u too, sweetieee💜💜💜

[@le-anne4309]

This is a beautiful story ! A masterpiece !!!!! A fairy tale .I suggest you make an animated movie or a picture book of it. The story is too beautiful to let it be just a story !🥰💞

[@missrandom5430]

I agree. I'm actually talking to some of my friends who knows how to animate or to make it like a manhua but unfortunately we all have hectic schedules. But who knows. Maybe someday

[@bagntanplaylistsforyou]

ok how about you tell me all the things you are good at including writing absolute masterpieces and making me cry, like author nim don't you know how big of a trouble i would be in if my mom walked in on me crying while staring at my screen. Also author nim, what did poor y/n did to you, you're always giving her trauma and ptsd and anxiety, like what did she ever do to you. this was amazing, keep writing author nim, ill be here to read your stories.

[@missrandom5430]

Awwwww Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@Justtt_jiwoo]

Anytime you realese anything unnie, it's a masterpiece i love ur work so much unnie

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You, sweetieee 💜💜💜

[@XG71]

I Know It's Gonna Be Masterpiece

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@maitrisharma1851]

I never comment on ffs usually but I badly want a ff of middle child problems can you please make a ff on that topic and that too of jin or any hyung line member please 🙃🙇

[@namjooniee7]

This FF was masterpiece...💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuu 💜💜💜

[@jVt1306..]

I was literally crying 😭 hard entire the video....... . I am not lying, seriously ..... It just touched my deep inside heart ...

[@missrandom5430]

Awww Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@user-mx5zn9yi8z]

so, im a new subscriber and your never fail to make something soo incredible and good... i knew it was going to be good just seeing the thumbnail.... Keep making these amajin stories.. i will always root for you.. borahee💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuuu💜💜💜

[@yeonapark]

Can't wait for an amazing story again!! 💜💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@zenia2310]

It was truly a masterpiece..like this time yn didn't became an assassin(which i think feels unrealistic) i enjoyed alot . Keep making this kind of masterpiece author 👍

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@dianalechuga5523]

Wow! This one had my heart ache for her. She is so little, and they had no understanding in them. I hope school is going well. Please take care of yourself❤💜❤💜❤💜

[@missrandom5430]

I'm already in a vication, sweetiee. So no worries. And thank Youu. I hope you're doing good at school aswell 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@dianalechuga5523]

@Miss Random thank you, but I have already graduated with my masters degree, so I remember a lot of the pressure to finish work.

[@missrandom5430]

Ohh. I guess you're ahead and older than me. Well then. I wish you all the best

[@cloudyXeuphoric]

This is what I mean to say, when I talk about a perfect fanfiction

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You💜💜💜

[@rimilulaji4909]

This was a sad story 😢 but l love it 💜. Unnieee you are the best. Can't wait for the next story.

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You, sweetieee 💜💜💜

[@bdarmy_ro1588]

Ur ffs are so underated

[@user-rw1yu9pc5h]

You're an exceptionally good author but your music choice is also top notch!

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You💜💜💜

[@tvishaagarwal3018]

UNNIE! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS! how can you write soo amazing stories, as always, it was a masterpiece. Can't wait for the upcoming awesome stories. Borahae unnie 💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@tvishaagarwal3018]

@@missrandom5430 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@fehmidashaikh8120]

I was crying 😭 my mom started to get tention 😂

[@missrandom5430]

HAHAHAHA why watch sad ff, sweetie hile you're Mom is around? I can't with yoy HAHAHAHA

[@ShaSha-256]

Stop it’s illegal to write this awesome 😭😅😅 !!!!!!

