LEARN How to Write a Poem in just 3 MINUTES!! | Gawa ni Kahel

  Рет қаралды 720,333

Kahel

Kahel

Күн бұрын

Пікірлер: 798
@kkahell
@kkahell 3 жыл бұрын
HOW TO CREATE A TITLE FOR YOUR POEM IN 5 STEPS: kzbin.info/www/bejne/nn_dYXl9fbhrebs
@traquemoiselle203
@traquemoiselle203 Жыл бұрын
@madara4383I love this !! It’s actually a inspiration for me to get better at writing
@traquemoiselle203
@traquemoiselle203 Жыл бұрын
@madara4383 Yw !
@BattleCatswLingLing
@BattleCatswLingLing 9 ай бұрын
A little boy, Smiling in joy. His genius mind, Was very king. Sometimes naughty, sometimes annoying, But he was very enjoying. He couldn’t do his ABC's, But he could talk and type faster than a bee. Very clever and self caring, Something people were dearing. Diagnosed with multiple diseases, He didn’t care about them like cold breezes. Books, something he could find, Ready to expand his genius mind. Laughing, crying and living his life in joy, This is the story of a legendary boy.
@chocolate_berry-j7x
@chocolate_berry-j7x 4 ай бұрын
superb😍😍
@jadenaomixx
@jadenaomixx 2 жыл бұрын
If my love was a sunset It would include the moon Vast, bright and colourful To which I look forward after noon A blossom in the summer time A bumble bee on a beautiful flower A warm gentle breeze of hugs Of a never ending hour The soft reassuring forehead kisses In wake of the night turned blue In my mind you are eternity In my heart there's only you
@ynchan1645
@ynchan1645 2 жыл бұрын
Omg if you sent this to someone they would go crazy this is beautiful 👏👏
@jadenaomixx
@jadenaomixx 2 жыл бұрын
@@ynchan1645 thankyou!
@ninofrance2589
@ninofrance2589 2 жыл бұрын
Is this your own poem? So beautiful
@jadenaomixx
@jadenaomixx 2 жыл бұрын
@@ninofrance2589 yes 🥰
@Haneen_1107
@Haneen_1107 2 жыл бұрын
Amazing
@johanjordaan7678
@johanjordaan7678 Жыл бұрын
My beautiful mum with green eyes. Seeing her smile is such a surprise. Her smile is rare. She sheds a tear.
@OliviaCaris-yz6um
@OliviaCaris-yz6um 3 ай бұрын
OoO
@macywarren8969
@macywarren8969 Жыл бұрын
This is one of my first tries at a poem idk how I feel about it but I thought I would put it on here to see what people think Her head overflowed It wanted to explode she kept crying out But she was in a a drought Slowly dieing,she pleaded out to me But sadly I could not see She explained it in every way she could But she was just misunderstood She told them she was trying to stay awake But they thought she was a mistake Every way she looked It had her hooked They thought it was the winter blues But it was all the mental abuse They said it was an excuse But what about the bruise It wasn’t physical But it was critical She prayed to god Hoping it wouldn’t be fraud The longer she waited The more she was hated Broken in pieces The pain increases
@Miguel-nb6lo
@Miguel-nb6lo Жыл бұрын
Good job 👍
@lordaurelius83
@lordaurelius83 Жыл бұрын
Holy fuck that was so cool 👌👌
@hirdaytyagi9359
@hirdaytyagi9359 Жыл бұрын
It's just lovely 😍
@xioameile1652
@xioameile1652 Жыл бұрын
Damn, that took oxygen away from me
@zee-ql8bl
@zee-ql8bl Жыл бұрын
Damn.. it's really beautiful!
@boredsav5379
@boredsav5379 2 жыл бұрын
Her blonde hair flows through the breeze Being with her makes me feel like I'm on a trapeze My heart gives a flutter as she looks my way Her presence lights up my entire day
@yhunizgandia4
@yhunizgandia4 2 жыл бұрын
"Her blonde hair flows through the breeze, being with her feels like I'm on a trapeze" would you mind if I use this for my school project, it is so pleasing to my ear
@zainabmasood8449
@zainabmasood8449 Жыл бұрын
it is a warm poem😍
@boredsav5379
@boredsav5379 Жыл бұрын
@@yhunizgandia4 Oh shoot I'm so sad I never saw this of course you can
@johncarloracho6724
@johncarloracho6724 Жыл бұрын
​@@boredsav5379😂😂😂
@forgottenfronts6945
@forgottenfronts6945 Жыл бұрын
sounds like a mixtape from the 1990s frfr
@JANNPRINCESSDIAZ
@JANNPRINCESSDIAZ 4 ай бұрын
His sweet and dazzling smiles, Captivated my heart many times. He showered me with his love and care, That it shivers me to find him rare.
