That's all I write. I'm something of an idiot savant of subtext.
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
I’ve written a short story called “The Kung Fu Truth” starting Chuck Norris. It’s a light comedy and absolutely crazy I hope to refine it and submit it this year. Along with finishing 3 more short stories and outlining my novel
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
So I don’t own a computer or a laptop I just use pen and paper Should I invest in a laptop? Or desktop?
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
I don’t have kids and at 35 years old I don’t plan to have them And I’m glad it gives me more time to pursue my writing
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
U know what movie got me? Dead silence Anybody ever see that one? So underrated
@iabhvee692 күн бұрын
Best of luck authors !!!😊
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
They way I get out of writers block and overthinking Is I pretend my stories are my children and they’re caged in my head I tell myself I need to let them out onto the page It’s not fair to them to be locked away when they have so much potential lol
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
Something that’s notorious for not understanding subtext is: Anime smh I love it but read the room bro lol
@jermainerucker20272 күн бұрын
I feel the key to great story telling is “Wonder” Whether its a young woman from Kansas being swept up by a tornado and cast down in a world not her own Or a young girl painting the roses red because she just had to know why a curious white rabbit was in such a big hurry No matter what element of a story is present To me… It’s the wonder that keeps me there. “All the places you’ll go, where imagination sings. Never forget the true wonder of things.” Sorry I’m rambling in your comments section lol I’m going now lol
@TearMeOpenIBelieve3 күн бұрын
I was so distracted by that beaitiful painting at the beginning with the eyes lol
@laluenbaires5 күн бұрын
Thank you for this video. I'm 11 chapters into my first novel and I suddenly realized that I needed to know my characters better, this really helps so I'm doing this exercise right now and implement it in my characters. God bless!
@ellaillustrates93505 күн бұрын
I have no words to fully capture how invaluable this goldmine of a KZbin channel this is, Diane!
@user-if5zd2jf4j5 күн бұрын
Scratching his ears, he ponders as what to write to his stories. Many great ideas pops every minute and second inside his brain, but somehow it never comesout into the blank pages. It never came to life. P. S. I don't know if this is ok, but i tried. Any suggestions guys?
@vwengen8 күн бұрын
I have grown up really hating reading, it makes me tired and gives me a headache. I can’t focus and it’s annoying. I hear “read,read,read!!!” But I don’t want to. The times I’ve tried to read its never something I wanna read. I have tried and most popular books and books on shelves just are not my cup of tea. Ive found good stuff on random apps over the store.
@fun-damentals63548 күн бұрын
this is actually legendary for anyone wanting to get into writing
@ryushogun98908 күн бұрын
I'm trying to write one for the first time, but I constantly get stuck no matter how much I learn about different structures and exercises. My focus is on mystery.
@user-jk4qi2kq8r9 күн бұрын
AMAZING!!!
@MrNoucfeanor9 күн бұрын
I've come to terms with the fact that I'll never be a pro author but that's okay! I still have fun writting my literary garbage! ^^
@Laniakea33910 күн бұрын
These videos are amazing! Thank you!
@eduardmanecuta535011 күн бұрын
Thank you.
@eduardmanecuta535011 күн бұрын
Body language is different in different countries and also it is taken in consideration a multitude of gesture, not only one. For example someone could keep their hands in their pockets because they are simply cold, not because of some inner conflict. Thank you for your video. I found some intresting information.
@w1ll.h3lm12 күн бұрын
Se puede escribir una novela psicológica con este estilo?
@ilanahalupovich12 күн бұрын
I disagree. I read fantasy and SF to connect to reality. They make it possible to sharpen both the questions and the answers.
@d.l.mcspadden625913 күн бұрын
Did you say Chuck Pumpernickel? He wrote some of my favorite books. Slice Club, Choke on the Loaf, and Haunted Gingerbread House. Lol I love Chuck Palahniuk!
@The_OG_Twilight_Princess15 күн бұрын
You sound just like Belle from Beauty and the Beast. And your video really helps.
@rainbowrotcod15 күн бұрын
ah! I also keep a word bank!
