Amazing work man Suggestion- triumphant's cry

A New Tale

The Overworld

You should make a discord for the community

To me this one sounds like if hell froze over. Really cool! If you don't mind, what is the choir vst you used? it sounds Really good

Nice work! Lots of good suggestions here in the comments already so hopefully it helps you :)

Beautiful

wow, this is actually pretty good. most of the time other small creators like you have a good song, but then ruin it with some funky/off tune melody. but this is perfect, tbh i could just listen to the first part of the song by itself for a while.

whats the celeste bank?

So peaceful😮‍💨😮‍💨 Please don’t stop creating this is incredible!!!

that was immaculate

I love this so much lol

Ending music of Sonic fanmade games be like

If you want to continue it, I have an idea where maybe it's kind of like Spear Of Justice, but the part which is 36 seconds into the song.

Loop it then add an explosion sound effect

PLEASE add strings!🙏🙏🙏🙏

maybe go to the f major and stay down there for a bit, then when you come back to that main key and melody bring in some soft strings and some simple percussion. you could try giving it a medieval feel? just a suggestion if your running out of ideas.

sounds like the music you would hear before entering the final chapter of a journey

Skylanders beat! Love it!

Martin Christopher Robinson Jennifer Walker Brenda

Try adding a section of arpeggiated chords instead of chord blocks and it will sound epic

Minecraft

I don’t know music terms, but definitely make it more higher pitched than the others like the high point in the song and then slowly bring it down

bro tf is this shit (this "shit" is fire)

make it go "do do do" 😎

medival type beat

Epic bro

that sounds so good Im suprised, you could do many versions of this for different context ( like in hollow knight they use the Hollow knight's theme and make several other songs with different styles with moods based on the same melody ). This one kinda sounds like a memory or a dreamy song , you could do another more epic, slower with different instruments ( add some cello, orgue, ... ). doing that could even give you ideas of new musics with the same style for whatever project you make these songs for !

I think I'm hearing a ghibili melody almost

Add a third more complex filler line, which you gonna add on top of the other lines, instead of the final cadence. Then find a second motive and add it after, then you just gotta play with both motives.

Probably best to remove the end. Its probably giving you writer's block. Or shorten it and make it more emotional. Just a thought. Its really good. Good day

you put there like a very strong cadence, if i was you i would make that into a deceptive cadence, maybe repeated the section witch a violin, made a part B for that and just connected that witch an intro and an outro. Hope that helps :D

that sounds like a piano tbh (just a hunch) all jokes aside, that sounds nice! good work!

Sounds like "an ending" from undertale. Really cool.

sounds like how spicy food tastes

great vibe, love it

That's Awesome Man ! The atmosphere is incredible

amazing job dude 🫶

nice work! :O

I really love the collosal, ambient cave atmosphere of this one! The choir really does make the piece feel much bigger and wider, as if I am Steve inside a massive ravine in Minecraft! Also I saw you experimented with a new video format…

that is actually perfect ICE!!!!!!!!!!! 🧊🧊🧊🧊🧊🧊🧊🧊💯💯💯💯

Big video game score vibes 🎧

fossil fuels maybe even GAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sounds like music from Minecraft. I like it

really cool

Sure! If you have ANY composition, it's worth to finish it at some point. This is how we learn, grow, and do better. May I give you advise? Let it breathe a bit. If all your track intense, non of its part is. Without calm periods contrasting with aggressive you can't emphasize energy anywhere.

trojan war type beat

NEW DROP NO WAY

I don't know how, but as i was reading the story, it actually felt like the music was synced to it! The story and the music both were superb ❤❤

If it's on spotify, I WILL DOWNLOAD THIS AND FOLLOW YOU!!