@Information_by_ted
@Information_by_ted 2 жыл бұрын
I did it 😭 "Her dazzling smile and cute eyes Backed up a million Lies, Which I heard many time Felt like I was tasting a lime, I thought you were mine Deep down I was just dying"
@Tulip77777
@Tulip77777 Жыл бұрын
Amazing!!!❤️✨️👍🏻
@tsarmyworld6388
@tsarmyworld6388 8 ай бұрын
Bro 😮
@cafe8681
@cafe8681 2 жыл бұрын
Let's be clear here I've always had this fear. I will never blame you For this is nothing new. You whispered me sweet words A small break from this dying world. Yet I would never let them stay seated Fully knowing they've been repeated.
@muhamedal-hirz786
@muhamedal-hirz786 2 жыл бұрын
You have a thing for poetry - keep going. This is only thing a could write : Your beautiful smile and dazzling eyes Left me with nothing but ugly lies If only I knew the truth I would not have wasted my youth.
@notjackolio
@notjackolio Жыл бұрын
@@muhamedal-hirz786 that’s deep
@AngelMary998
@AngelMary998 10 ай бұрын
@@notjackolioreal deep
@AngelMary998
@AngelMary998 10 ай бұрын
@@muhamedal-hirz786You have something for sad poetry
@kimkimi8094
@kimkimi8094 Жыл бұрын
The sun rays glistened, The world heard and listened To the chirping. With cold wind blowing, The air's still crisp; And you caught a glimpse. As the planet of love smiles To you who cries. This is from me who woke up early to finish my assignments and gave up, cried and looked outside my window (English's not my first language so i apologize for the mistakes:)
@franchescavilla1412
@franchescavilla1412 3 жыл бұрын
I feel bad for some people who haven't discovered this video yet.
@deetyascreativeworld8023
@deetyascreativeworld8023 3 жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/ZoPXZX6hq79-mKM
@mikelpelaez
@mikelpelaez 2 жыл бұрын
I have just discovered it
@poison9605
@poison9605 2 жыл бұрын
I have to submit my English project of making Freestyke poem in 2 days any ideas pls
@Vi-in7yh
@Vi-in7yh 2 жыл бұрын
@@poison9605 solitude, hope, friendship
@bellefrancisco13
@bellefrancisco13 2 жыл бұрын
I have to make a filipino poem about want’s and need’s and deadline today and discovered today
@shaneleguna4414
@shaneleguna4414 Жыл бұрын
First time writing a poem You caught my eye. As of a burglar with jewelry. Not with your crow-colored hair. Or with eyes that shimmer, Even in the night. But with your giving soul, And your heart so full of life. But until the seas dries out, When the sun will cease To share its light. When we can count every star, In the dark blue sky. Or when we meet our end. Only then I will confess, With a highly-strung heart. That you are my inspiration The definition of pure bliss The person who ive longed And my true love Feel free to interpret
@hanaelkalla4733
@hanaelkalla4733 Жыл бұрын
It's beautiful you have that shine in you ! keep it going
@Villieyn
@Villieyn Жыл бұрын
*My mother* She loved me through my thick, And she loved me through my thin She showered me in love And hugged me tight in my low She cared for me even when i hurt her And taught me to be braver She taught me how to dress, And even how to brush She taught me how to solve when i mess up, And taught me how to speak up She was with me in my first's, And i hope she will be with me in my lasts It's my 1st poem, i tried my best! I did use many reference lines and i know it's cheating😅
@psychokings4708
@psychokings4708 5 ай бұрын
dammmmmm soooooo goood you should try more
@maryeswin5932
@maryeswin5932 Ай бұрын
That last line is great
@tanzeelsartisticworld1860
@tanzeelsartisticworld1860 26 күн бұрын
Being with friends was such a charm. They didn't allow on me any harms. But due to the distance we parted our ways. But those memories will last a lifetime my heart says.
@MohamedMahmoud-hr9mm
@MohamedMahmoud-hr9mm Жыл бұрын
the blue eyes and and white fur i would always love her she was always my true pet but other pets she hasn't met. that was an easy stanza!
@NicoleGirao-Azevedo
@NicoleGirao-Azevedo 23 күн бұрын
The peaceful sounds and smells of the colorful leaves, make everyone want to wear long sleeves, the chilly air preparing for winter, fall will leave, and snow will come.
@AnuSpeaks
@AnuSpeaks 2 жыл бұрын
Wow. This is how I write poems. You exactly thought everyone the same way. What a precise breakdown. Wish I have a teacher like you.
