Yandere Mafia Master's Possessive Twist | Criminal Underworld [M4F]

[@Xavier-Kumar43]

As much I love your work why was this video so demanding😯

[@ASMRYUTO]

Haha just the nature of it. Very well written story

[@zsaleicaanderson7605]

Well now that was a thrilling audio it had just about everything but you should be careful about obsession because that could blow up in your face. By the way I wonder if your thinking about doing something that I wrote that you said that it would be and honor for you to do and I said that the honor would be mine. Ah welcome back I hope your exams went well.

[@ASMRYUTO]

Thank you for listening. I did start your script it’s underworks currently! I’m curious what you mean obsession audios can blow up in my face

[@zsaleicaanderson7605]

@@ASMRYUTO I don't know what I meant by it. But it's really nice that you're working on something that I wrote truly it means a lot to me that your doing it. Could I ask which one of my scripts your doing or is it a surprizes or something like. By the way what did you think about my scripts.

[@ASMRYUTO]

@@zsaleicaanderson7605 It's the prince script you recommended. The only issue I see with the script is the lack of context for the listener. The idea is great, but some lines there needs to be more context to make the listener aware of what's going on. You included them in the parenthesis, but the listener usually doesn't see it unless they're directly reading the script with the audio which isn't always the case. That's the only critique I have, other than that the concept is very good.

[@zsaleicaanderson7605]

@@ASMRYUTO So other then the part with the listener did you like my script. Well you can add a little bit context for the listener but with in reason.

[@ASMRYUTO]

@@zsaleicaanderson7605 Yeah it's a very good part 1 of a potential series! Also the script I was working on is on hold I have other scripts I'm currently working on, but it is under the works.