[@Coffeekindagal]

I love you soooo much youre the best ff writer ever

[@missrandom5430]

thank you so much and I love you moree💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@zenia2310]

Curiously waiting for the next masterpiece

[@purpleaftons8438]

Your the best unnie sometimes I wonder I do u think of these ideas May I ask how old are u?if it's fine😅

[@LOVELYKPOP286]

All i can say us wow i have no other words to describe this it so sad but happy at the same time i loved it 😊 ❤

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@Sarah-Zhao]

I am getting confused here, I need a family tree please to get this on my mind! 😅 Ok I get now... 😊 But seriously my heart is so emotional 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Once again, I am not disappointed and falling in love with the author's magical stories ❤

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜

[@Sarah-Zhao]

@@missrandom5430 No, thank you for making me live the beautiful magical fantasy 😘😍☺😍😘😘😳❤❣️💝💕

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You for supporting me doing one of what I love to do💜💜💜

[@DeepakRout-lo3hc]

Its so good unnie 💜💜💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank you, sweetie 💜💜💜

[@taekook6115]

Another beautiful story

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You💜💜💜

[@milicavelisavljevic4582]

I love your masterpiece's so muc unnie😊💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You, sweetie😊💜💜💜

[@swatisharma-es9fk]

I can't wait for the next masterpiece 💜💜 Sarangheyo unnie💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuu and Nado Nomu Nomuu Saranghaee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@ritulal8071]

This is my new obsession

[@missrandom5430]

Sweetieee HAHAHA. Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@sakshikataria4479]

Can you make next part or a bonus please 💗💗💗it's me infront of my father. It's like so traumatic. I really like it . I want to see them 4 to be happy with eachother. Also the girl lj have to apologise to her . Please can you 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌼🌼🌼🌼

[@revathirevathi5281]

Always your ff make my tears burst out 😢😢but so good sissy 💜💜

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youu 💜💜💜

[@ashmikashiv4415]

Masterpiece ✨✨✨ , love it

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuuuuu

[@jinspinkslipper8133]

I swear i never really cry reading a book or ff hell i don't even cry watching a very sad movie but this shit i felt like i was really the one suffering and i freaking cried like a baby in this onee ....author u r so good at it like woowwww😮😮

[@missrandom5430]

Thank you so muchhh💜💜💜

[@pastikaluci4814]

i lobeeee it unnie

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You💜💜💜

[@ustadsahab618]

As always, I cried😢 but its so beautiful like it's real.... I followed your insta gram too😉

[@missrandom5430]

Thank you, sweetieee💜💜💜

[@ustadsahab618]

@@missrandom5430 but you don't seem that much active on Instagram 🤔😞

[@missrandom5430]

Yes, sweetieee. Unfortunately I forgot the password so I wasn't able to open it again😂

[@Lovelybeds3109]

This is so good keep up the good work 🎉

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@Lovelybeds3109]

Love u

[@missrandom5430]

Love you moree💜💜💜

[@Lovelybeds3109]

In thinking of starting my own ff challenge so wish me luck

[@RohitVerma-ut9cy]

It's a masterpiece l was literally crying 😭 while reading this

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@AgnivaModak]

Cant wait for your next masterpiece author

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@Yoentan_lover15]

Unnie I love your work but please try to upload fast I mean don't pressure urself but please try to upload more videos fastly🙂love you work ❤❤ Your lovely subscriber/Fan❤❤❤

[@missrandom5430]

Awwww you just made me smilee. Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜

[@Yoentan_lover15]

​@@missrandom5430 my welcome ❤

[@ibagaad2157]

I loved it bestie good to see u again 😊😊

[@missrandom5430]

Thank Youuuuu💜💜💜

[@Hadiya0110]

Damn, I won't be able to watch this masterpiece cause I won't be home at 7:00 pm❤😢

[@missrandom5430]

Wherever you're going. Wish you'll have a safetrip💜

[@Hadiya0110]

@@missrandom5430 I watched it, it's so good❤️ I was just going to a wedding that day, thank you❤️

[@facrojigawas1597]

UNNIE !!! You made me cry si bad 🤧😭☹🥺😣 Overall I loved it v. V.v.v. much❤

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You, sweetieee and peaceee💜💜💜

[@purpleday7792]