@RunitBackBoys
@RunitBackBoys Жыл бұрын
My first poem: The dusk crimson coffin lay. The body frail, here to stay. Crowes scream perched on nearby graves. As night swallows the sunshine haze. Her heart sank knowing this was the end. Shaking violently as she try to mend. No more words to say to me. My soul shrivels, did she love me?
@tiarac243
@tiarac243 Жыл бұрын
Oh, I liked this! You've perfectly described that eerie, desperately romantic atmosphere within the first two lines, and I just love "As night swallows the sunshine haze" for some reason
@rust1c.___art
@rust1c.___art 4 ай бұрын
ain't no way this is your first poem, i am truly impressed!
@xiexie-ug3di
@xiexie-ug3di 9 ай бұрын
It’s intuition and creativeness Gives me motive and intellect Drawing feels like being alone in a room With nothing left but my thoughts A burning passion in my heart Filled with nothing but Art Bringing me joy where I go
@artificialpankake4835
@artificialpankake4835 2 жыл бұрын
Time does pass us by very fast, Only a moment's pause,dawn is dust But the moments we had will surely last, Till the day these bones are dust. Now it's here and i can't believe That time has passed so quickly... But through your encouragement and guidance I feel I'm ready for tomorrow's challenges Days can go on incessantly And we've made such,the days which can't be forgotten. The lessons you taught were worthwhile Would last a lifetime. The time i joined here i was planted, And now I'm leaving with everything perfected.
@limkahchuanmoe3072
@limkahchuanmoe3072 8 ай бұрын
Why did you change it it was perfect
@yraaaaablaxk
@yraaaaablaxk Жыл бұрын
Her dazzling short hair and her pretty smiles Can put me up a thousand miles Being with her feels like i'm in a heaven No one knew exactly this would happen. It was unexpected that I would be this broken I loved her so much to the point that i would Do anything to be chosen. I was so desperate for an answer that i would Give my life for her Now I know to be careful with my actions Because it would just lead to humiliations. I learned to move on forward and focus On what mattered I now moved on from what happened in the past I am now happy and free at last. I made a poem about my past being so inlove with my classmate haha
@petrazivkovic8844
@petrazivkovic8844 Жыл бұрын
“What are friends? I feel like every friendship always ends Maybe they weren’t a good match So that made them detach” Its my first time I am kind of proud
@zainabmasood8449
@zainabmasood8449 Жыл бұрын
Yeah, it is worthy to be proud of👍
@mattdoesmma633
@mattdoesmma633 2 жыл бұрын
She took me for granted Now my heart feels like an empty canvas We should’ve never intertwined My heart still feels she’s mine It made me feel dead inside Can’t stand the sight of her pretty eyes Might make these into a song
@rhema2699
@rhema2699 2 жыл бұрын
Dude this is awesome
@rhema2699
@rhema2699 2 жыл бұрын
Turn it into a song
@josephinemateo2553
@josephinemateo2553 2 жыл бұрын
This poem is so simple and yet painfully beautiful.
@rhema2699
@rhema2699 2 жыл бұрын
@Joe The Poet sure , Where do i see it ?
@basratchowdhury4945
@basratchowdhury4945 2 жыл бұрын
would love this as a song
@WittyWriterN
@WittyWriterN 11 ай бұрын
This is my first time that I've written a poem I've never written any poem before.. She's cute little 🎎doll with pale skin. Attractive and fit with sharp chin. And it motivated me to do exercise. Now, I train daily to improve the Size. I'd love to get Feedback❤❤.
@ewn789
@ewn789 Жыл бұрын
Wish all youtubers taught like you. Btw u r one of the best tutors on KZbin.
@Marialovesjesus19
@Marialovesjesus19 Жыл бұрын
The beauty of a sunrise is crazy, It look like a daisy with all the yellow shades, And now I’m sitting here writing this promenade.
@abdessamadbizare
@abdessamadbizare 2 жыл бұрын
I thought the poem is hard but because of you it's not now . thanks💙💙
@ChrisAntonyThomas-vb7mr
@ChrisAntonyThomas-vb7mr 5 ай бұрын
Her dazzling smile and cheerful faces have not moved without any traces being with her feels like heaven she left without harvesting the seed she had sowen
@Music.Hub123-b8p
@Music.Hub123-b8p 8 ай бұрын
Her blooming flowers, and colorful leaves, dance around in the breeze. Her breathtaking landscapes, put me in a trance. I wish I could take, one last glance. Her warm embrace makes me feel at home, a place I can finally call my own. Her calm dormant fields, make all bad thoughts become repealed. Her golden sunsets glisten in the sky, I'm sad but now she has to say bye. I hope that soon I will see you again, till tomorrow when all begins again.
