Missed Hints : She gave me all the hints Heartbroken, with tears that vents But I was blind , Could not understand her mind I didn't hear But her heart's whisper was clear She wanted to give me her heart for free But guess what I didn't see I didn't understand anything Didn't even tried to make her mine Now I see, what was hidden from me Her love for me , her care for me She was admiring me from a far A shining star beyond the scar I got into her life like a scar But now she's healing , the memories remian still the same In her eyes , I saw the pain I'd caused Regret and sorrow , my heart now paused ! ~ Nipa
@aditishukla85395 сағат бұрын
1st time writing something..thanks for this help..so here's for my tae😭<3 His brown eyes and handsome smiles, Made my heart flutter like flies Just seeing him make me feel like I'm in heaven, Who would've knew love like this could happen. How's it guys?😭..pls tell
@UpenSaha-ii8xy7 сағат бұрын
Hey!! Today I wrote this after watching this video and it goes like - Your charming grin and bewitching hair The more I see, the more I want to care Being with you feels like I am in heaven Never knew it would happen The longer I waited The more I was hated Felt like you were mine But deep down I was just dying The lessons you taught me were worthwhile Would last for lifetime Now the time is over And my heart must recover I will never forget you Since the day I met you
@Wai5483 күн бұрын
Make more videos PLEASEEE
@jeanniephervasquez5973 күн бұрын
Thanks a lot.
@Kk-fs1wm4 күн бұрын
Idk how to feel about my first poem but i commented this to see people's opinions whether good or bad My favourite place to travel Bright pink trees Danced like these Waving like saying hi Makes me wonder why Is japan the place Where I'll embrace In that case I'll never try to replace This goal of my dreams Is more than it seems To be honest i can't understand a single word in my poem
@ARIELLASaromines8 күн бұрын
Omg, i just found this now😢 i have to write a poem for a composition, can someone give me ideas😢😢
@panktipalan629710 күн бұрын
Her black hair and beautiful smile Can take me up a hundred miles Being with her feels like I'm in heaven Our friendship is the best thing that happened
@ronafrancespuspus595213 күн бұрын
Thank you so much 🙏🏽💕❤️ but I just want to ask something can you make 3 stanzas with3 lines
@ImSigmaohio15 күн бұрын
Grabe yung words idol kahel sobrang nakakaiyak
@motmotsidheo118 күн бұрын
skibidi toilet is a channel. he rizzed up the big ben.
@kgokongdipuo19 күн бұрын
How was that so incredible ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😮😊😊😊❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉
@belieberforever85427 күн бұрын
How can u point out these important techniques so well?? It is really very very useful for our poetry embarkment. ✌🏼😇
@judemaecastano-jacildo9475Ай бұрын
Ty
@Random-g1cАй бұрын
Adrian is a great friend He was there for me time and time again Friends are forever just you wait and see For in the end friends are the magic key
@ompujari8552Ай бұрын
His dirty clothes, simple attire with sobby eyes Made me think and realise the pain and suffering he face and cries There is need to think how would he rise Farmer
@__.its.never_forever.__Ай бұрын
Y'all quick question!!! Can i write more than 1 stanza using this technique???
@MmggttgАй бұрын
this is my first ever poem, please help His little alcoholic eyes Had once made me smile, For what it was worth My laughter echoed in his girth
@Renard-ks6hjАй бұрын
wowww the poems in the comment section are so helpful
@SulaikhaS-y9dАй бұрын
It's buitiful in its greenery With its good looking scenery Here comes the breeze Making flowers sneeze Here's the leaves little whirl Making natuare a pearl
@Moonflower_shinesАй бұрын
Here we go Love is the connection of two heart, Love can be a hope that keep people alive, Not even evilness can pull lovers apart, Still in this evil world love survive. Depends on, who you admire, Love is honesty and trust, Sometime love can be fire, It is dangerous to love someone wrong, so prepared for the wrost. Finding love is finding enjoyment, Love is joy and emotion, Love is a happiness instrument, If you know how to play it, love can be fill up with sweetness. True love is rare, But it might be somwhere.