FRom stating to last I was feeling heavy heart and pain like I want to cry my voice cracked and don't know how and when I started crying and about the writter like how u know the real cousions sisters pain and somehow it's real to life like mine nd my cousion till the mid of story but I haven't seen the end but I guess I can happy ending till I graduate I font to be here

[@Dhinchakpoojaop]

You know what?? I won't even say anything about it. You already know what I am gonna say right??*takes in a lonnnngggg breath and..* ...I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING AND TAKE CARE😚🤧🤧🤧 💜💜💜💜💙💙💙💙💖💖💖💖it is still lacking the hearts I wanna give to you. Yk?

[@missrandom5430]

Thank you, sweetieee and I LOVE YOU MOREEEEEE💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@Dhinchakpoojaop]

Do you remember? The use of the account@the nature 5207.haha. Tbh my gf would accuse me of cheating as I never said I love you as many times I said to you to her. But still I can't resist saying it. You're the best ❤️

[@missrandom5430]

I can't with you HAHAHAHA. Keep showing your girl how much love her

[@Dhinchakpoojaop]

Sure..👌👌I will even make her read this and your ffs so that she can also say the same.👍👍👌

[@fehmidashaikh8120]

Can't wait to see 😻

[@ellise2601]

YESS UR BACKK

[@missrandom5430]

💜💜💜

[@littlelifetime8095]

Hope we have a part 2 plssssss....🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

[@neetigarg1032]

*Unnie aap ki writing itni achchi hai ki aapko jail ho jaani chahiye...* ❤❤💞💞 Translation( if you don't know Hindi) - Unnie your writing is so good that should be sued for that...❤❤💞💞 Like how can someone write this good??! Had me in tears, honestly✨✨ You know I'm also thinking about writing ffs on Wattpad but I don't have courage...🌹 But no matter what, your long duration ffs are so good like they always make me switch on my AC at 16 degrees so that my tears dry up faster hehe😅🤧

[@missrandom5430]

Awww. Thank You, sweetieee 💜💜💜 I wish you goodluck with your writing 💜💜💜

[@wlyisqkr]

You're things are so inspiring! It's such a masterpiece! I actually have a request for an ff if you can do it.... I was thinking if you could do an ff of Jimin: about how you're idol brother starts hating you because you're more popular, so you eventually get deep depression and commit su!c!de?

[@satishgoyal9281]

Please make second part

[@keerthanajayachandran6496]

Next part please

[@tejasriamruta3524]

waiiit im a princess ????

[@Malohalim17]

What happened to vmin at the end

[@laylamoriom9881]

It's so good 🥺🥺

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You💜💜💜

[@laylamoriom9881]

@@missrandom5430 💜💜💜

[@whosdeetya]

no offense, but don't you think facing all this at the age of 4 is too traumatic for a kid? if it was a teenager it would've been better, I guess. No person with a sane mind would do this to a 4y/o lol

[@Musicallife_ML]

Finally

[@purpleday7792]

M re reading it greatt😫😫

[@missrandom5430]

Oh Myyy HAHAHA Thank Youu💜💜💜

[@sharika._.]

How can you sleep with so much talent?

[@missrandom5430]

Oh My HAHAHA Thank Youuu💜💜💜

[@sharika._.]

@@missrandom5430 Wellcomeee💜💜💜

[@itzsalexzs]

I MISS YOUUUUUUUUUUU😢

[@missrandom5430]

I MISS YOUU TOOOOO💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@vante.07]

I'm heree

[@missrandom5430]

Thank You💜💜💜

[@lovelymahi7080]

Hi

[@missrandom5430]

Hello💜💜💜

[@lovelymahi7080]

@@missrandom5430 how are you dear ❤

[@lovelymahi7080]

@@missrandom5430 Hi how are you now I hope you are very nice I want to be friend with you please give me your contact number?

[@forampatel6879]

You are so good in writing...omo.. 🤍