@riddhi2835
@riddhi2835 Жыл бұрын
He was the first guy who made me feel this way, I just think of him at night as I lay, He was like the charming stars up in the dark dark sky, I will always have a part of me which will love him till the day I die.
@Urfavvyass
@Urfavvyass 6 ай бұрын
❤❤😢
@FinerMist133
@FinerMist133 2 ай бұрын
Damn this dude created a masterpiece in the matter of minutes😢
@shayaniriyal5790
@shayaniriyal5790 Жыл бұрын
Reminiscence of you, moistens my fretful eyes with nostalgic tear drops....... The path I traverse without you brings me nothing but utter flops......... Similar to an imperfect task which had not taken the name of god...... Pal, your token of friendship is the foremost thing I could afford.....
@agifatougai5797
@agifatougai5797 Жыл бұрын
You stepped on my heart, And passed your art, You make my face a river, And took the pieces oh driver, Your guts make me shiver, And you didn't even leave the liver.
@tikkispotsonmiraculous5283
@tikkispotsonmiraculous5283 Жыл бұрын
My first try My childhood Holi morning No worry for tomorrow morning Thinking of preparing for tomorrow adorning Bring my colours and balloon conforming Every moment in your mind recording Lots of colour in hand secretly storing For next Holi left colour warning I am missing my Childhood Holi morning ❤❤❤❤😊
@Kim-ln2ni
@Kim-ln2ni Жыл бұрын
Student life, a journey bright, a world of wonder, a path of light, a time to learn, to grow, to coup, to reach for stars and come alive. Days filled with lessons, books, and notes, challenges abound, conflict to clear, tests to take, exams to fear, but with each step, with each succes, a sense of progress. as student life unfolds, future awaits, a canvas of hope, a world to overcome, a life to scope, a journey to treasure, a life to dare.
@ujjjwalsingh7704
@ujjjwalsingh7704 2 ай бұрын
Worst poem 😢
@virgolani8969
@virgolani8969 2 ай бұрын
"Be like water my friend , You Put water inside the cup it becomes the cup "
@alarria1183
@alarria1183 Ай бұрын
Waking up with sun streaming I must've been dreaming Since the sun hides behind a mask of grey Feels like everyday
@persoon5051
@persoon5051 2 жыл бұрын
Here is something I wrote. English isn't my native language, but I wanted to quickly try it out. All we do is climb We reach for the stars, jump to see the moon, aim a million miles ahead. Tomorrow comes too soon, Yesterday seems too far Today goes by too fast, And we never go to bed.
@HaNa-lk8np
@HaNa-lk8np Жыл бұрын
You really taught so well in a short span of time. Thank you. My first poem I saw this lost girl She had those beautiful curls Her eyes pleading me to help Her voice pleading along with a yelp I held her small timid hand Guided her to the path she needed to land Looked twice at her Realizing it was me, I was her I am this lost girl --- Me (Hana)
@Leviiii-yy
@Leviiii-yy Жыл бұрын
❤wowwww
@akiyakuuzawa3241
@akiyakuuzawa3241 Жыл бұрын
Are u kidding me ? OH MY GOD YOUR POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL 💗💗
@HaNa-lk8np
@HaNa-lk8np Жыл бұрын
@@akiyakuuzawa3241 Omg thank you so much. You made my day😭💗
@HaNa-lk8np
@HaNa-lk8np Жыл бұрын
@@Leviiii-yy Aww thank you sooo much💗🥺
@Fluerlix
@Fluerlix Жыл бұрын
YOUR POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL OMG
@apekshamakwana12
@apekshamakwana12 3 жыл бұрын
I had to write a poem for my oral test...this helped a lot...thank you ✨
@devikaa000
@devikaa000 Жыл бұрын
I couldn't breathe, my heart was racing It was behind me, pacing. Through the lines of the road dark it was, I couldn't see a light of a crowd.
@shabanaquadri4719
@shabanaquadri4719 Жыл бұрын
His words of support kept me alive Took me out of those deadly nights Makes me smile till my tears roll down Idk why that unknown feels like my own
@Indstuff
@Indstuff 11 ай бұрын
Their happy faces and their high hopes Even if I fell down a slope Even if my grades are low Still they knew I would grow Their happiness was such a pleasure That I felt I found treasure The treasure that gave me happiness That I was left with no unhappiness And im a 10 y old
@WittyWriterN
@WittyWriterN 11 ай бұрын
@panktipalan6297
@panktipalan6297 3 ай бұрын
Her black hair and beautiful smile Can take me up a hundred miles Being with her feels like I'm in heaven Our friendship is the best thing that happened
@onyebigwamirabel6143
@onyebigwamirabel6143 2 жыл бұрын
This was extremely helpful! I just came up with my first stanza, and I feel motivated alreadyyy. I was to work on a poetry assignment, and I have never tried writing poetry before. But your tip was amazing!
