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@VivSingsCatalogues 14 күн бұрын

Thank you, this was lovely!

@janelanzo2582 2 ай бұрын

Thank you

@rogerholloway8935 Жыл бұрын

⭐ 'Promosm'

@monamerhi-ms9gi 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for this Video - Such a life Savior

@charlesonoja6738 2 жыл бұрын

Awesome video sir.....Please can i include extracurricular activities and is it going to add extra value to my statement of intent?

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

Yes, you can. Have it match what's in your resume, and phrase it as, "I am active in my community by volunteering at the local hospital" or whatever it is you do.

@sunnyswoon 2 жыл бұрын

You, sir, are changing lives.

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

Just tying to help improve lives.

@andrewkemp146 2 жыл бұрын

You used the diction of "being a dream of mine" a lot. Perhaps some variety in the word choice will add some variety and not sound as repetitive.

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

Sure thing. You could use other phrases like: "I've always wanted to..." "One of my goals is to..." "I have a strong internal drive to..."

@ecmz96 2 жыл бұрын

American living in Busan here, thanks for the video, its also cool that im writing admissions essays and you start talking about korea hahaha

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

Korea is awesome and Busan has some of the best seafood. Enjoy some Naju pears and be sure to visit Everland at least once.

@Daniel-tx2vt 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you this helped so much!

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

Glad it helped!

@monica198822 2 жыл бұрын

Where did he upload the copy of this to look over closely

@itsplayatay 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

You're welcome

@pchuru6734 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks for taking the time and for caring.

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

Our pleasure!

@Enlightenment1992 2 жыл бұрын

Your letter so small

@Virtual_Purple_Lily 2 жыл бұрын

Well, I was told that is not the right way to write a statement of purpose/intent

@dblackguy 2 жыл бұрын

What is the right way?

@eworitsemoghadore2362 2 жыл бұрын

Why the the person say that?

@brighteredadmissions 2 жыл бұрын

The person talking is the head of recruitment for a top 20 MBA program and has been in higher education for 10+ years. There may be slightly different advice depending on the competitiveness of the program you're applying to, but what he's covering here is solid.