Leave The 304 with NOTHING,,, SHE doesn't Understand what's going on,, Might have something to do with being a 304
@tomruch5015Ай бұрын
She drove away from the foreclosed house in a car that had already been repossessed??? WTH???
@JanNystrmАй бұрын
No confrontation, no divorce prosess, nothing about history, family, friends and children, nothing about her adventure with her co worker after returning in the morning, why she risk her marriage, what she thought. All of a sudden she was unemployed. Thumb down from me.
@jamaallittlebiggs736911 күн бұрын
agreed
@leonardlapidus78125 күн бұрын
No concept of reality. Foreclosure process, her job, money from 401k, the fact that she went out on a Saturday and back on Sunday (ie banking laws, business days) etc, etc. Truly one of the worst written stories. AND why would he take the food????
@stevetodd7030Ай бұрын
Eva and Lucas morphed into Susan and Brian.
@tomruch5015Ай бұрын
Yeah, what's up with the poor editing?!
@confoundedwolf1153Ай бұрын
Proofreading would be a great idea for a lot of these stories. I've seen some that repeat the same passages, with subtle changes.
@raymondmisegades7650Ай бұрын
What happened to her old job with Kevin?
@rayboothАй бұрын
Begins as "Lucas and Ava," then becomes "Brian and Susan." Very poorly written!
@chuckwheeler52396 күн бұрын
Yep. Miserable continuity. Job disappeared, cars come and go, no job to pay the mortgage ?
@randybergman7327Ай бұрын
What a lousy story can't even keep the names straight
@jimmyhumphrey657926 күн бұрын
I didn’t know you could take all the money and go🤷🏻♂️
@dougbrown6711Ай бұрын
Really you can't even keep the character straight.
@barryallender8694Ай бұрын
She's Garbage! How do you treat someone you love like this. She sucks!
@danishdude6750Ай бұрын
Good for Lucas.
@MentallectАй бұрын
Lucas stood on masculine business.
@Wilsondodger9 күн бұрын
Who is Bryan first it’s Lucas then it’s Bryan one of the worst stories iv ever listened to
@marcossmith5Ай бұрын
Green grass its not easy being green
@doulasmcrae255729 күн бұрын
you need to proof read your story lucas to bryan and eva to susan it is a crap story