@ReaperOfSouls
@ReaperOfSouls Жыл бұрын
Shaped by the ways of life. By whom who carrys a knife Be aware, be very aware If you take a life without spare For karma is but a woe Not a friend nor a foe Not a thing nor a thought But is something that fought For the justice of all No mater how big or small Karma is but a woe To those who are a foe
@hanaelkalla4733
@hanaelkalla4733 Жыл бұрын
my first try (wanted to make it about love for country) My first love and the place my future smiles The grace and motherly love my heart desires My birthplace, Oh my bloodline is in debt to you for sure And for my foolishness you are the cure
@hanaelkalla4733
@hanaelkalla4733 Жыл бұрын
(2nd attempt) (pls give me advice on how to improve) Oh mother of the the world my first love and where i said my first word If i had know about the development you possessed i wouldnt have hesitated about you ,looking all stressed your left may be outshining your right but that will never be right You should stand for what's true even if the others hate you for the next one hundred nights
@Ermwhattheskibidi-e2l
@Ermwhattheskibidi-e2l 8 ай бұрын
The violence of war is deep Makes millions of souls weep The tears fuel it more The starters think it makes there heart roar But their minds are torn.
@reshidabegam1271
@reshidabegam1271 10 ай бұрын
I watch you from afar So in love with your heart Your beautiful brown eyes They glimmer in sunshine You are such an alluring sight My soul clenches in desire I want to hold you in my arms And protect you from all harm When I'm with you, it feels like heaven Our bond, it's beyond lives of seven
@L-a_zy-gi_rL.....
@L-a_zy-gi_rL..... 10 ай бұрын
My very first time: dream If i could Live in a dream; i would never be alone Live with friends who understand me all ; we could play, we could sing , we don't worry 😊 , staring at moon all night, if i could Live in a dream; the world will be happy
@rosemistt
@rosemistt 2 жыл бұрын
She was suffering, with so much pain She faked a smile again She was mentally not stable Her mind was numb Not a single person understood Her problem Her heart sank to the bottom She blamed herself for everything Her thoughts were the scariest thing Sometimes she smiled Sometimes she cried Never have I ever understood Her mind
@Randomhooman16
@Randomhooman16 Жыл бұрын
That just gave me goosebumps 🥺
@RipaMorame
@RipaMorame Ай бұрын
I'm learning English and I want to write a poem. Thank you.
@xilamgamer1708
@xilamgamer1708 Жыл бұрын
Here's a poem written by me to thanks the youtuber I know it's weird Please give feedback to improve it For your this lesson of poem, That you taught so easy as foam I am thankful to you about you taught I hope others could also plot In the end I would say to you I am really thankful to you
@shauryadhoundiyal9
@shauryadhoundiyal9 6 ай бұрын
Music can be pleasant, can be not, Some tunes are chill, while others are hot. Feeling it, as I`m in heaven, Where all emotions hide, in the garden' rate my poem on 1 to 10 thank you so much kahel brother you are the best and you help me alot
@lyricaldreamer_1213
@lyricaldreamer_1213 2 ай бұрын
GOLDEN DAYS All muzzy in my brain, I want to feel them again, Now.. I think i just Have a fragment of them. I wish those days to comeback And feel the fun we had. Now I ended up writing a ballad for which I miss those old days, I envy those children who are living there golden days. Now I sit and watch the Golden hour, Missing my Golden Days
@someone8174
@someone8174 Жыл бұрын
she only delivers perfection, when will I go in that direction? I just want a little light on me, why can’t I just let her be?
@divychoudhary9027
@divychoudhary9027 9 ай бұрын
Once we were like two peas in a pod. Her voice, an enchanting Nightingale's song, Compelled me to nod. Her laughter and cheerful, vivid memory were so strong, They eroded life's pains and discord. But in a moment, everything was gone, And I'm still waiting like a moron. Without you, nothing feels like home. The joyfulness from her presence has gone. But I'm still waiting like a moron
@panagiotazodhiatou3354
@panagiotazodhiatou3354 Жыл бұрын
OMG! Everybody must watch this. It is really helpful!😊
@BonnieMIRINGKE
@BonnieMIRINGKE Жыл бұрын
this is the best English teacher ❤❤❤❤
@angelpergis3921
@angelpergis3921 Жыл бұрын
Thankyou po sa tips, I can write more poems!! 🥰
@Ikkitsune
@Ikkitsune 2 жыл бұрын
You made it so simple to understand omg thank you so much!