@Moonflower_shinesАй бұрын
I tried my best!!!😅
@samitomadeira-xx7ucАй бұрын
You tube Is the teacher that i use Gets me winning what i loose A share of an idea, a distant família, is like a vitamin that we refuse 🔥🔥🔥😝😝😝😝😝
@ananyamilky6455Ай бұрын
zindagi ke mele mein chehre toh lakho aane wale hain!!2! shaam dalte hi saare laut jaane wale hain thaam lenge , chod denge aise hi zamaane wale he!!2! tum yaar unhi ko khena jo barso baad kiye wale nibhaane wale hain
@EmeritaVillegas-o1cАй бұрын
Kahel can you make a poem that about a dog but it's a long poem
@MarcGomez-lu6ujАй бұрын
how to create essay
@JANNPRINCESSDIAZАй бұрын
His sweet and dazzling smiles, Captivated my heart many times. He showered me with his love and care, That it shivers me to find him rare.
@kaye_xxyАй бұрын
Thoughts keep ringing inside my head, Lying down in my soft bed, Feels like floating in the clouds, Wanna scream so out loud.
@chocolate_berry-j7xАй бұрын
😍
@domesticcat5069Ай бұрын
🗨️💣
@CherieAnnGornagoАй бұрын
So Amazing
@CherieAnnGornagoАй бұрын
Thankmu so much Sir
@urvashigupta2523Ай бұрын
His rose petal eyes Making me fall into eyes Telling me a figure of love To sink into his heart
@kanchumarthirathnam7927Ай бұрын
No need to shy
@vlalithareddy9100Ай бұрын
Good explanation 🎉
@Dilipgowda7002 ай бұрын
Tq
@belliapineda19982 ай бұрын
It was effective!!! Thank you!
@Joe-b9k5f2 ай бұрын
Oh your dog smiles...
@nhjkle2 ай бұрын
im not sure but i wrote this about my day today, seeing friends and failing a uni exam for the second time : "whether i like it or not fruits can rot, and their sweet taste i will not i've been here before another failed attempt another impossible quest i wish it were not"
@sonasingh83812 ай бұрын
*Your voice is so sweet and clear*
@jaydork58552 ай бұрын
Yeah, but you just described what bad poetry must look like. It’s all about the poetic meter .. but then poetry with no deep meanings, is also bad poetry. It’s all about the delivery
@ChrisAntonyThomas-vb7mr2 ай бұрын
Her dazzling smile and cheerful faces have not moved without any traces being with her feels like heaven she left without harvesting the seed she had sowen
@deepagupta13362 ай бұрын
In final poem you have written her ....... eyes but it was smile's
@prstudy3302 ай бұрын
Her dark brown eyes and long hair Her attitude is like she doesn't care, But if you try her to read She will be the only person you will ever need I wrote my first poem 😭
@shr1stii072 ай бұрын
Frie
@000-chatGPT2 ай бұрын
I broke the fourth, drowning in the sun - light. dark is my new favourite obsession. as i turn back, something seems so wrong. and i’m a ver que pasa in your shadowless white room.
@user-kw4mc3fq3q3 ай бұрын
For my father His black eyes with creepy smiles Can take me away hundred miles Being with him feels like I'm in hell His black eyes and creepy smiles Who would've knew this would make me cry
@Terrifying_af3 ай бұрын
thanks bro
@herrysart69793 ай бұрын
Okay so if i wanna write a poem about death i have to die 💀💀 just kidding nice vid thho ✅
@VahexThebigbang3 ай бұрын
Once glory of the Broken sun, left all none, only for one. Lying King a disturbed child, for which nothing made him smile. Realms of rain unending, history burial upended. Locked to see only the world husked, The Proxy of the Looming Dusk
@hemrajchalotra38993 ай бұрын
I became shkespeare because of this person only
@shauryadhoundiyal93 ай бұрын
Music can be pleasant, can be not, Some tunes are chill, while others are hot. Feeling it, as I`m in heaven, Where all emotions hide, in the garden' rate my poem on 1 to 10 thank you so much kahel brother you are the best and you help me alot