@lisanidog817815 күн бұрын
When I was in my writing phase and the site was up I would put up my serial. It was a critique site. One person kept saying show not tell but would never say how. So each new story I tried to improve it and I finally got it. Then I ran out of ideas and stopped my serial.
@Ennpey15 күн бұрын
What an awesome video that really shows and doesn't tell
@thetiktokman16 күн бұрын
'her ass?' Gwen had a donkey? WTaF?
@corujisnocturnis16 күн бұрын
Im a litle sad and lost,i just love books like that,full of descriptions about a place or persona..for me,it was just an play of where to use it and when use it,but seing this as a "NO,no use it,its boring" really breaks my heart,i wanted so much to write like that..
@TassieDk16 күн бұрын
28:17 This sentence isn’t 100 % correct. The second “ should be *before* the full stop. 😊 Otherwise, it’s a useful and informative video, Diane. 😄
@QuotidianWriter15 күн бұрын
Thank you for your comment! In Chicago style, commas and periods go inside the double quotation marks at the end of sentences: cmosshoptalk.com/2020/10/20/commas-and-periods-with-quotation-marks/. However, having the period outside the quotation mark is common in British English!
@TassieDk14 күн бұрын
@@QuotidianWriter Hello. Thanks for replying to my comment, Diane. :) Okay, it looks like you're right; I stand corrected. :) However, the blog you linked to mentions that it's *almost* always done that way. Quote: "According to The Chicago Manual of Style, commas and periods are almost always placed before a closing quotation mark, “like this,” rather than after, “like this”. This traditional style has persisted even though it’s no longer universally followed outside of the United States and isn’t entirely logical." There are a few examples of putting the " *before* the period/full stop. I like that the blog post states that it isn't entirely logical. And I agree. It's not logical at all. In your example, I would write it like this: She had mentioned something about "taking her time". I'd say that the period belongs to the sentence and not the quoted phrase. If the same sentence was a piece of dialogue, I would write it like this: "She had mentioned something about "taking her time"." It's funny to me that the practice regarding this has gone back and forth a few times since 1904. It's also strange to me, that commas and periods are the only forms of punctuation that would go before the " in your example. I.e., it would be: Had she mentioned something about "taking her time"? I also find it funny that the reason for putting the period after the " is because of *how it looks*. If you ask me, I'd say that it's about time that the "rule" regarding putting the period after the " should only apply to quotes and dialogues that are opened with a ". I go by the "rule" that you should only end a sentence with a ", if you begin it with one. That's logical to me. Therefore, I'll just keep on writing it in the British English way, even though I write in American English. :)
@QuotidianWriter14 күн бұрын
@@TassieDk I always love encountering fellow grammar nerds! :) I totally get where you're coming from, and I've met several American writers who prefer the approach you described. At the end of the day, it's really a style choice and not a grammatical one. Either way is correct on a technical level, and consistency is far more important. I hope you'll continue standing up for what you believe in as a grammarian! ;)
@TassieDk13 күн бұрын
@@QuotidianWriterMe too. It’s nice to know that there are people who care about grammar as much as I do. I’m a bit nit-picky, but I think it’s only a good thing. It’s especially useful to have that level of attention to detail, if/when you plan to write and publish novels on your own. 😊 (General you and not you specifically, Diane.) Thanks for your reply. I think you’re right that consistency is key. And it’s nice to know that there are others beside me who prefer the alternative approach. 😄 I’ll keep on standing up for what I believe in. Grammar is a precious matter to me in English as well as in Danish. Side note: I think it’s funny that one of the great examples of why a comma before direct address is important is the same in Danish. There’s a big difference between “let’s eat, children” and “let’s eat children”. In Danish, these would be “lad os spise, børn” and “lad os spise børn”. 😂
@lw216519 күн бұрын
Two examples of subtext that I love are from Master and Commander: Far Side of the World. "There's three sugars in there" and "Steven, the bird is flightless. It's not going anywhere."