@sajithashahul5357
@sajithashahul5357 2 ай бұрын
Any indians
@azadgaming142x8
@azadgaming142x8 Ай бұрын
Yup where are you from
@SonaliTate-p9d
@SonaliTate-p9d 25 күн бұрын
Yes bro 😊
@BasitShafi-o5j
@BasitShafi-o5j 18 күн бұрын
Yes bhai❤
@dulumonideka6334
@dulumonideka6334 11 күн бұрын
Hey Bhai!!❤
@bilwmawary6036
@bilwmawary6036 3 күн бұрын
Yes bro
@hezov7938
@hezov7938 Жыл бұрын
Her cherry lips , her white smiles They've hidden just so many lies It wasn't real, it wasn't good I just felt misunderstood. ~
@noname-ru1qz
@noname-ru1qz 3 жыл бұрын
Omg this helped so much I think I'm now going to start writing poems as a hobby lol
@enjoyingpoetry-rizalelsarif
@enjoyingpoetry-rizalelsarif Жыл бұрын
Your tutorial is very useful for developing a culture of writing poetry
@Minnat123-nb5ok
@Minnat123-nb5ok Жыл бұрын
Hey, thank you so much for such wonderful tips I won second prize in a poetry contest yesterday following your amazing tips!😊
@mallory8986
@mallory8986 2 жыл бұрын
When he said 3 minutes, he's not joking.
@davidlaya939
@davidlaya939 2 жыл бұрын
He also wasn’t joking when he said it wasn’t clickbait
@kaye_xxy
@kaye_xxy 5 ай бұрын
Thoughts keep ringing inside my head, Lying down in my soft bed, Feels like floating in the clouds, Wanna scream so out loud.
@chocolate_berry-j7x
@chocolate_berry-j7x 4 ай бұрын
😍
@anugyashrivastava1066
@anugyashrivastava1066 2 жыл бұрын
His pretty smile and shiny eyes, can take me up a hundred miles. Looking at him makes my heart pound, I get butterflies whenever he's around.
@dayalpandey2786
@dayalpandey2786 2 жыл бұрын
Wow it is really amazing
@anugyashrivastava1066
@anugyashrivastava1066 2 жыл бұрын
@@dayalpandey2786 hey thankyou 🥺❤️ I wrote one more similar to this one, you can read if you like :) I Often Wonder- A swift look into your eyes like a blessing in disguise; Shortly in an instant, Some unknown feelings had arise. I found there a glimpse of us Perhaps it was nothing- but rather sus I often wonder if it's really something Or am I just making a fuss? So many unsaid things had impart, Too many feelings in the heart The obsessing thought of, Never wanting to be apart. I snapped back to reality And looked right away; It all happened so quickly Wish I could make it stay.
@Rohit50181
@Rohit50181 9 ай бұрын
Her beautyful smiles Mady my day everytimes, And the confidence she owns Give goosebumps to my bones Whenever I look at her I remember the past times Thank you
@smoochiepoo734
@smoochiepoo734 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! This really helped me with my English class because we have to write a 2 stanza poem tomorrow. 😊 Thank you guys for the 22 likes! ❤️‍🩹
@foreverlyrics5246
@foreverlyrics5246 3 жыл бұрын
Same 🥲
@luizzzpogi2049
@luizzzpogi2049 3 жыл бұрын
My teacher made me do 8 stanza
@fihanson1
@fihanson1 2 жыл бұрын
I have two write an 8 stanza peom for my homework today
@cocoanutz4361
@cocoanutz4361 Жыл бұрын
i Have to make a visual poem 4 stanzas.
@corrupt8120
@corrupt8120 3 жыл бұрын
your sarcasm and energy brought yesterday's tomorrow to a day where I'd not trade nor let someone borrow
@abxhbnot
@abxhbnot 10 ай бұрын
I'm her because i want to express myself better to the person i love, not because im incapable of expressing emotions but i feel as if the emotion, the love im showing her isn't enough, i have truly fallen for this girl.
