Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like to plot line behind it I also like the character development and I tell you deviated from the normal story I do wish you was a lot longer I hope you come back make it part 2 and keep up the good work
@josh-f2b7 күн бұрын
omg pls pls pls make part 2-90 pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@thomasblanks284213 күн бұрын
Part 2 please asap.
@swapnilkumarroy149313 күн бұрын
Next part asap please
@swapnilkumarroy149312 күн бұрын
Next parts ASAP please
@WhatIffanfic10 күн бұрын
Namikaze By: Fhane
@grandswordindiangaming8 сағат бұрын
Part 2 plsssss
@jayr033121 сағат бұрын
Part 2 please
@babysasuke103513 күн бұрын
Pt2 plzzzz
@lachlantaylor945413 күн бұрын
Got the doughnut treatment😂😂😂
@JohnRhodesExirisRhodes13 күн бұрын
mas please😊
@anthonyhuffman16922 күн бұрын
This story is well written. And I can tell the author put a lot of thought behind it, but to me, it's kinda flat because you've eliminated half of naruarto's struggle by keeping it a secret that he had the non tails in him. It just kind of like takes all the emphasis out of the. Original cannon, and I'm all for changing cannon. But it kind of killed this one. It just kind of ended up like it. The flow of the story's messed up because he doesn't have to struggle as much. That's just my opinion, I'm not trying to trash on it. It's just the story just didn't work as well for me.
@user-bi8nd6hx5j13 күн бұрын
Part2
@inarigamer374510 күн бұрын
Please where is the link to the fanfic or the authors name and story