@Goku22720 күн бұрын
Nice. Was so much in need of this video
@kentjensen450421 күн бұрын
Your intelligence and talent is a lamp of amber light earnestly inviting us to sit on the chair and to put the pen to the paper.
@barbaras.751322 күн бұрын
Oh, wow. I just found out what kind of book I'm writing. Thank you! I always think it's great when someone comes up with a name for something I'm struggling with, because it means I'm not alone in this. It's so common that it needs a name. 😉
@matthope619322 күн бұрын
I love your views on all things writing. Could you do a video on when not to info dump and when it is appropriate?
@ollieanntan447823 күн бұрын
I'm learning Chinese and I found a Chinese book series aimed at learners. Each story tells an incredible emotional story or a mystery, yet using only the first 300 words they teach you. I wondered how she was able to bring these huge stories alive. How can someone write more emotionally engaging stories with only 300 words than some of the adult fiction I've read in English? This video helped me understand that she's describing the situations, and part of what makes it so interesting is you figure out for yourself what's happening underneath the surface. Excellent video, thank you!
@kristinasilverbears503424 күн бұрын
Relief, Mountain, least.
@listentonovels-hb7gh24 күн бұрын
Your channel is doing a great job and I have subscribed! I'm also working hard on creating audio novels, and my newly opened channel doesn't have many subscribers yet. I hope you can help recommend it so that more people can discover it.
@darksalmon25 күн бұрын
Tightly, my muscles twisted. As if to hold onto life itself, I struggled.... PffffffffrrrrrrtT ...please stay...
@somerandomguyplayingwithtoys26 күн бұрын
in answer to your last question: yes.
@princegollygosh26 күн бұрын
God awful voiceover which can't even be bothered to research how authors' names are pronounced. Shameful
@afghanpigeons688726 күн бұрын
Great info. Thanks Diane.
@v0n12z27 күн бұрын
colleen hoover needs to watch this
@bangaloreshydrohome586328 күн бұрын
I do think some genre will have more amount of telling than others...for example a sci fi novel set in 100 years in the future, If I keep descbing things then plot doesn't move...so it has to be fine balance..
@darkengine593129 күн бұрын
I always found it alienating as a reader when I encounter literature (such as in the case of McCarthy's works) which omits dialogue punctuation outright. It's for similar reasons that Jonathan Russell Clark cites in his article on why he deliberately excises quotation marks from his writing, except that I draw from similar rationale in favor of quotation marks rather than against. The writing seems flatter and the lack of punctuation often fails to visually prepare me for the mental gear shift I require to switch from the narrator's voice to a particular character's voice. There's a subtle impression I have as though the entire story is told in the narrator's voice; the prose and dialogue blur together in ways I generally find making the reading experience shallower and more monotonous to my eyes rather than richer and more varied. I figure it's all a matter of taste at the end of the day, but I strongly favor the inclusion of dialogue punctuation with quotation marks being my favorite (I'm not a big fan of quotation dashes). I prefer very explicit punctuation to very clearly distinguish where one person's voice ends and another begins. Actually if color printing is a practical option for a publisher, I suspect I'd even prefer dialogue to be written in a subtly different-colored text (ex: dark blue or dark red, nothing too attention-grabbing) to further distinguish it from the narration.
@soccerandtrack1029 күн бұрын
11:59 lots of daydreaming/alot.
@soccerandtrack1029 күн бұрын
11:30 the question just made me think of my main anti hero main person at the biggening.
@soccerandtrack1029 күн бұрын
14:23 the end of the character part =so i should try to show people new stuff. because my life is litterlly like a movie or tv show. Except now its boreing/me changeing though. My familly did the negitive character arc,or died because they DIDNT do the positive character arc like i did=2 seprete times=1 when was a kid. The other is when ac unity and watch dogs came out on the ps4, and the 2nd 1 was waaaaay bigger then the 1st/still happening.
@soccerandtrack1029 күн бұрын
8:22 i learned that from a random youtube video=now im makeing the house like in the past=sociall/adventure, instead of just anti sociall/passive aggresive attacks all the time.