@storyspice974
@storyspice974 7 ай бұрын
-I lay in bed after waking up from a nap -My mind is at peace while my body is relaxed -The warm connection is like a couple in love -These feelings float to me like a angel up above
@Mmggttg
@Mmggttg 4 ай бұрын
this is my first ever poem, please help His little alcoholic eyes Had once made me smile, For what it was worth My laughter echoed in his girth
@Meiii475
@Meiii475 Жыл бұрын
The place where we entered crying Hearing our parents sighing, Without a clue of what’s new This place is like a heaven for few And hell for new But soon we all adapt and enjoy this hue To immerse in all our dreams To see our teachers in gleams This place is like no other Classes filled with chaos and smother Leaving with a heavy heart, Oh to shine like a bright star, I’ll be here again in another avatar
@learnwithdoraemon13
@learnwithdoraemon13 2 жыл бұрын
The burning sunrays and lushly branches of mango tree Eating tiffins with friends full of chips and brownie Being late for clas after short break Hunger made us sneak the remaining cake Waiting for the bell to ring Rushing for outdoor as fast as having wing Swimming and Skating were the most populated But one of them used to close as winters originated Participating in athletic meet and annual function Enjoying night stay with friends due to participation This school made enhance our skills And also together visiting hills I have wrote this poem on my own because out teacher gave us SEA (Subject Enrichment Activity) which is of 20 marks and I hope I will get full. The topic was Choithram School (Our School).
@mydogcausewhynot7753
@mydogcausewhynot7753 Жыл бұрын
Poem: "Love" Nobody loves me, Not like I do, Even if no one loves me, I only need me, not you, You can love me though, It won't matter though, If you do or don't, No matter the pain or despair, I can heal, I can repair, Be a place in my heart, As though we can't be torn apart, Nobody loves me, Not like I do, I only need me, Not you. - Unknown 12 year old
@xioameile1652
@xioameile1652 Жыл бұрын
It's amazing bruh
@beauty3567
@beauty3567 Жыл бұрын
As another 12 year old , i can relate . Great job bro ,its good
@guillermocortes50
@guillermocortes50 9 ай бұрын
This Really Helped me Out to create a Essay and told my friends to Watch this Video because they don’t Know how to write a Essay LOL 😂
@pictlandpickers1171
@pictlandpickers1171 Жыл бұрын
American Mercedes Captured by your beauty from your head to your feet, Fallen head over heels with a girl cute and sweet, Pondering the options which life should i choose, Exhausted as all were don'ts and none were doos, Life's baggage have left us a world and oceans apart, Forever a 3 pointed scar will mark my weeping heart
@daphne6812
@daphne6812 3 ай бұрын
I just did a short poem!😊 “You and your heavenly blue eyes I never thought I would say goodbye But I guess I have to leave you behind Cause now you have another girl on your mind”
@Kk-fs1wm
@Kk-fs1wm 3 ай бұрын
Idk how to feel about my first poem but i commented this to see people's opinions whether good or bad My favourite place to travel Bright pink trees Danced like these Waving like saying hi Makes me wonder why Is japan the place Where I'll embrace In that case I'll never try to replace This goal of my dreams Is more than it seems To be honest i can't understand a single word in my poem
@bouchra3565
@bouchra3565 Ай бұрын
It's beautiful and simple and cute at the same time I like it , how are you doing now , do you see other progress in writing poems ? I will show you mine what do you think of it tell me your honest opinion ! They say if you wakeup without goals go back to sleep But why do I look at this sentence with a way so deep It's like they all have their purposes in their eyes And I'm the only who's feeling happy that she even survives It's like you're the only kid who still hasn't picked up after school It's like when you still awake at 3 am when everyone's sleeping so cool Replaying conversations and situations when you didn't know what to say Swearing that you'll be a whole new person the next day And I'm not joking when I say that all what I overthink about Is answering the question"where do you see yourself in 10 years"without any doubt
@Kk-fs1wm
@Kk-fs1wm Ай бұрын
@@bouchra3565 its a very beautiful poem of yours i love it it has a very deep meaning
@bouchra3565
@bouchra3565 Ай бұрын
@@Kk-fs1wm thank you so much yours is too , good luck with poetry dear
@AEOKAPI
@AEOKAPI Жыл бұрын
bout to use this for my poetic rizz
@SemEspaço
@SemEspaço Жыл бұрын
You sir, is a legend, thanks for this helpful video :D
@AlexVar-os5lk
@AlexVar-os5lk Ай бұрын
Her beautiful smile That i can see in a thousand miles Being with her feels like im in heaven Who would knew that i have fallen
@EyeBallWritesStorys
@EyeBallWritesStorys 7 ай бұрын
Thanks for the easy lesson. It really helped refresh my mind on poetry. Also sorry to hear about you dog. May she rest in peace and be forever remembered!
@sakshibijarnia6490
@sakshibijarnia6490 Жыл бұрын
Thank you! Your poetry steps are really fantastic
@escapingperil
@escapingperil 2 ай бұрын
His golden fur and long ears, Which are met with glee and happy tears, For bunnies like him are as pure as the sun, But oh how they are quick to run. (Just a part of the poem because its a short story about how looks can be deceiving, and i didnt want to bore you)
@mu_zicc
@mu_zicc Жыл бұрын
I can't believe I found this coz this is just great!
