How to write a statement of intent

[@VivSingsCatalogues]

Thank you, this was lovely!

[@monamerhi-ms9gi]

Thank you so much for this Video - Such a life Savior

[@sunnyswoon]

You, sir, are changing lives.

[@brighteredadmissions]

Just tying to help improve lives.

[@ecmz96]

American living in Busan here, thanks for the video, its also cool that im writing admissions essays and you start talking about korea hahaha

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[@monica198822]

Where did he upload the copy of this to look over closely

[@pchuru6734]

Thanks for taking the time and for caring.

[@brighteredadmissions]

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[@myajoy4627]

Extremely helpful!! Thank you so much.

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Our pleasure! Glad it was helpful.

[@janelanzo2582]

Thank you

[@Daniel-tx2vt]

Thank you this helped so much!

[@brighteredadmissions]

Glad it helped!

[@charlesonoja6738]

Awesome video sir.....Please can i include extracurricular activities and is it going to add extra value to my statement of intent?

[@brighteredadmissions]

Yes, you can. Have it match what's in your resume, and phrase it as, "I am active in my community by volunteering at the local hospital" or whatever it is you do.

[@confusedforextrader9181]

Thanks for the insight.

[@brighteredadmissions]

US higher education is complicated, so glad we could help.

[@Blessing_ofGod]

Great job sir, very helpful

[@brighteredadmissions]

Thanks for the feedback! Glad it was helpful.

[@sangramambhore2089]

Hello, I have to write statement of Intent for Job. Can you help me out?

[@brighteredadmissions]

Yes. We will make a video to that soon.

[@felpower1019]

That is great, but is there a way of getting in touch

[@brighteredadmissions]

You can email us at [e-mail].

[@itsplayatay]

Thank you

[@brighteredadmissions]

You're welcome

[@andrewkemp146]

You used the diction of "being a dream of mine" a lot. Perhaps some variety in the word choice will add some variety and not sound as repetitive.

[@brighteredadmissions]

Sure thing. You could use other phrases like: "I've always wanted to..." "One of my goals is to..." "I have a strong internal drive to..."

[@davidodia4603]

Yours truly 😁

[@brighteredadmissions]

Thanks!

[@Virtual_Purple_Lily]

Well, I was told that is not the right way to write a statement of purpose/intent

[@dblackguy]

What is the right way?

[@eworitsemoghadore2362]

Why the the person say that?

[@brighteredadmissions]

The person talking is the head of recruitment for a top 20 MBA program and has been in higher education for 10+ years. There may be slightly different advice depending on the competitiveness of the program you're applying to, but what he's covering here is solid.

[@Enlightenment1992]

Your letter so small