Part 2 please!!! Makes the Wave and Chunin Exam arc interesting with the divergences from cannon. Look forward to see how those two play out if included.

Please make more parts

Is there more? Or is this it since dont know the name

Four Letter Words By: PurpleMoon3

Part 2 please 🙏🙏🙏❤❤

Can I have the name of the fanfiction author and fanfiction stories name please order the very least put it in the description box?

Part 2,3&4 pls

Chicken

Part 2 please!!! I love the divergences from cannon. Interesting that they took in Sakura; I understand she has motivation to get Naruto, but interesting choice. Also replacing Hinata with Hanna, and Hinata going for Kiba. Also the retreval team was interesting with the two clan heads replacing their clanmates. Made for too easy of a battle in my opinion.

Part 2 plsssss

So this story is what if Minato was a piece of shit

Please another part

name of the fanfic please

Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I do like the plot line I also enjoyed the character development I like how you deviated from the actual story and changed it up I do wish it was a lot longer I also hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work

So where is part two

The story is good but you need to re-title it. This one has nothing to do with Naruto find other things in the scroll and everything to do with him having a special eye

Part 2 please

What in the hell kind of parent does this? I was aggravated enough in the cannon. We allowed these fan fictions. They're still alive yet. They leave one baby behind. They're negligent and quite frankly. Even in Canon, menato was a s*** As far as being a father, no. He should have had his balls removed for what he did. And nobody ever makes allowances for the child when it gets older. The hell, the hokaga doesn't get paid or something like I believe that Naruto had an inheritance that was never given to him period Efing dot they were messed up people.

Omg what’s the link to this fic

This one is horrible, "embraced his dark half" gets tortured by 3 women and immediately forgives them and they magically become family. Why even make a "dark" story just to make it completely mushy and throw away the concept from the start

Please give me a label to search for this story.

I do like it, though give me a part two please

Why? The fuck do y’all keep on changing who people date so we’re just gonna forget about Boruto. What about

next part please

Next part please

Wasnt that how he made the dark half sane

Bro this isn’t even Naruto the character is so twisted, and if you’re gonna cop a FFN story at least post the link.

next part please

Part 2 please!!! Wow Team 7 is almost OP especially with a teaching Kakashi,, willing Saske and confident Hinata.

name of the fanfiction please

This story is so f****ed up a shit of a story first he hates them and then he likes them

Really man so much musheee stuff

whats the fanfiction

This story is well written. And I can tell the author put a lot of thought behind it, but to me, it's kinda flat because you've eliminated half of naruarto's struggle by keeping it a secret that he had the non tails in him. It just kind of like takes all the emphasis out of the. Original cannon, and I'm all for changing cannon. But it kind of killed this one. It just kind of ended up like it. The flow of the story's messed up because he doesn't have to struggle as much. That's just my opinion, I'm not trying to trash on it. It's just the story just didn't work as well for me.

Why did it turn into a I story🤦🏿🤬

Part 2 please!!!

Okay, rehashing the same old advents that happen in ornajust with little twists doesn't make it interesting.I was enjoying the parts that didn't go along with cannon , but when you just go right back to cannon and you have nartoacting just as stupid as he did in the original series , just with little twist that he knows a little bit more , but no , it doesn't make any difference. We've alread Watched it and read it, why go, along with the same events as Canon and Naruto pulling the boy away from everybody else to tell the story kind of deadens the effect. I know people want privacy but in this story everybody, realizing how bad Naruto had it Is what gave this story weight otherwise, it's just oh, he's talking to the boy, but nobody else gets what he's going through. It's just him kind of talking down to him. The younger kid who doesn't get life because basically he's a kid.

For those that it matters for, this is ANOTHER NaruHina story. It also does not bash Sakura. Odd combo tbh. Most authors that write NaruHina treat Sakura like the second coming of the devil. Anyway I've had my fill of NaruHina so ill pass on this story. Maybe in the next decade authors will start using more of their imagination on the pairings because this is just getting dull.

This Naruto is fvckn boring, irritating

Link please it is so goid

Please, please please please please please please please please make a part two 2:58:52

Bro, they basically just made Naruto Hinata

Tha'ts actually wild, copy and pasting a story from ffn into text to speech and pretending its yours is absolutely horrendous. And you didnt even post the link.

Part 2 please!!!

This story is bad because half of the story is looking for secret

Series

Can you make it a Series please

Can you do what if naruto was in food wars and can you make it so he never loses please 🙏

Next part asap please

Part please!!! Interesting combination for teams 7 and 8. Can't wait to see where they go.