@Wasted-Vessel-Sloth
@Wasted-Vessel-Sloth Жыл бұрын
Such a beautiful world to live in Though what a ugly thing is sin May we all change our minds For the world is where our lives binds
@SulaikhaS-y9d
@SulaikhaS-y9d 4 ай бұрын
It's buitiful in its greenery With its good looking scenery Here comes the breeze Making flowers sneeze Here's the leaves little whirl Making natuare a pearl
@CyberCarsJC
@CyberCarsJC Жыл бұрын
The only teacher that helped me
@Trix_yza
@Trix_yza 11 ай бұрын
Mga matang kay lambing at himig ng boses na kay lamig Puso ko'y di mapigil sa pag pintig kapag ika'y aking naririnig Kapag ika'y aking naaalala kalungkuta'y biglang nawawala Kaba at takot ay di alintana Kahit na ang puso'y parang kabayong nagwawala (Sa fil. Kasi to😔 pero di ko suree kung tama ang ginawa ko😭)
@ribarra1238
@ribarra1238 Жыл бұрын
Missing the days of pure bliss and joy Growing up only knowing how to destroy Trying to fix everything In the end we try forgetting Just a boy who wants his life Struggling to keep himself alive Not wanting to hurt others All he sees is the worse Everyday feeling like his days are all rehearsed All his friends were all just bunch of jerks No friends but enemies No good memories By me
@shubhomitadhar9162
@shubhomitadhar9162 9 ай бұрын
Her black hair and beautiful eyes made me feel like I was in paradise. Her smile always made me happy But her leaving the world made me unhappy. - Shubhomita Dhar
@ryelydude
@ryelydude 2 жыл бұрын
His smile was as bright as the hair on his head. Looking down with dread, he let out his last breath of air. He felt cold and alone, his tears flowing like the river below. He laid there waiting, knowing the rails would take him away. Lucas was his name.
@giuqvy
@giuqvy 2 жыл бұрын
Her personality and Her smiles dazzle through the night, Listening to her voice makes everything go right, Flowers bloom because she is sunshine, Because of her I am fine.
@allunazeros6040
@allunazeros6040 Жыл бұрын
Bro this was beautiful, salute✨
@bouchra3565
@bouchra3565 Ай бұрын
This is mine : They say if you wakeup without goals go back to sleep But why do I look at this sentence with a way so deep It's like they all have their purposes in their eyes And I'm the only who's feeling happy that she even survives It's like you're the only kid who still hasn't picked up after school It's like when you still awake at 3 am when everyone's sleeping so cool Replaying conversations and situations when you didn't know what to say Swearing that you'll be a whole new person the next day And I'm not joking when I say that all what I overthink about Is answering the question"where do you see yourself in 10 years"without any doubt
@thetoasterkid8555
@thetoasterkid8555 3 жыл бұрын
This was extremely helpful thank you for teaching me (:
@UpenSaha-ii8xy
@UpenSaha-ii8xy 3 ай бұрын
Hey!! Today I wrote this after watching this video and it goes like - Your charming grin and bewitching hair The more I see, the more I want to care Being with you feels like I am in heaven Never knew it would happen The longer I waited The more I was hated Felt like you were mine But deep down I was just dying The lessons you taught me were worthwhile Would last for lifetime Now the time is over And my heart must recover I will never forget you Since the day I met you
How to Read and Write a Poem | Learn English Poetry with Homework
10:22
Shaw English Online
Рет қаралды 146 М.
When you have a very capricious child 😂😘👍
00:16
Like Asiya
Рет қаралды 18 МЛН
СИНИЙ ИНЕЙ УЖЕ ВЫШЕЛ!❄️
01:01
DO$HIK
Рет қаралды 3,3 МЛН
1% vs 100% #beatbox #tiktok
01:10
BeatboxJCOP
Рет қаралды 67 МЛН
how to study less and get higher grades
11:16
Gohar Khan
Рет қаралды 1,6 МЛН
How to write better song lyrics (for beginners/noobs)
7:35
Annie Dang
Рет қаралды 1 МЛН
Student's viral poem asks 'Why am I not good enough?'
6:01
ABC Television Stations
Рет қаралды 22 МЛН
How To Write Spoken Word Poetry with Savannah Brown
5:22
Penguin Platform
Рет қаралды 184 М.
How To Write Poetry For Beginners | 5 Easy Tips To Start Writing Poetry
20:25
Analyze ANY Poem With These Steps!
6:59
Ms. Peer Editor
Рет қаралды 316 М.
Good Poetry VS Bad Poetry
7:46
Sam Pierstorff aka Ninja Poet
Рет қаралды 321 М.