IELTS 9 TOEFL 30 Full Essay: Compare

Not sure how to organize your ideas in a comparative essay? In this video we look at two approaches to a compare advantages and disadvantages essay with no opinion. We begin with the question, plan the essay, and work through the introduction, body and conclusion for an IELTS, TOEFL, or any other test essay.
Task: 0:40
Plan: 1:47
Intro: 5:03
Version 1: 8:00
Conclusion 1: 13:29
Version 2: 14:15
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What is the difference between a "comparative essay", and an argumentative essay?

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